Pokemon: Trainer Academy

[dajman1996]

5 years after Red defeated the Kanto Pokemon league, he and the Elite 4 of all the regions found an Island enough to house a couple 1000 and came to an agreement to open an Academy for trainers aged 15-18 to improve their final skills of being a trainer.

Since the mass amount of students in different levels as a trainer the Headmaster Blue decided to split the students into houses, there were 3 houses depending on the students level, named after 3 legendary Birds, Blazing Moltress, Sub-Zero Articuno and Lighting Zaptos.

The Acadmey is currently enlisting for 1st and 2nd years for a enterance exam at their hometown for their placing in the academy and house.


The Houses

Sub-Zero Articuno: Mainly known as the house of Legends, mainly the best trainers that aced the written and battle entrance exam proceed to this house, the house is split between Boy and Girl Dorms which each person get's their own room with all the luxaries such as a T.V, own bathroom, own room service and any choice of food.

Head of House: Proffessor Blaine (Retired Gym Leader, teaches most of the first year and Second Years.)


Lighting Zapdos: For those who had achived a high score but not enough to enter the Articuno house, their either aced the written or the battling entrance, they may have to share a room with another and the rooms are medium sized enough to put a desk and some other extra things. Has a pre-set menue but a large varity.

Head of House: Misty (Retired Gym leader, teaches P.E and is a sub to some lessons.)

Blazing Moltress: For those who managed to get 51% on both of their exams or just don't have the potential to be a trainer. Usually have to share a room with 2 other people in a small compact room that can only fit a desk, a pre-set menue with not much to choose for at all since it's the same meal nearly everyday.

Head of House: Brock (Retired Gym Leader/Pokemon Breeder teaches some lessons)


Been watching too much Yugioh GX so this is were I got the idea from.


SU Form:

Name:

Age:

House:

Apperance:

Personality:

History:

Pokemon 1:
Move-Set: (Note: Moves can be changed later by TM's)

Pokemon 2:
Move-Set:

Pokemon 3:
Move-Set:

Other things to know:

Store: Sells all the trainers needs from Potions to TM's

Rules:

1. No godmodding other Rper's or CPU's immediate boot.
2. Not too much language.
3. Relationships are allowed but no above PG.
4. Only up to 3 Pokemon per trainer (No final evolutions, I'll pm you if your Pokemon can evolve.)
5.No winning streak I decided if the attack hits miss and if I'm battling I'll need a 2nd in charge to decide a miss or hit.
6.Have fun!


My SU.

Name: Brendan Wallis

Age: 16 (Second year)

House: Blazing Moltress

Apperance: Brendan has spiked black/raven hair and his skin colour is pretty fair, he wears a black tracksuite tops with black tracksuite bottoms and runners which he usually wears all the time beside a suite for occasions and pyjamas for bed.

Personality: All out going which makes him make mistakes while battling, he can be all confident and cares about having fun but usually a fault can be detected in him, but he battles for the thrills.

History: Growing up in Little Root town Brendan just played around with his Pokemon pretending to become the champion, he watched Red become Champion on T.V and saw his battle with Brock, Brendans mother and father are Mart owners who sell items to passing trainers that have arrived at the Hoenn.

At the age of 15 Brendan entered the entrance exam and got 64% on the written and his mistakes during the battle with Blaine which Brendan won made him into the drop-out house Blazing Moltress.

Pokemon 1: Charmeleon (Pyro)
Move-Set: Flamethrower, Slash, Metal Claw, Ember

Pokemon 2: Pikachu (Sparky)
Move-Set: Iron Tail, Quick Attack, Thunderbolt, Double team

Pokemon 3: Riolu (Cub)
Move-Set: Mach Punch, Force Palm, Low Kick, Quick Attack

 

[Silent the Lucario]

Name: Rukimaru Hikari

Age: 15 (First Year)

House: Lightning Zapdos

Apperance: He has a t-shirt that shows a Feraligator using Superpower most of the time also wearing black skinny jeans and a mysterious orb around his neck. He has Silver eyes and grey hair which if you look closely switch when the orb around his neck glows.

Personality: He is mostly laid back but's when it com'es to battleing he goes all out not showing one shred of mercy making most battles go his way unless that person isn't scared of him since he act's like he is possessed. He is always training with his pokemon away from the houses and you will often a hear an explosion when he is training signifing that his pokemon are using their strongest attack. No one's seen him at his strongest but, if he ever does need to do his best. You better not be around unless your the person he facing in a pokemon battle unless you want to get bblown away.

