Sabrina Fanclub

[Psychic*Absol]

No, not at all. >> Sometimes, part of the series weren't even DUBBED here, they just used the English voices of the Pokemon. Now *that* is annoying. Either complete dubbing or no dubbing at all. And if no dubbing, then for me, either English version or, probably, subbed. Sorry, but RTL's (German channel) mistakes have annoyed me way too often. >>

Yup, way better. And (to get ontopic again), he never beat Sabrina, either. 0=)

 

[Alakazam17]

...you were the one who found the Japanese episode for me, son don't tell me you haven't watched it at all! >.<

STEELIXMANIAC found it, not I. XD

And nope, I didn't watch it myself. =P

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Is there any proof anyone ever beat Sabrina? Obviously Gary didn't, he didn't have a Marsh Badge when he showed off his 10 badges at one point. So from the little bit of evidence we have in the anime, no one ever beat Sabrina.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

@Zammy Then watch it. Once you've finished STUDYING of course. (What's with me and capitals? Oo)

*thinks hard* Well, I recall hearing Gary saying that he went through Saffron (or was it Prof Oak saying this? Don't know), but no word about the badge. And the Marowak guy was seen fighting a Hitmonlee, so he obviously (beat that, bulbapedia!) beat the fighting dojo master. Yes, judging from the anime, no one really beat Sabrina. 0=)

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Yeah, we all know Sabrina doesn't have a Hitmonlee. That guy must have just beaten the Fighting Dojo, not actually Sabrina. That was a ridiculous conclusion that Bulbapedia came to.

Review please?

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Certain members of bulbapedia do not own the simple element of common sense...
Yeah, sorry, I was just downloading stuff from my university page, and downloading doesn't mix well with reviewing. But I will now. ^^
Title= me no idea. Really. XD

He feared telling her everything, because he figured Sabrina would get offended over some stuff, but he told her anyway.

Either she gets mad because of what he tells her or she gets mad because he doesn't tell her. Doesn't have much choices, that guy. XD

This required earning eight badges from the gyms in Johto, but he felt he did not have to go through all that.

Oh, brave one he is. o,o

"I am powerful enough of a trainer that collecting them would be a waste of time."

o,o Brave and stupid one he is.

Somehow, these Pokémon were immune to the attacks of psychic Pokémon.

Karen!!!

"Hey, I'm not much younger than you," Will protested.

Two years younger. 0=) At least in my fic.

"I don't like travelling," Will replied. "I just like staying at my home near Indigo Plateau."

*hits forehead* Oh, come, on....*rolls eyes* He's la~azy.

This time, Will had his Pokémon use different attacks besides Psychic attacks, and he managed to defeat the woman easily.

Yay! ^^ Just like I defeated Karen with my Espeon! Take that, darkling! XD

"You mean I get the exemption?" Will asked.

"Absolutely not!" the woman replied.

Whoah, she reminds me of Cynthia here. XD

After coming back for 30 consecutive days

Now *that's* stubborn-ness.

and each and every time being rejected, Will became desolate

;.; Poor guy...
Ehm, feels stupid to ask, but, June 2002...how old was he back then? ^^;;;

"This boy maybe has a real fear of travelling,"

*raises eyebrow* Really?

However, the plan backfired, when Bruno decided to fight Will and got beaten badly.

LOL!!!!

"This kid has some talent;

Beating a fighting trainer when you're a psychic trainer =/= talent

where he was in charge of taking care of all sorts of statistics. He enjoyed his job greatly, being very much a mathematical mind,

...while this does fit Will, he suddenly starts to remind me of Zammy. Done on purpose? XD
Sorry, already have to finish first part of my review here, because I have to change computers. ^^;;; Will post other parts soon, don't worry.

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Ehm, feels stupid to ask, but, June 2002...how old was he back then? ^^;;;

Probably 15 or 16... I now forget exactly how old Sabrina is, how old did she turn back in The Elite Eight? That was 2008. And they're the same age, so subtract 6 from however old she turned that year.

...while this does fit Will, he suddenly starts to remind me of Zammy. Done on purpose?

Absolutely! Glad you saw that. I'm sure he'll be thrilled to know that Will and him are very much alike.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

I just checked, she was 21 in Dark Times, and since that has to be at least nine months ago (+ one month by now, I think), and her birthday is in May...well, she should be close to getting 22 now. ^^
Which would make Will about 16 back then.

Oh, yes, he will be absolutely thrilled about that! B-)

Her name was Karen.

*dances* I was right! ...okay, it was a bit obvious. 0=)

Karen then wiped him out, knowing all his techniques from the past, and she wiped out all his Pokémon with the mere use of her Umbreon.

x.x Ouch.

out in the first round.

Which will happen again.

"I did the same thing as you, boy," Karen replied. "I tried entering the Pokémon League tournament without earning eight badges… and finally they accepted me.

Interesting. Hadn't thought that Karen would be that lazy, too. lol

Karen then went on to the semifinals of the tournament, losing to Lorelei, but earning a bronze medal for her performance.

...like someone else, too...

