Pokeroco (A sprite comic)

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Hi UF, you've got the plot there, as the episode title hints, Leon and Emero have a psychic bond (that seems to have been severed) so he was tracking his espeon.
I hope it wasn't too fuzzy there. Thanks for the input, there's always room for improvement.

p.s. I made a mistake in ep.3 there... Leon isn't supposed to say/think 'Espeon', since he calls his espeon Emero.
 
Its a great comic only if you could pop them out faster haha. Great job though AJUST
 
I really liked the latest episode. Natu's overworld is almost pure perfection. And I the battle "animations" are awesome, and the name "Deep hypnosis" sounds sooo cool. I must congratulate you, because I know how much time custom stuff takes to make, so basically you are "spitting" them out pretty fast. Just keep them coming
 
No, it's Xatu.

And your overworlds are awesome. The only one I didn't like was the Charmander. (Only 'cuz of the flame on it's tail. All it is is a yellow and red ball.) And the Espeons' two tails at the tip of the main tail seemed kind of stuck out like they were taking a cold shower or something.
 
your comic is great. i love your custom work. Can't wait for more episodes
 
Rogers. thanks for the feedback. I've checked out that flame, and i've edited it by 4px. so if you ever see another charmander, it's tail won't be as round. :P

Point taken about espeon's tail too, but modifying it proves more difficult than a
than 4px.

thanks Unoriginally Funny.
 
Wow! As long as you stick with this, it could end up being pretty big! love the Graphics and storyline. Didn't quite get number 3 but I got the jist of it. Well done! Keep it up and don't give up! 9.8/10! Good luck! Did I see Jaden Yuki in Ep 2? Or was it coincidence?
 
Ty

heh, thanks for the cool comment, Electivire. Sorry bout ep.3 there. XP Oh, and that was jaden yuki, i like easter eggs. :D
Oh, and guys, i tried to get another ep out this week, but didn't get it done.
It's SUPRISINGLY hard to keep up a spite comic! Trust me. :)
Especially with no external Pokemon stimulus.
Sprites aren't the hard part, that's more like robotic labour, the plot is what gets me... rly hard to figure out a good, non-cliche story.
 
You can have a cliche plot, bu make sure you can put some twist to it. Every plot nowadays is cliche, even when i had a sprite comic up and running it was still cliche
 
hey AJUST remeber me???
anyway when are you going to post episode 5 i cant wait
i'm soooooo excited
 
If you have MSN or something I could help with a story line and I'm an {OK} spriter (Not amazing but alright). PM me if interested.
 
I'm lovin' the comic!! Great storyline, great graphics, amazing!! =D

I can't wait to continue reading it. ;p
 
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