History: Rukimaru lived in a Mansion by himself since he only fought the best of the best and ususally had Ra-chan use Thief on his opponets steal their Pokemon's hold items which usually cost a lot of money. He won by cheating and one day someone fought him and beat him. They showed him the error in his ways and they showed him the pokemon acacdemy. He faced Blaine in a battle His Pidgeottto vs Blaine's Arcainine. He beat Blaine but he got a C+on the written test so he got put in the Lightning Zapdos house. To this very moment he is still angry but glad that he didn't get put in the drop out house.

Pokemon 1: Ra-chan (Rattata)
Move-set: Hyper Fang, Thief, Quick attack, and Thunder

Pokemon 2: Crocanaw
Move-Set: Super Power, Surf, Hydro Pump, and Slash

Pokemon 3: Pidgeotto
Move-Set: Fly, Aeroblast, Arial Ace, Wing Attack
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Polished enough :D

 

[Cookiez]

Name: Dylan (I coulden't think of a last name)

Age: 16

House: Lightning Zapdos

Apperance: Short Blue hair , 5 foot 7 Wears ripped jeans and a black t shirt

Personality: Usually Happy

Battle Style: Offence (I just wanted to add)

History: Lived in SnowPoint city until he was 13 then can't remember anything...

Pokemon 1: Pokabu
Blast Burn, OverHeat, Wild Bolt, Body Slam

Pokemon 2:Munchlax
Move-Set: Body Slam, Mach Punch, Thunder (lol) and Shadow ball

Pokemon 3:Zangoose (Slash)
Move-Set: Shadow claw, Slash, Brick Break, and Crunch

Okay but it was actually more detaild but my internet messed up and i diden't to have to type ALL of it again so i'll just edit later

 

[dajman1996]

Ok Silent you could have had a little more detail but I'll say your on hold but if I see something better you'll be out unless you want to polish your SU.

Now for Cookiez my advice for you is to look at other SU's in the other Rp threads see how detailed they are either your new and I'm reccommending this or your just not dedicated enough to create your character for an Rp which is really important for example your characters personality usually happy, and your history is just not even trying like how did you get into lighting Zapdos and I could rant on all other things about your SU and what kind of academy would accept someone with no last name so either you do your Rp SU research and polish it up really good cause I'm a nice guy giving you a 2nd chance but for now declined. And don't even think about posting here again edit your post cause I don't want you to spam the thread for the RP.


On another note for other Su'ers wanting to sign up please be more detailed in your SU.

 

[Nimblethumbs]

Ill join,and ill start my su. Will post soon.

 

[dajman1996]

so basically reserved k but it better be up and good

 

[Zamorak]

Name: Chell Fitzsimmons

Age:16[second year]

House: Articuno

Appearance: Lightly tanned Caucasian female with black hair that goes down to just above her shoulders. Her hair also has streaks of blue and red throughout and is about 5ft 8in tall at 160lb. She normally sticks to wearing hoodies and with a dark shirt underneath, also wears white running shoes with jeans.

Personality: Chell is someone who enjoys few things, top among them is reading, which accounted for her high test scores. She also has trouble trusting other people which makes it hard for her to make friends, although despite trust issues she is a fairly kind person. She has extreme trouble paying attention to other people, no matter how how hard she tries to concentrate on others. She is also able to come up with great tactics and such if given the time to think which attributed to her success on the battle portion of the test. Despite being a relatively kind person she is someone who can easily become angered by others and is kind of a [bad word] when shes angry.

History: Born into a family with two parents and one sibling[six years older] she had a happy life while she was young. When she was 7 her father got her the buizel that she nicknamed Sea and has kept Sea with her ever since. When Chell was twelve her sister moved out, and during the same year she caught her poocheyena which she soon after nicknamed Spike. A little over a year later Chell was involved in a car crash that ended her parents lives and left her to be taken care of by her older sister. Chell soon left her sister's in order to become a pokemon trainer, and although she wasn't very good at first she quickly learned common trainer tactics and invented several effective ones of her own. She caught her sandshrew when she was fifteen and nicknamed it Stone. Very soon after catching Stone, Chell joined the Academy.

