Rate my YGO deck plz?!

[JakeEMan]

Hello! I havn't played YGO in about 2 years cuz my school didn't allow them, but when i went to my new school, my new friends there brought there cards, so they would dual at lunch or after school, so I got back into YGO. Hence, why I don't have many new cards. Anyway, plz rate my deck for me (on a sczle from 1-10 1 worst 10 best):
Cyber Raider (1st Edition DCR)
La Jinn the Mystical Genie of the Lamp (SDK)
Millennium Shield (MP1)
Enchanted Javelin (PSV)
Homunculus the Alchemic Being (1st Edition RDS)
Fissure (SDY)
Scapegoat (SDJ)
Lord of D. (SDK)
Rare Metal Dragon (EP1)
Labyrinth Wall (1st Edition MRL)
The Dark Door (1st Edition LON)
Lord of D. (SDK)
Waboku (SDY)
Paladin of White Dragon (SKE)
White Dragon Ritual (SKE)
Blue Eyes White Dragon (1st Edition LOB)
Kiryu (MFC)
Soul Exchange (SDY)
Trap Hole (SDK)
Harpie's Brother (PSV)
Mystical Space Typhoon (1st Edition SDP)
Warrior Dai Grepher (LOD)
The Flute of Summonding Dragon (SDK)
Dreamspite (1st Edition LON)
Pitch-Dark Dragon (MFC)
Summond Skull (SDY)
Soul Exchange (SDY)
Man-Eater Bug (SDY)
The Flute of Summonding Dragon (SDK)
Tenkabito Shein (SOI)
Dark Magician (Special Illustration SYE)
The Dragon Dwelling in the Cave (LOD)
Card Distruction (SDY)
Fissure (SDK)
Dark Blade (MFC)
La Jinn the Mystical Genie of the Lamp (SDK)
Prevent Rat (MRD)
Toon Alligator (1st Edition SDP)
Waboku (SDY)
Chiron the Mage (1st Edition FET)
One-Eyed Sheild Dragon (LOB)
Ookazi (SDK)
Sujin (MRD)
Monk Fighter (1st Edition TLM)
Battle Ox (SDK)
Mask of Darkness (SDP)
Kuriboh (SYE)
Trap Hole (SDY)
Soul Exchange (SDY)
Sangan (MRD)

So, what do you think?

 

[Razer302]

Out Them In Lists Of
Level 4 Below
Level5 Above
Magic
Trap
Makes Easier To Rate

 

[MegaDitto]

Out Them In Lists Of
Level 4 Below
Level5 Above
Magic
Trap
Makes Easier To Rate

I second that. Also what kind of theme do you want?

 

[Forci Stikane]

I can see enough to say that it's too random and has quite a few subpar monsters in it. 50 cards is also too much and I thought that Soul Exchange was limited somehow...meh.

 

[Cy-Chan]

Fissure (SDY)
Scapegoat (SDJ)
Waboku (SDY)
Soul Exchange (SDY)
Trap Hole (SDK)
Mystical Space Typhoon (1st Edition SDP)
Summond Skull (SDY)
Soul Exchange (SDY)
Man-Eater Bug (SDY)
Tenkabito Shein (SOI)
Card Distruction (SDY)
Fissure (SDK)
Waboku (SDY)
Chiron the Mage (1st Edition FET)
Sujin (MRD)
Monk Fighter (1st Edition TLM)
Mask of Darkness (SDP)
Kuriboh (SYE)
Trap Hole (SDY)
Soul Exchange (SDY)
Sangan (MRD)

Just cut the really bad stuff out. Vanillas get you nowhere nowadays... You should attempt to get some Enraged Battle Ox, Exarion Universe, 1 Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys, and 2 more Chiron the Mage. Then get the Warrior or Spellcaster Structure for the 'staple' cards.

Fissures are good. They're just dumbed down versions of Smashing Ground (Invasion of Chaos card, incredibly hard to get hold of, destroys highest DEF on your opponent's field). Trap Holes are still being used, although more Sakuretsus are... You could possibly use 2 Nobleman of Extermination though. Get rid of their traps, while keeping yours.

Sangan is a great searcher. And so abuseable...

Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys x1
Apprentice Magician x2
Bazoo the Soul-Eater x2
Chiron the Mage x3
Enraged Battle Ox x3
Exarion Universe x2
Hand of Nephthys x1
Magician of Faith x2
Mobius the Frost Monarch x2
Old Vindictive Magician x1
Sangan x1
Confiscation x1
Fissure x3
Heavy Storm x1
Last Will x1
Mystical Space Typhoon x1
Nobleman of Crossout x2
Nobleman of Extermination x2
Premature Burial x1
Scapegoat x1
Call of the Haunted x1
Mirror Force x1
Return from the Different Dimension x2
Torrential Tribute x1
Trap Hole x2

Apart from Mirror Force, all of these cards came pretty cheap nowadays. Exarion and Sacred are normally 2-4 quid a piece... which isn't really that much in comparison with some other cards... The stretegy here is to either dominate the field with Phoenix, trample their weak monsters with your Enraged Battle Ox, kill their backrow with Chiron, search out Spellcasters with Apprentice Magician, like MoF or OVM. Or, beatdown with Bazoo, then activate RftDD. Loads of nice combos there.

Hope this helped.

 

[Kakashi Sensei]

It looks pretty good to me. I say its quite the deck....you like collecting cards huh SO I give it a superb 7 ^^

 

[zshadowzero27]

Good

I thinks its actually pretty good man.