The font is horrendous. It manages to **** with your eyes and divert attention away from his face. It's like he's moving, but not in a good way.
Also, the colors look like someone accidentally ****ed around with the contrast and never bothered to clean up.
But at least it's better than Zero's.
Four.
EDIT: Beaten. You get a six. The girl's kinda cute. It would be better alignes center or right.
Also, you have the Phil Collins Tarzan music, which I secretly love cannot stand.
But, it's decent. Do something less god awful with that green text.