Pokemon 1: Buizel[nickname: Sea]
Move-Set: Aqua jet, Quick Attack, Agility, Pursuit

Pokemon 2: Sandshrew[nickname: Stone]
Move-Set: Rapid spin, Defense Curl, Scratch, Poison Sting

Pokemon 3: Poocheyena[nickname: Spike]
Move-Set: Bite, Howl, Tackle, Sand-Attack

 

[649]

SU Form:

Name: Lulu Dorsinger

Age: 12 (first year) [please make an exception in age, Lulu is a genius, and has proved herself to be one]

House: Lightning Zapdos. Lulu has shown amazing intelligence, and was one of the few to ace the written exams, however, she is an extremely nervous and shy girl, so she did bad on the battling exam. The Academy has decided to accept her, in the hopes she will overcome her stage fright. This has not happened yet, but a few people have noticed her training, and they were extremely impressed by her perseverance and strategy. Hence her being in Zapdos house.

Apperance: Lulu always wears a plain overall, ending in a skirt. Underneath, she wears a lacy dress, sometimes blue, sometimes pink, sometimes yellow. She has a bob cut, black hair. Sometimes, she wears a white bow tie at the back, but this is only when she is feeling particularly adventurous. She always seems to look down at the ground. She has dark blue eyes, a petite nose, and a small mouth. Being a little girl, she is only 4'1". She wears rain boots, interestingly enough.

Personality: Lulu is a genius. She has excelled in everything academically, however, she is very nervous and shy. She has never spoken up in front of the class, not even once. As a result, few people actually know her, but if they did, they would know her to be a very positive battler. She has a lot of perseverance and motivation to continue being successful, but she hasn't found comfort in being with people. She will only show her true feelings to her best friends. She currently has none at Zapdos, being new.

History: She lived at Fukiyose City, Unova, with her loving parents. She was always an outcast. For some reason, she was the kind that preferred playing by herself. She made a few friends in 2nd grade at the nearby academy, with great difficulty. But they were the best of the best friends, and she would always be with them. She refused to talk to others, always talking through her friends. She has never shown any real prowess, until her teacher took her to have an IQ test. Her IQ was 180. She has also shown amazing teamwork skills, with her friends. Due to this, she skipped several grades, and her parents moved her to another school, for the gifted. She was later moved to an exclusively Pokemon Academy, this one, for her skill and motivation with Pokemon battling, which only a few teachers have noticed.

Pokemon 1: Focus (Seadra)
Move-Set: Focus Energy, Dragon Pulse, Brine, Smokescreen

Pokemon 2: Teamwork (Exeggcute)
Move-Set: Leech Seed, Solarbeam, Reflect, Light Screen

Pokemon 3: Willpower (Darumakka)
Move-Set: Fire Punch, Cheer Up, Yawn, Superpower

Hope this is good!

 

[New2]

Name: Andrew "Andy" Felman
Age: 17 (First Year)
House: Sub-Zero Articuno
Appearance: He has frazzled and spiky short hair, about an inch in length, and unnaturally dark blue eyes. He keeps his hair pasted over where his left ear should be: it is missing because he has microtia. He has a chiseled face and a long neck. Andy has a muscular runner's build, and stands just shy of 6' 1". He often wears athletic shorts and sweats, and a plain black T-Shirt. He occasionally wears a dark blue sweater but always wears beat-up cross-country shoes, a dirty black in color.
Personality: He is hasty and reckless, often scolded by authority figures for his reckless ways. He is never tardy, and very good at sports. One may think he would be burned out from his constant energy and quick movements, but he is never seen panting or out of breath. Andy is always lively and energetic, but is often hard to keep up with in a conversation. His friends have a hard time keeping up with him, and his Pokemon even more so. Andy dislikes slower people, and likes pushing himself in every way possible, from sports to exams to battles. His competitive nature is what drives him.
History: His real family passed away in a fire when he was 3, and he was taken in by Mildred Felman (a world class Pokemon breeder who discovered several egg moves for Psychic, Fire, Electric, Grass, and Water), and has lived with her ever since. He was pampered, but not to the point of being a spoiled brat. However, he does have an issue when he does not get what he want when it comes to sports or Pokemon battles, adding on to his hasty and competitive nature. He was well educated, and received a 91% on the exam, as well as thoroughly besting the battle exam. The donation Mildred Felman donated didn't hurt either.

