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Allow me to do some translating first:
Ruby- Brendan
Sapphire- May
Emerald- Wally
The crisp breeze blew across the open field in Route 119. The horizon was overflowing with jade trees and the earth was filled with rock-hard sand that can seriously deal some damage if slammed upon. Two trainers were faced opposite of each other, gripping a Pokeball apiece.
One trainer wore a crimson bandana on her auburn hair. She also wore a medium red dress with a pinch of black on the chest area. She also wore black shorts and scarlet rubber shoes.
The reverse trainer wore a cobalt shirt, a plum hat to match his plum hair, and wore colorless pants to match his white shoes.
?Ready to battle?? The trainer facing Sapphire asked.
?We?ll see if YOU'RE ready, Jack.? She replied back. ?Go, Ronono!?
A steel creature appeared in the stadium. Its navy eyes locked on to Jack as its steel hoof stomped. The sun had reflected on its hide and shined a dazzling light.
?Ah, a Lairon.? Jack said to himself. ?Go, Alakazam!?
A gilded creature appeared on the stadium. It crossed its spoons to make an X-like figure as soon as it was prepared to fight.
?Ronono, Take Down!? Sapphire ordered.
Lairon stepped five spaces back as it was rearing its steel-plated head. Lairon stampeded towards the Alakazam. Alakazam, while awaiting the blow, crouched down and closed its eyes. Lairon sped up his charge and stomped down the sand hard as it was close to the gilded psychic.
?Alakazam, Teleport!? Jack shouted over to Alakazam.
Alakazam opened its eyes and its eyes glowed a bright white. Then it vanished in just a single flash. Lairon stopped its tracks and slid towards Jack. As it stopped sliding, it looked around, bewildered.
Jack put on a smug smirk while clenching his fists.
Alakazam reformed behind Lairon while Lairon didn?t detect it.
?Ronono, watch out!? Sapphire shouted urgently to her Lairon.
He turned and was shocked to see Alakazam, with a devious smile on the psychic?s face.
?Alakazam, Psychic!? Jack ordered with his fist in the air.
?Alaka?? It said, holding up a spoon in front of the shocked Lairon. The spoon started to glow red. Shortly after, Lairon was filled with a cobalt aura. Alakazam started to lift the spoon and its arms higher into the air. The higher the spoon was, the higher Lairon levitated. Lairon was struggling to smash free by madly darting its legs and arms, but it was no use.
??Zam!? It yelled as it forced its spoon onward. Lairon stopped struggling as it was sent forward with tremendous might. Lairon braced itself as it crashed head-on to a gigantic boulder, destroying it.
?Alakazam, finish it off?? Jack said as he heard an earsplitting explosion.
?What was that?? Sapphire asked, befuddled.
?I dunno.? Jack shrugged. ?We?ll continue our battle later.? He got out a Pokeball and returned his Alakazam. He ran towards the scene of the explosion.
?Wait for me!? Sapphire shouted as she returned Ronono. She climbed the nearby tree and grabbed an olive colored vine. ?Yahoo!? She yelled as she started to swing. She swinged frontward and jumped onto the next vine. Pretty soon, she was in Fortree City.
?Wow. Jack must be a slow runner.? Sapphire shrugged as she unveiled her binoculars.
?Now I?m sure the explosion took place here.? Sapphire looked around the jungle city with her binoculars. In her spectacle she saw fleeing Zigzagoons, Wurmples, Oddishes, and many more Pokemon with a petrified look on their faces. Then, she saw smoke from a place roofed with sky-high trees.
?That place looks familiar?? Sapphire told herself. She gasped in shock as soon as she remembered the building that once stood there.
?That was the Fortree Gym!? She said. With a worried look on her face, she frantically ran to the gym. ?Gosh, I hope Winona?s all right.? Sapphire stopped running and climbed up a giant tree. She held on to another vine and swinged real fast to get to the gym. Sapphire smelled smoke as she was closer to it. She jumped down and saw two people.
One trainer had a white hair/hat and he had a black bandana with a Pokeball insignia on it. He wore a long-sleeved crimson shirt with a black streak the shape of a ?Y?. He wore yellow gloves. He also wore dark pants with a yellow coloring at the bottom and red and black running shoes.
The other trainer wore a white sailor hat and had a white mustache. He also wore a violet jacket that had a blue inner collar. His jacket also had a bit of gold in it. He wore no shirt, as he was shirtless. The trainer wore violet pants along with dark shoes.
?How could you? Pokemon were living here!? Ruby shouted at Drake. ?You could have killed them!?
?Hehehe? Their lives don?t matter to me.? Drake replied as he glared at a terrified Sapphire. ?You?re next if you don?t give me all the badges you have so far.? Drake cocked his head to the side and laughed nastily. He released and got on his Salamence as its crimson wings started to flap fiercely. Then, Salamence zoomed towards the sky. Salamence gradually vanished into the horizon.
