Rating my Team...WIFI ready!?

[DarkFlareon]

I need to find out if im doing this right.....i got beat 4 times in a row in PBR..and im regrouping right now with movesets and order....please let me know what u think....

Note these moves werent there before i changed them after i got whiped all over the nintendo floor

Lupunny LV.72 HP 200/200 @ Bashful (No Item Can be used due to klutz)

-Strength
-Jump Kick
-Charm
-Mirror Coat

Att 156
Def 149
Sp. Att 110
Sp Def 158
Speed 194

Ability: Klutz

Torterra Lv.71 HP 227/227 @ Bashful (Rose Incense)

-Razor Leaf
-Giga Drain
-EarthQuake
-Wood Hammer

Att 194
Def 173
Sp. Att 139
Sp Def 150
Speed 132

Ability : OverGrow

LuxRay Lv.72 HP 232/232 @ Docile (Magnet)

-Charge
-Crunch
-Thunderbolt
-Swagger

Att 195
Def 143
Sp. Att 164
Sp Def 138
Speed 141

Ability : Intimidate

Honchkrow lv.73 HP 251/251 @ Naive (lax incense)
-Swagger
-Night slash
-Wing attack
-Fly

Att 226
Def 101
Sp. Att 183
Sp Def 86
Speed 144

Ability : Insomnia

Absol Lv.64 HP 165/165 @ Quiet (Scope lens)


-SwordDance
-Aerial Ace
-Night Slash
-Psycho Cut

Att 189
Def 95
Sp. Att 128
Sp Def 97
Speed 126

Ability : Super Lucky

Floatzel Lv.72 HP 227/227 Docile (Wave Incense)

-Aqua Jet
-Surf
-Crunch
-IceFang

Att 187
Def 128
Sp. Att 149
Sp Def 100
Speed 210

Ability : Swift Swim

 

[Znale]

It would be appreciated if you posted the nature, EV spread and item of the above named Pokémon.

As for the team, you've totally misunderstood how to use Lopunny. It has a move that's underestimated by several people, namely the Switcheroo. Switcheroo allows you to switch items with you and your opponent's Pokémon, passing Lagging Tail or some other item that'll just make harm to your opponent.

I could critisize your team even more, but I'll leave some space for more experienced people to comment on your team. I just noticed your excuse of a Lopunny and enlightened you a bit. =))

 

[DarkFlareon]

ok i just edited my entry it should give more detail..:)

 

[Dark Azelf]

1. The natures are absolutely horrible,

2. you have no walls

3. They are not Ev trained or don't look it

4. In Underused you maybe have a chance, but not in Overused

5. Never ever use HM moves, the only good ones are Surf and Waterfall.

6. 3 Grass moves on one pokemon is not good, especially when one is based on Torterra's abysmal Sp.Att.


As i dont have any experience with them , the best thing to do is to for someone who knows how to use and has movesets for these.


EDIT: Wood Hammer and Leech Seed/Synthisis/Curse >> Razor Leaf and Giga Drain, on Torterra

EDIT 2 : Impish Nature on Torterra

 

[Masami]

A pokemon like Torterra should never have giga drain! His special attack is like half as high as his attack. On top of that, you have three grass moves, why? Keep only woodhammer and earthquake, replace the other two moves.

 

[Toothache]

Hhm, this is a common thing to try, use the team you helped get you through the E4 in a competitive environment such as wifi battles. However, what you'll have to do here is keep them in the game and start learning about EV training, breeding for good IVs and so on, cos if you want to persist in battling on wifi, you'll need to deal with what people are gonna throw at you, which are EV/IVed monsters.

 

[Ryu Hoshi]

your gonna have to redo your wifi team.Deffintly look up ev training documents and a nature sheet so you can match the pokemon you want to use with moves that will benifit from a good nature

 

[Jimmyray]

Lopunny LV.72 HP 200/200 @ Bashful (No Item Can be used due to klutz)

-Strength Fire Punch
-Jump Kick
-Charm Thunder Punch
-Mirror Coat Switcheroo

Don't know much about Lopunny, as I've never used it, but I'm pretty sure it's too weak to take a hit, therefore lose Mirror Coat and Strength is a poor move.

Att 156
Def 149
Sp. Att 110
Sp Def 158
Speed 194

Ability: Klutz

Torterra Lv.71 HP 227/227 @ Bashful (Rose Incense)

-Razor Leaf Crunch
-Giga Drain Curse
-EarthQuake
-Wood Hammer

Seeing as Giga Drain is special, lose it, and don't use 3 grass moves... Curse should be used to bulk it up.

Att 194
Def 173
Sp. Att 139
Sp Def 150
Speed 132

Ability : OverGrow

LuxRay Lv.72 HP 232/232 @ Docile (Magnet)

-Charge
-Crunch
-Thunderbolt Thunder Fang
-Swagger

Thunder fang because it is physical. Possibly replace Swagger with a different move such as Roar or one of the other elemental fangs.

Att 195
Def 143
Sp. Att 164
Sp Def 138
Speed 141

Ability : Intimidate

Honchkrow lv.73 HP 251/251 @ Naive (lax incense)
-Swagger
-Night slash
-Wing attack/ Aerial Ace
-Fly Pursuit

NEVER use fly....

Att 226
Def 101
Sp. Att 183
Sp Def 86
Speed 144

Ability : Insomnia

Absol Lv.64 HP 165/165 @ Quiet (Scope lens)


-SwordDance
-Aerial Ace
-Night Slash
-Psycho Cut/Stone Egde

Seems fine to me!