Pokemon 1: Torchic (nicknamed Crimson)
Agility, Reversal, Mirror Move, Flamethrower

Pokemon 2: Maggyo (nicknamed Squishy)
Yawn, Double Team, Earth Power, Boiling Water

Pokemon 3: Chobomaki (nicknamed Edges)
Yawn, Endure, Bug Buzz, Sludge Bomb

Other Things To Know: If you talk to Andy from his left side, he will not be able to hear you.

PS: I LOVE Yu-gi-oh GX. It was the only one I really felt attached to, and that is a really awesome idea!

 

[for him.]

Name: Mel Howards (Female)

Age: 15 (First Year)

House: Blazing Moltres

Apperance: Mel has long black hair that is tied back into a ponytail. Her eyes were a shade of a common brown and she doesn't have much of a height because she is paralyzed from the waist down. She wears just a simple black gown with a red sweater, socks, and her fuzzy slippers.

Personality: Mel is an independent person and will not allow anybody to help her even when it is obvious that she needs it because of the fact that she hates being treated like a fragile doll just because she is confined to a wheelchair for the rest of her life. She also hates it when people underestimate her just because she is in a wheelchair. Mel doesn't like it when people start talking about a person behind his/her house and would tell him/her if she has a problem with him/her. She doesn't tolerate immature behavior such as bullying and will defend anybody who meets the end of it. Mel hates quitters because she was one herself when the doctors told her that she would never be able to walk again. What Mel detests the most is athletic sports because she can't play any. She dreams to be a good trainer like her sister aspired to be. She is a moderate fan of reading, but doesn't read too often because most of the books released these days are bad.

History: She lived in the Hoenn region with her father, mother, and younger sister. Her father was a human doctor while her mom was a defense attorney. Her sister, Nina, was younger than Mel by three years. When Mel was eight the family got into a car accident that took away her ability to walk and the death of her mother, father, and sister.

She had stayed in the hospital for about a month before the doctors told her that she would never be able to walk again. This had crumbled her hopes and dreams to become a coordinator. She soon went into depression and stayed at the hospital as a permanent resident instead of going to Fallarbor town to live with her aunt and uncle.

After seeing Sapphire Birch become the new champion of Hoenn, Mel regained her hope. She changed what she wanted to be, from a coordinator to a trainer, to live in her sister's place. A few weeks later she went to move in with her aunt and uncle.

She didn't do too well on her exam only managing to grab a 41%, but she had managed to defeat Blaine, the proctor for the battle portion, and managed to gain a high C+.


Pokemon 1: Wartortle (Andy)
Move-Set: Water Gun, Aqua Tail, Rapid Spin, Ice Beam

May was her father's Pokemon to begin with and Mel remembered being with her all her life. Andy and Era were usually seen babysitting Mel and Nina. When her father died he was willed to Mel. Because of the fact that they have known each other since Mel's childhood, they are very close. Andy keeps a thin scarf, with a fragment of an ever stone attached to it, around his neck because he has no intention of evolving.

Pokemon 2: Snorunt ( Snow White or just Snow)
Move-Set: Shadow Ball, Ice Beam, Protect, and Ice Fang

Snow White was a Pokemon that Mel had befriended a little before she was discharged from the hospital. Before taking resident at the hospital, she was abandoned by her trainer for another powerful ice type. Snow White liked Mel so much that she decided to go with Mel to Fallarbor and eventually to the academy.

Pokemon 3: Eevee (Era)
Move-Set: Shadow Ball, Iron Tail, Double Team, and Quick Attack

Era was Mel's mother's first Pokemon. With Andy, she was often seen babysitting Mel and Nina. When Mel's mother died she was willed to Mel. Since they knew each other ever since Mel was a child they have a close bond.

 

[MeerFall]

My form

Name:Alix Tiger

Age:16

House:lighting zapdos

Apperance:umbreon costume, scares on legs.

Personality:competative, blames herself alot, eat all the time (or tries to), hates to lose.

History:saved her first pokemon umbreon from a zapdos at the age of five, family left her at the age of six in her house,

Pokemon 1:Umbreon (male)
Move-Set: bite, faint attack, physic, moonlight

Pokemon 2:riolu (male)
Move-Set: copycat, quick attack, drain punch, counter.

Pokemon 3: rapidash (male)
Move-Set: flamethrower, fireblast, flare bliz, fire spin.

 

[Silent the Lucario]

Name:Alix Tiger

Age:16

House:lighting zapdos

Apperance:umbreon costume, scares on legs.

Personality:competative, blames herself alot, eat all the time (or tries to), hates to lose.

