Pokeroco (A sprite comic)

[AJUST]

Room for improvement!

Hi UF, you've got the plot there, as the episode title hints, Leon and Emero have a psychic bond (that seems to have been severed) so he was tracking his espeon.
I hope it wasn't too fuzzy there. Thanks for the input, there's always room for improvement.

p.s. I made a mistake in ep.3 there... Leon isn't supposed to say/think 'Espeon', since he calls his espeon Emero.

 

[Domin-8]

Its a great comic only if you could pop them out faster haha. Great job though AJUST

 

[DarkPegasus]

Hi AJUST

I really liked your comic, all that custom graphics are very cool and the story so far is OK. The rocket secret base's entrance is very nice.

 

[AJUST]

Thank you DP!

Here's '4!

 

[DarkPegasus]

I really liked the latest episode. Natu's overworld is almost pure perfection. And I the battle "animations" are awesome, and the name "Deep hypnosis" sounds sooo cool. I must congratulate you, because I know how much time custom stuff takes to make, so basically you are "spitting" them out pretty fast. Just keep them coming

 

[AJUST]

Ah, thank you Pegasus! those custom sprites do take some time, so thanks for the Xatu (omg, is it Natu??) compliment!
I admit Vulpix was a little rushed.

 

[DarkPegasus]

Yes it is... XD
I am not so good with those Pokemon names. But I do know almost every of the first 251, apparently Xatu isn't one of them XD

 

[Death Rogers]

No, it's Xatu.

And your overworlds are awesome. The only one I didn't like was the Charmander. (Only 'cuz of the flame on it's tail. All it is is a yellow and red ball.) And the Espeons' two tails at the tip of the main tail seemed kind of stuck out like they were taking a cold shower or something.

 

[Domin-8]

your comic is great. i love your custom work. Can't wait for more episodes

 

[AJUST]

Rogers. thanks for the feedback. I've checked out that flame, and i've edited it by 4px. so if you ever see another charmander, it's tail won't be as round. :P

Point taken about espeon's tail too, but modifying it proves more difficult than a
than 4px.

thanks Unoriginally Funny.

 

[D R E ™]

cool this is awsome continue and could you post the nest on asap

 

[Jim]

Wow! As long as you stick with this, it could end up being pretty big! love the Graphics and storyline. Didn't quite get number 3 but I got the jist of it. Well done! Keep it up and don't give up! 9.8/10! Good luck! Did I see Jaden Yuki in Ep 2? Or was it coincidence?

 

[AJUST]

Ty

heh, thanks for the cool comment, Electivire. Sorry bout ep.3 there. XP Oh, and that was jaden yuki, i like easter eggs. :D
Oh, and guys, i tried to get another ep out this week, but didn't get it done.
It's SUPRISINGLY hard to keep up a spite comic! Trust me. :)
Especially with no external Pokemon stimulus.
Sprites aren't the hard part, that's more like robotic labour, the plot is what gets me... rly hard to figure out a good, non-cliche story.

 

[Domin-8]

You can have a cliche plot, bu make sure you can put some twist to it. Every plot nowadays is cliche, even when i had a sprite comic up and running it was still cliche

 

[RYOUKI]

hey AJUST remeber me???
anyway when are you going to post episode 5 i cant wait
i'm soooooo excited

 

[Typhoon]

Lol, I love the Mozilla reference. Her design is awesome.

 

[AJUST]

yeah... you can never be truly original... anyway, i'm not always sure where to take the comic, which makes it hard.

I can't wait to get the characters out of that bunker place... it's a very bland place. X)

 

[Jim]

If you have MSN or something I could help with a story line and I'm an {OK} spriter (Not amazing but alright). PM me if interested.

 

[AJUST]

Thanks Electivire, i'll keep that in mind. :)

Oh, Typhoon, thanks for noticing. Moz is inspired by the uncyclopedia article for firefox (rly brilliant).

 

[Sumomo & Kotoko]

I'm lovin' the comic!! Great storyline, great graphics, amazing!! =D

I can't wait to continue reading it. ;p