Att 189
Def 95
Sp. Att 128
Sp Def 97
Speed 126

Ability : Super Lucky

Floatzel Lv.72 HP 227/227 Docile (Wave Incense)

-Aqua Jet
-Surf Brick Break
-Crunch
-IceFang

Special isn't Floatzel's thing...

Att 187
Def 128
Sp. Att 149
Sp Def 100
Speed 210

Ability : Swift Swim

 

[Sora_8920]

Lopunny LV.72 HP 200/200 @ Bashful (No Item Can be used due to klutz)

-Strength Fire Punch
-Jump Kick
-Charm Thunder Punch
-Mirror Coat Switcheroo

Don't know much about Lopunny, as I've never used it, but I'm pretty sure it's too weak to take a hit, therefore lose Mirror Coat and Strength is a poor move.

Att 156
Def 149
Sp. Att 110
Sp Def 158
Speed 194

Ability: Klutz

Torterra Lv.71 HP 227/227 @ Bashful (Rose Incense)

-Razor Leaf Crunch
-Giga Drain Curse
-EarthQuake
-Wood Hammer

Seeing as Giga Drain is special, lose it, and don't use 3 grass moves... Curse should be used to bulk it up.

Att 194
Def 173
Sp. Att 139
Sp Def 150
Speed 132

Ability : OverGrow

LuxRay Lv.72 HP 232/232 @ Docile (Magnet)

-Charge
-Crunch
-Thunderbolt Thunder Fang
-Swagger

Thunder fang because it is physical. Possibly replace Swagger with a different move such as Roar or one of the other elemental fangs.

Att 195
Def 143
Sp. Att 164
Sp Def 138
Speed 141

Ability : Intimidate

Honchkrow lv.73 HP 251/251 @ Naive (lax incense)
-Swagger
-Night slash
-Wing attack/ Aerial Ace
-Fly Pursuit

NEVER use fly....

Att 226
Def 101
Sp. Att 183
Sp Def 86
Speed 144

Ability : Insomnia

Absol Lv.64 HP 165/165 @ Quiet (Scope lens)


-SwordDance
-Aerial Ace
-Night Slash
-Psycho Cut/Stone Egde

Seems fine to me!

Att 189
Def 95
Sp. Att 128
Sp Def 97
Speed 126

Ability : Super Lucky

Floatzel Lv.72 HP 227/227 Docile (Wave Incense)

-Aqua Jet
-Surf Brick Break
-Crunch
-IceFang

Special isn't Floatzel's thing...

Att 187
Def 128
Sp. Att 149
Sp Def 100
Speed 210

Ability : Swift Swim

I'm having doubts about this, Ice Beam will OHKO it. Starmie? Besides, it's a Wall, it doesn't last long. And it will be outspeeded by it's counters.

 

[Anti]

Lopunny LV.72 HP 200/200 @ Bashful (No Item Can be used due to klutz)

-Strength Fire Punch
-Jump Kick
-Charm Thunder Punch
-Mirror Coat Switcheroo

Don't know much about Lopunny, as I've never used it, but I'm pretty sure it's too weak to take a hit, therefore lose Mirror Coat and Strength is a poor move. Well...no. But only jump kick. You realize a STABed return does more to normal types?

Att 156
Def 149
Sp. Att 110
Sp Def 158
Speed 194

Ability: Klutz

Torterra Lv.71 HP 227/227 @ Impish (Leftovers)

-Razor Leaf Crunch
-Giga Drain Curse
-EarthQuake
-Wood Hammer

Seeing as Giga Drain is special, lose it, and don't use 3 grass moves... Curse should be used to bulk it up. Yes. Stealth rock is an option.

Att 194
Def 173
Sp. Att 139
Sp Def 150
Speed 132

Ability : OverGrow

LuxRay Lv.72 HP 232/232 @ Adamant??? (Life Orb)

-Charge
-Crunch
-Thunderbolt Thunder Fang
-Swagger

Thunder fang because it is physical. Possibly replace Swagger with a different move such as Roar or one of the other elemental fangs. Swagger? No...it needs physical attacks, I believe it gets the elemental fangs.

Att 195
Def 143
Sp. Att 164
Sp Def 138
Speed 141

Ability : Intimidate

Honchkrow lv.73 HP 251/251 @ Naive (lax incense)Hax items are banned
-Swagger
-Night slash
-Wing attack/ Aerial Ace
-Fly Pursuit

NEVER use fly....or swagger

Att 226
Def 101
Sp. Att 183
Sp Def 86
Speed 144

Ability : Insomnia

Absol Lv.64 HP 165/165 @ Adamant (Scope lens)


-SwordDance
-Aerial Ace
-Night Slash
-Psycho Cut/Stone Egde

Seems fine to me! Yes. Maybe BP though?

Att 189
Def 95
Sp. Att 128
Sp Def 97
Speed 126

Ability : Super Lucky

Floatzel Lv.72 HP 227/227 Docile (Wave Incense)

-Aqua Jet
-Surf Brick Break
-Crunch
-IceFang

Special isn't Floatzel's thing...I know nothing about floatzel...

Att 187
Def 128
Sp. Att 149
Sp Def 100
Speed 210

Ability : Swift Swim

Yeah, addeed to your edit Jimmyray. Swagger is a horrible move. Your opponent can switch out, or only have a 50% vhance of hurting itself. Relying on hax to win = fail. If you rely on skill, you will do much better.

And where are the walls? Nothing on your team can team a hit...

EDIT: Itachi, nothing can stop Torterra's ice beam weakness...Jimmyray was actually right. Try eliminating the ice beamers first...curse actually bulks it up tremendously.