History:saved her first pokemon umbreon from a zapdos at the age of five, family left her at the age of six in her house,

Pokemon 1:Umbreon (male)
Move-Set: bite, faint attack, physic, moonlight

Pokemon 2:riolu (male)
Move-Set: copycat, quick attack, drain punch, counter.

Pokemon 3: rapidash (male)
Move-Set: flamethrower, fireblast, flare bliz, fire spin.

That's way too short. Your character needs a lot more detail than that! Go look at all the other SU's and you'll see what I mean :D

 

[MeerFall]

Name:Alix Tiger

Age:16

House:lighting zapdos

Apperance:she wears a black french hat with homemade umbreon ears sticking out, a black top with a yellow circle, black trousers with a yellow circle on each leg, black trainers with a yellow circle on each made by a highlighter, she has scares on her leg with she always covers up with her trousers. black hair with yellow highlights,red eyes which she was born with, and white skin. she wears dark glasses that cover her eyes.

Personality:even thought she works best indenpetly, she hates to be alone. She always eats whether its good or bad. she has low common sense, her eevee ponits it out by growling 'eeeeeeeeee' or biting her leg.She doens'nt sleep easily, she puts pokemon in front of herself, but can be very compectative. She often enters compertions that inclueds prizes or rivels. she always kepts her eevee out. she cries if other people cry.

History: at the age of 5, she saved eevee when it was attacked by a zapdos, but got injured badly. the eevee helped her home and became her first pokemon. a year later after her sixth birthday her parents left in the middle of the night but never came back. she looked after herself with the help of eevee. they were never evitcted or abdopted as many thought her as 'alien' or 'monster' because of her eyes. she left her house at the age of fourteen to start a journey, always wearing her glasses. she found an egg abanded in a forest and it hatched into riolu. she healed a pichu which was abanded by its mother, and pichu became her third pokemon, she nicknamed it volt. She always wished to find her parents.

Pokemon 1:eevee (male)
Move-Set: shadow ball, bite, iron tail, dig

Pokemon 2:riolu (male)
Move-Set: copycat, quick attack, drain punch, counter.

Pokemon 3: pichu (volt) (male)
Move-Set: volt tackle, wish, thunder punch, sleep talk

she aced the battle exam but only got halfway though the witten exam

hope this is alright!

 

[for him.]

@Meerfall: No it is not, did you not read the rules?

4. Only up to 3 Pokemon per trainer (No final evolutions,I'll pm you if your Pokemon can evolve.)

 

[irnstead]

Name:Austin

Age:15

House: Lightning zapdos

Apperance: He has a pokemon black and white logo on his shirt with a necklace caring an omanyte fossil on it. He wears jeans and sometimes when its hot outside he will wear cowboy boots although sometimes he does not enjoy them. He is also seen with his black hair spikey or tied in the back. He wears a symbol on his shirt that has the same look as a bloongell.

Personality: He is adventurous and intelligent. He loves helping others rather then helping himself and he enjoys team work rather then working as a lone wolf. He contains many strategic moves in a book that he uses all the time. He loves Pokemon and never says a pokemon is stupid even if someone else tells him to say it.

History: When he was 11 he befriended both a pururil and a hitomoshi. But at the same time his Mother got diagnosed with a really bad disease called chrosis. It affects the liver and she might sadly die when Austin turns 17. He loves his Mom but hates his dad because he usually laughs at him the way he looks. He later found out his grandfather passed away and was very sad as they were closely attached to each other.

Pokemon 1:Hitomoshi
Move-Set: ember, astonish, nightshade, bursting flame

Pokemon 2:pururiru
Move-Set:Bubble, nightshade, bubblebeam, recovery

Pokemon 3:Ishizumai
Move-Set:Faint attack, sand attack, fury cutter,rock blast

Other things to know:

 

[MeerFall]

I devoled my umbreon (eevee) also changed my 3rd pokemon to volt (pichu)

is that alright?

 

[Silent the Lucario]

I devoled my umbreon (eevee) also changed my 3rd pokemon to volt (pichu)

is that alright?

It's fine now.

And yay 15th post :P

 

[lolkipz]

Name: Elly (Her name is "Elena", but prefers "Elly".)

Age:She is fifteen.

House: Sub-Zero Articuno

Apperance: Elly is pretty tall, 4.5 inches above average. She has brown hair, and amber eyes. (See attachment.)

