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Pokemon Titanium White

Game Master

Pokemon:Battle of the Elements
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    • Seen Jan 2, 2009
    Hey Everyone!
    I'm starting a game called Pokemon Titaniun White.

    Starters: Charpeg, Vernam, Leafpaw
    Country:Innos
    Starts: Town of Shersan
    Proffesor Ake
    Mascot of game(ex. Diagia for Diamond) Chartitlian
    Ememy: Team Dyansty

    So what do you think?

    Update!
    When your character get lost in a new town, he is taught the way of the pokemon. One the Epha Cube is taken by a mysterious force causing all the legendary pokem to cominde causing chaos
    I'ts up to you to save the world!
     
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    Wichu

    Wichu

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    "Legendary fight" isn't really the best plot... You might want to improve it. Why would the Epha Cube cause it? Has it happened before? And why is it up to you? Surely, more experienced trainers, such as Gym leaders or the Elite 4, would be the best choice... You could always use the "chosen one" plot device, but if you do, you'll have to go into detail. Lack of an evil team sounds interesting, though.
    As a final point, you might want to rethink the names. The starter names sound too generic, and Chartitlian doesn't make sense and is too long (Pokémon names can be up to 10 letters long).
     

    CyberCleanZeen

    Sean.
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    • mm, no. not feeling right now. no costructive advice. can't think.
    this is practically a pointless comment but im not sure how to delete so sorry about that.
     

    Game Master

    Pokemon:Battle of the Elements
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    Starters: Pickacu(I cant spell it), Vernam, Leafpaw
    Country:Innos
    Starts: Town of Shersan
    Proffesor Ake
    Mascot of game(ex. Diagia for Diamond) Darrceu
    Ememy: Team Dyansty

    So what do you think now?

    Update!
    When your character get lost in a new town, he is taught the way of the pokemon.
    The legendary Epha cube is taken. The Epha cube keep the world in Harmony. Team
    Dyansty take it to Sky Pillar and summons Darrceu pokemon of time and space.
    Mor updates later
     

    Game Master

    Pokemon:Battle of the Elements
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    • Seen Jan 2, 2009
    yes and look at my new thread it is better...this is closed
     
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