?Ruby, is Winona okay?? Sapphire, without delay, asked Ruby.
?Yeah. Luckily, she was visiting Ever Grande City with the other gym leaders for an important meeting. So, she left me to watch the gym.? Ruby replied.
?What was the meeting about? Did she tell you?? Sapphire curiously asked.
?She told me about her meeting.? Ruby nodded.
?What was it? What was it?? Sapphire said, violently shaking Ruby.
?First of all, calm down. Now, she said that there was a catastrophe involving Mt. Pyre on one of her calls. A group of trainers shattered both the Red Orb and the Blue Orb. This caused havoc between the sea and land Pokemon. She told me that wars were raging on at cities connecting to the sea. Dewford was an unfortunate victim of this war, she said to me. The sea Pokemon had created a huge tidal wave that overcame the island. Many lives were lost.? Ruby continued on. ?Not only that, but the group of trainers who were responsible for this mayhem called themselves the Elite Four! They had announced to the old couple of Mt. Pyre and Lilycove City that they were there to continue to original goal of the Elite Four, the annihilation of all humans. Fortunately, Winona overheard the announcement and had sent powerful trainers to help stop the war."
?Ruby, let?s go find and stop the Elite Four!? Sapphire voluntered with fire and willpower in her eyes.
?But I have to go stay here!? Ruby told her.
?Cluck cluck!? Sapphire teased while she was impersonating a chicken.
?Did you just cluck at me?? Ruby asked her while he raised his left eyebrow. ?Okay, fine. I?ll help you. We?ll have to put off all our goals for a while.? Ruby sighed.
?Then, let?s go!? Sapphire said as she threw a Pokeball. ?Go, Tororo!?
A grass dinosaur emerged from the ball. Bananas were attached to its cheeks and huge palm leaves that looked like wings were attached to its back.
?Tropius!? The lime and brunette dinosaur cried as it flapped its wings.
Ruby and Sapphire sat on Tropius?s back.
?Let?s go to Mt. Pyre!? Sapphire ordered Tororo. With a grin, Tropius took off into the air, startling Ruby.
?Mt. Pyre?s our next destination!? Sapphire shouted eagerly with her right arm in the air.
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Please review to let me know how I'm doing. (If you are able to) Thank you in advance and thank you for reading my opening chapter.
Note: This is the first fanfiction I posted here on PC. Hope you'll get the chance to enjoy it.
Ruby- Brendan
Sapphire- May
Emerald- Wally
Chapter 1: The Elite Four Emerges
The crisp breeze blew across the open field in Route 119. The horizon was overflowing with jade trees and the earth was filled with rock-hard sand that can seriously deal some damage if slammed upon. Two trainers were faced opposite of each other, gripping a Pokeball apiece.
One trainer wore a crimson bandana on her auburn hair. She also wore a medium red dress with a pinch of black on the chest area. She also wore black shorts and scarlet rubber shoes.
The reverse trainer wore a cobalt shirt, a plum hat to match his plum hair, and wore colorless pants to match his white shoes.
?Ready to battle?? The trainer facing Sapphire asked.
?We?ll see if YOU'RE ready, Jack.? She replied back. ?Go, Ronono!?
A steel creature appeared in the stadium. Its navy eyes locked on to Jack as its steel hoof stomped. The sun had reflected on its hide and shined a dazzling light.
?Ah, a Lairon.? Jack said to himself. ?Go, Alakazam!?
A gilded creature appeared on the stadium. It crossed its spoons to make an X-like figure as soon as it was prepared to fight.
?Ronono, Take Down!? Sapphire ordered.
Lairon stepped five spaces back as it was rearing its steel-plated head. Lairon stampeded towards the Alakazam. Alakazam, while awaiting the blow, crouched down and closed its eyes. Lairon sped up his charge and stomped down the sand hard as it was close to the gilded psychic.
?Alakazam, Teleport!? Jack shouted over to Alakazam.
Alakazam opened its eyes and its eyes glowed a bright white. Then it vanished in just a single flash. Lairon stopped its tracks and slid towards Jack. As it stopped sliding, it looked around, bewildered.
Jack put on a smug smirk while clenching his fists.
Alakazam reformed behind Lairon while Lairon didn?t detect it.
?Ronono, watch out!? Sapphire shouted urgently to her Lairon.
He turned and was shocked to see Alakazam, with a devious smile on the psychic?s face.
?Alakazam, Psychic!? Jack ordered with his fist in the air.
?Alaka?? It said, holding up a spoon in front of the shocked Lairon. The spoon started to glow red. Shortly after, Lairon was filled with a cobalt aura. Alakazam started to lift the spoon and its arms higher into the air. The higher the spoon was, the higher Lairon levitated. Lairon was struggling to smash free by madly darting its legs and arms, but it was no use.
