Rate my team?

[ashys_girl]

Okay, so I'm thinking of getting a new team, and this is what I came up with. Help and advice would be appreciated. (: Oh, and none of that, "Oh, my *Insert Pokemon here* can swipe all of them." Because frankly, I don't care. (: I want advice, not gloating.

1. Snorlax
Nature: Careful
Ability: Thick Fat
Item: Leftovers
-Curse
-Shadow Ball
-Rest
-Rock Slide

2. Jolteon
Nature: Timid
Ability: Volt Absorb
Item: Leftovers
-Thunderbolt
-Baton Pass (Or wish?)
-Substitute
-Charge Beam

3. Tyranitar
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Sand Stream
Item: Life Orb
-Crunch
-Stone Edge
-Earthquake
-Dragon Dance

4. Vaporeon
Nature: Bold
Ability: Water Absorb
Item: Leftovers
-Wish
-Surf
-Substitute
-Ice Beam

5. Salamence
Nature: Jolly
Ability: Intimidate
Item: Life Orb
-Dragon Dance
-Earthquake
-Outrage
-Flamethrower

6. Houndoom
Nature: Timid
Ability: Flash Fire
Item: Leftovers
-Nasty Plot
-Fire Blast (or maybe Flamethrower?)
-Dark Pulse
-Iron Tail

 

[Dark Pulse94]

ok. it looks like this is more appropriate for an In-game team than a competetive team. Hopefully DA will move this thread

first of all. If this isn't an In-game team, you need to completely redo it - Salamence is banned from competetive battles, and apart from that, you have 4 OU pokemon, and one UU pokemon. you will need to swap Houndoom for something else, perhaps something that can fly XD

If this is In-game (meaning that you are battling CPU's not real people) then I can't help you
also. You need to post EV's

 

[Dark Azelf]

Put in Evs thanks.

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[123wert50]

No Dragonite? Sorry, I just really like that pokemon. And Salamance is a uber. Which not to many people appreciate to battle it.

 

[blaQk]

Uhh.. 2/10.
As stated by others, salamence is an uber(i know, it sucks!)
Snorlax would be better with belly drum, rest, snore, and curse.
But maybe not...
Get rid of Houndoom.
Every one else is okay.

First of all this thread was revived.

Secondly, Mence is not an uber anymore.

Thirdly:

Snorlax would be better with belly drum, rest, snore, and curse.

You can't be serious.

 

[shiniyoyo4000]

Where are the ev's @??? Its needed to help construct a team. BTW, is this an in-game team? I recomend smogon for non ingame team construction. You should also use latias...Oops Forgot...Its BANNED!!!!!!!!!

 

[Zaroas]

I agree...

May I suggest a ghost-type with a levetate ability? Like Gastly or Duskull.

Most preferably Gastly. (If you can get him in the game you created the others in.)

Best moves for it; Hypnosis, Dream Eater, Curse and Spite

GASTLY? Are you serious? He's much better off with Gengar with a set that doesn't rely on a 60% accurate move, a move that really does nothing because of Gastly/Gengar's fraility, and a move that cuts off 50% of your HP.

But yes, EVS would be nice.