Running Angels

[Bluefox06]

Plot​

In a empty forest, Brad's dad built a large mansion for his son. He became famous and ordered Brad to have guards since he was so busy. For 2 years Brad walked around with these numskulls. One day, he and his guards were heading toward the TV studio when a mysterious person was found on their roof. Guard number 6 shot at him and they were forced to leave because of a strange event. The guys body produced a blob and attacked number 6. Leaving him to die, Brad and his guards fled into the air ship. Little did they know someone was lurking......

Characters​

Brad
Age:12
Gender: Male
Bio: A boy with a nasty attitude. He is spoiled and rich but appreciates none of it. He hates his life and dreads every day until now.

Jake
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Bio: A teenage thief who helps out Brad. The urge to battle and to curse lay strong in him. He is not American so sometimes he uses words in the wrong place. He cant talk straight ether. Nothing else is known about him.

ATB
Association of Top Bounty-hunters
Info: None

Episodes

Epp.1: No Foul Language

Eppy.2:Killer Bird of Steel

 

[Blackandy]

uhh...very interesting first eppy, well I like the structure and sprites;)

 

[Bluefox06]

Thanks your the first person to not critisis my way of the time line and the motion thing :)

 

[Blackandy]

Well I actually am wondering why the 2 panels are bigger than 3:paranoid: but all in all I like it quite alot

 

[Bluefox06]

Well cause i wanna show lots of the background on the first 2 so you get a feel of where he lives and then they get smaller cause they were normally that small or it would be a waste of space. Thanks for the praise to :) If anything looks like it needs to be changed then tell me now that you praised me. If you want i can make you in the story?? Just pm me with a sprite and maybe when or what you wanna do in the story. This is waaaaaaaaaaaay better than my last one!

 

[Shadow Weavile]

ey your comic is good and, can i get in your comic ? i have my over world sprite in my sig
and here are some over world pokemons i have

name: Dj
Age:14
Is he part of ATB: Yes
History: Dj was Grown up in the wild `till a Bad Guy found him and Adopt Him so he`s the Evil one But on a Day he think and want to be a good guy
other:Nope

 

[Bluefox06]

Sure

Ok fill out this form so i know where to but the carecter

Name:
Age:
Is he part of ATB ( evil group)?
History:
Bio:
Other:

If you fill out that youll be all set ;)

 

[Forest Grovyle]

As per the rules you are not allowed to recruit people to appear in your comics, as this counts as requesting (see rule no.5 in Sprite Comic rules).

--FG

 

[Bluefox06]

Oh ok, well my next eppy is up sooo....... maybe more people will reply here. I'm sorry about the inconveints Shadow Weavile.
Foret Grovyle am i aloud to use his sprite and give him credit?

 

[Shadow Weavile]

`like eppy 2 wanna see more of your comic

 

[Goatman56]

Graphics aren't to good, work on that. Work on your grammar and is it supposed to be funny cause you need to work on that to. Doesn't seem like this story is all that interesting so far and text under the panel is not exactly great. Overall I don't really like it and there are many flaws that need fixing.

 

[Bluefox06]

Dah. I havent gotan to my comic lately so sometime ill get back to it. One this is that for epps to come Jake will get in a habit of saying something at the end of his speaches.. Or you found that out all ready hmm?