Personality: She is very nice, and somewhat shy. She makes friends easily, but she only has a few due to the fact that she has
an odd history, and her sister is very protective, and like a parent. A very strict, but kind one.
History: She can read the thoughts and feelings of Pokémon. Also, her parents went missing when she was young. (According to her sister.) Neither of them exactly remembered what happened. She lives in a small home in Hearthome with her older sister, Luce, Who is seventeen. She hates people who act like they rule the universe. She can read the thoughts and feelings of Pokémon, but not very well. She is a bit odd and if she really wants something, she can jump off of a small building if it means a lot. She also has a temper and may "explode" if someone is mean to her too much. She is pretty smart, and somewhat wild. She is also much stronger than you would expect.

Pokemon 1: Eevee (E-E, pernounced EEE-eee) Female
Move-Set: tail whip, tackle, helping hand, bite

Pokemon 2: Jigglypuf (Jiggly) Female
Move-Set: Body Slam, Double-Edge, Sing, Disable

Pokemon 3: Marowak (Boany) Female
Move-Set: Bone Club, Headbutt, Thrash, Growl

 

[Marina E. Silver]

i'd like to Join

Name: Marina Evangeline Silver

Age: 15 (first year)

House: Sub-Zero Articuno

Apperance: long silver hair, average height, dark blue eyes, wears a black and pale orange tank top, pale orange pants, pale orange sneakers, pale orange and black beret, pale orange box, carries a black bag

Personality: Marina has always been overprotective of those she cares since she was little and her twin was almost taken from her in a fire. She's also loyal to her friends always dropping what she's doing to help them rather than helping herself. She has a temper that can easily flare up at any given moment which can make particularly a more difficult opponent when she can control it if she can't she's weaker in battles.

History: A young trainer from Twinleaf town Marina grew up with her twin sister Sabrina and her best friend Chase. From an early age she showed an interest in Pokemon and she, Sabrina and Chase would hold fake Pokemon battles as they watched them on TV. At first as a child her interest was in flying type Pokemon but when she almost lost her sister due to a fire she wanted to be able to control it thus shortly after receiving her Growlithe Blaze as a gift from her father.

Pokemon 1: Blaze (Growlithe)
Move-Set: Flame-Wheel, Sunnyday, Ember, Flame-Thrower

Pokemon 2: Flicker (Vulpix)
Move-Set: Fire-Spin, Ember, Will-o-wisp, roar

Pokemon 3: Flare (Charmander)
Move-Set: Dragon-Rage, Ember, Rage, Slash

 

[for him.]

Name: Elly (Her name is "Elena", but prefers "Elly".)

Age:She is fifteen.

House: Sub-Zero Articuno

Appearance: Elly is pretty tall. She has brown hair, amber eyes, and a nice smile.

Personality: She is very nice, and somewhat shy.

History: She can read the thoughts and feelings of Pokémon. Also, her parents are unknown, and went missing when she was young. She lives in a small home in Hearthome with her older sister, Luce.

Pokemon 1: Eevee (E-E, pernounced EEE-eee) Female
Move-Set: tail whip, tackle, helping hand, bite

Pokemon 2: Jigglypuf (Jiggly) Female
Move-Set: Body Slam, Double-Edge, Sing, Disable

Pokemon 3: Marowak (Boany) Female
Move-Set: Bone Club, Headbutt, Thrash, Growl

There isn't enough information about your character. All that we know physically is that she has brown hair, amber eyes, that she is "pretty tall", and a nice smile. That isn't much of a physical description to me. How tall is she, rather than pretty tall, estimate if you have to. How does she style her hair? Really nice smile? That isn't going to get anywhere. Everyone has a nice smile so I suggest you get rid of that trait and add something else. What happened to her clothes? Does she go out naked or something. No the sprite will not cut it. Look at the other SU's you should get a good idea about how much you need in yours.

History is really lacking. You could have gone more in-depth with her sister and actually done some things that would make her somewhat interesting. Again if you don't understand this explanation, then just look at the sign ups before yours, you should get a general idea.

Personality isn't much either. She's very nice and somewhat shy? Come on I know you can do better than that. Anyone can be shy, nervous, and be nice. In her personality list things that make your character who she is. Like what she likes, what she hates, her habits, quirks, her drives/motivations, and things like that.

4. Only up to 3 Pokemon per trainer (No final evolutions,I'll pm you if your Pokemon can evolve.)

Did you not read the rules?