??Zam!? It yelled as it forced its spoon onward. Lairon stopped struggling as it was sent forward with tremendous might. Lairon braced itself as it crashed head-on to a gigantic boulder, destroying it.
?Alakazam, finish it off?? Jack said as he heard an earsplitting explosion.
?What was that?? Sapphire asked, befuddled.
?I dunno.? Jack shrugged. ?We?ll continue our battle later.? He got out a Pokeball and returned his Alakazam. He ran towards the scene of the explosion.
?Wait for me!? Sapphire shouted as she returned Ronono. She climbed the nearby tree and grabbed an olive colored vine. ?Yahoo!? She yelled as she started to swing. She swinged frontward and jumped onto the next vine. Pretty soon, she was in Fortree City.
?Wow. Jack must be a slow runner.? Sapphire shrugged as she unveiled her binoculars.
?Now I?m sure the explosion took place here.? Sapphire looked around the jungle city with her binoculars. In her spectacle she saw fleeing Zigzagoons, Wurmples, Oddishes, and many more Pokemon with a petrified look on their faces. Then, she saw smoke from a place roofed with sky-high trees.
?That place looks familiar?? Sapphire told herself. She gasped in shock as soon as she remembered the building that once stood there.
?That was the Fortree Gym!? She said. With a worried look on her face, she frantically ran to the gym. ?Gosh, I hope Winona?s all right.? Sapphire stopped running and climbed up a giant tree. She held on to another vine and swinged real fast to get to the gym. Sapphire smelled smoke as she was closer to it. She jumped down and saw two people.
One trainer had a white hair/hat and he had a black bandana with a Pokeball insignia on it. He wore a long-sleeved crimson shirt with a black streak the shape of a ?Y?. He wore yellow gloves. He also wore dark pants with a yellow coloring at the bottom and red and black running shoes.
The other trainer wore a white sailor hat and had a white mustache. He also wore a violet jacket that had a blue inner collar. His jacket also had a bit of gold in it. He wore no shirt, as he was shirtless. The trainer wore violet pants along with dark shoes.
?How could you? Pokemon were living here!? Ruby shouted at Drake. ?You could have killed them!?
?Hehehe? Their lives don?t matter to me.? Drake replied as he glared at a terrified Sapphire. ?You?re next if you don?t give me all the badges you have so far.? Drake cocked his head to the side and laughed nastily. He released and got on his Salamence as its crimson wings started to flap fiercely. Then, Salamence zoomed towards the sky. Salamence gradually vanished into the horizon.
?Ruby, is Winona okay?? Sapphire, without delay, asked Ruby.
?Yeah. Luckily, she was visiting Ever Grande City with the other gym leaders for an important meeting. So, she left me to watch the gym.? Ruby replied.
?What was the meeting about? Did she tell you?? Sapphire curiously asked.
?She told me about her meeting.? Ruby nodded.
?What was it? What was it?? Sapphire said, violently shaking Ruby.
?First of all, calm down. Now, she said that there was a catastrophe involving Mt. Pyre on one of her calls. A group of trainers shattered both the Red Orb and the Blue Orb. This caused havoc between the sea and land Pokemon. She told me that wars were raging on at cities connecting to the sea. Dewford was an unfortunate victim of this war, she said to me. The sea Pokemon had created a huge tidal wave that overcame the island. Many lives were lost.? Ruby continued on. ?Not only that, but the group of trainers who were responsible for this mayhem called themselves the Elite Four! They had announced to the old couple of Mt. Pyre and Lilycove City that they were there to continue to original goal of the Elite Four, the annihilation of all humans. Fortunately, Winona overheard the announcement and had sent powerful trainers to help stop the war."
?Ruby, let?s go find and stop the Elite Four!? Sapphire voluntered with fire and willpower in her eyes.
?But I have to go stay here!? Ruby told her.
?Cluck cluck!? Sapphire teased while she was impersonating a chicken.
?Did you just cluck at me?? Ruby asked her while he raised his left eyebrow. ?Okay, fine. I?ll help you. We?ll have to put off all our goals for a while.? Ruby sighed.
?Then, let?s go!? Sapphire said as she threw a Pokeball. ?Go, Tororo!?
A grass dinosaur emerged from the ball. Bananas were attached to its cheeks and huge palm leaves that looked like wings were attached to its back.
?Tropius!? The lime and brunette dinosaur cried as it flapped its wings.
Ruby and Sapphire sat on Tropius?s back.
?Let?s go to Mt. Pyre!? Sapphire ordered Tororo. With a grin, Tropius took off into the air, startling Ruby.
?Mt. Pyre?s our next destination!? Sapphire shouted eagerly with her right arm in the air.
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Please review to let me know how I'm doing. (If you are able to) Thank you in advance and thank you for reading my opening chapter.
Note: This is the first fanfiction I posted here on PC. Hope you'll get the chance to enjoy it.