Elaitenstile
I am legend
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- Seen Feb 27, 2015
The OWs look much better with the whites in their eyes. The male hero is a bit rough on the neck, and the left arm can use a bit more detail (like an extra dark dot). I think the outlines near the waistline and downwards need a bit smoothening and s-outlining. Also the right slipper's end has a dot, making it shaped like an L, which it shouldn't be.
I think Kurama(cute li'l fox)'s head should have more shading in the bottom part, but other than that it's simply adoooooorable!
The other one, Shukaku's eye are a bit ruined-type, it should get a more life-like feeling. This is best done by adding a different colour for the eye, or lightening it up at the centre.
The female hero could use some work; once again the waistline and slipper problem, and I don't think it's wise to copy the same kind of legs and clothing. I think you should give her an alternative pose or something, since there are small differences between male and female sprites. The hair should be defined better, like putting in some creases and fixing the outlines.
And the OWs... well, they're pretty good enough. (I think you should make gym leaders in your custom template, tho)
I think Kurama(cute li'l fox)'s head should have more shading in the bottom part, but other than that it's simply adoooooorable!
The other one, Shukaku's eye are a bit ruined-type, it should get a more life-like feeling. This is best done by adding a different colour for the eye, or lightening it up at the centre.
The female hero could use some work; once again the waistline and slipper problem, and I don't think it's wise to copy the same kind of legs and clothing. I think you should give her an alternative pose or something, since there are small differences between male and female sprites. The hair should be defined better, like putting in some creases and fixing the outlines.
And the OWs... well, they're pretty good enough. (I think you should make gym leaders in your custom template, tho)