Karen found herself charmed by Will, who seemed to have a crush on her.

lol

On their first "official" date, they enjoyed one long, wet, sloppy kiss.

lols *imagines this*...*faints*

"Wait a minute!" Sabrina protested. "I thought you never kissed her!"

LOL Sabrina's interruption is priceless...

"That was you who never kissed Gary. Us… well, we kissed… uh… well, a lot."

*lols and shakes head...*

"How many times?" Sabrina asked angrily.

How many times? *shakes head* Does that matter?

"I can't count the times on my fingers," Will responded.

And he's a Mathematican?!

"Should I even ask?" Sabrina wondered.

Probably no.

"It has to be somewhere around 300… maybe closer to 400," Will replied.

*sighs* Mathematicans...

Sabrina crossed her arms angrily.

"Yes, a very, very good kisser…"

*continues to giggle*

"Wait a minute! I'm coming up to the part that you might like!" Will exclaimed.

The breakup.

"You know, the breakup," Will replied.

Hah, was right! XD
Next and final part coming soon.

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

For Sabrina to think they never kissed is rather naive, or maybe too controlling. But she rules Will with an iron fist... okay, maybe that's Cynthia who rules her husband. Sabrina's a little more lenient, though you'll absolutely love the "lots of fanservice" at the end of this chapter.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

(Sorry that it took so long, but PC failed me)
Hm, I don't think it's too naive, as I can't think of Sabrina being that naive (okay, maybe in the ways of love, yet even that is a bit weird to imagine). It's rather her way of controlling. She's not as abusive as Cynthia, but she still likes to control Will, doesn't she? ;-)
Fanservice? I'm in for it! ^.^

This time Will soundly defeated Karen, needing only two Pokémon to wipe out three of Karen's.

Yay for Will!!^^

She wanted to become more powerful, and she was determined to figure out a way of doing just that.

Becoming queen

Meanwhile Will went on to lose in the quarterfinals of the tournament, still a step below what she had achieved the previous year.

Awwww...;.;

Her hands were creating small black holes and balls of dark energy, very similar to the attacks of her dark Pokémon. After some testing of her abilities, she realized that she indeed had dark powers.

Cool. Story fitting again. XD

Karen considered travelling away to Sinnoh to train under that woman, but she knew that her boyfriend Will did not like to travel, so she rejected that plan.

This gets more and more interesting, and I haven't even started reading the fanservice yet...

"You will be that replacement."

YAY!!^^

How could they possibly accept you before me?"

Luck? Lance's idiocy? Coincidence? Wait, not my fic...XD

You know what, Will, I've had it with your fear of travelling.

And years later, he travels willingly with Sabrina from place to place via teleport..

"And we lived happily ever after, the end," Sabrina added sarcastically.

*snickers*

"She'll find her way back in, or she's trying to become something greater than an Elite.

Queen

"So, I have to know, Will," Sabrina stated sternly. "Did you two… ever… well, you know?"

*double snicker*The rating's influences...

Will's face turned bright red. He looked away from Sabrina, whose face turned red for a different reason.

LOL

"Don't tell me… oh, I can't believe it!" Sabrina shouted. "I got married to a man who actually… oh, I don't even want to think about it!"

*shakes head* So what?

"You know, Will, I saved my first kiss for you – my first kiss! And you couldn't even save… oh, you're disgusting!"

She's overreacting a bit...

"No, she and I never did that… I just thought it would be fun to scare you a little."

....o,o Will...daring to scare her...whoah.

"Would I lie to you?" Will asked.

Yes.

"Now come on, get to the bedroom, we have some work to do!"

Work?!What kind of work is that? XD

"You'll be doing the work for nine months if we aren't careful," Will replied, as the two lovers ran off to their room, laughing and giggling.

...Roxy getting a sibling? Nah, better not. XD Have no place for one in my future fic right now. XD But the joke is grea, nevertheless. ^^

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Don't worry, Sabrina won't be having another child anytime soon. I thought you would enjoy the fanservice, which was an appropriate way to end things. Karen and Will's relationship never had the sparks of most relationships, it was a little dull, but it could always come up again... at the worst time possible, too.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Hehe, I hope so. XD While it would be cute and interesting to see, it would also mess up my plot. XD
0=) Well, after telling so much about Will x Karen (Who came up with Masakudoshipping, anyway? That sounds stupid...), a bit fanservice was nice. Especially for the 'one' fan that is reading. lol
...no, I won't ask which kind of situations these will be, no, I won't...

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

BTW, I wouldn't panic over what I wrote in my LiveJournal about someone close to Will dying (which could be Sabrina, which could be Karen, which could be ???). After all, my mind is subject to change, as proven by the fact that I had Sabrina dead and buried two days ago but then changed my mind. Of course, I love playing with your mind.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

No, I did not freak out about this, not at all, of course not, why should I freak over something like this, I mean, it's not as if she was even in real mortal danger, oh no, and you were never serious about killing Sabrina, of course not, you would never do such a thing...
>> I did freak out. Again. Yay. >>
At least your mind changes more often than my plot. My plot is a steady thing. There might be things added, but no vital changes. And usually no vital deaths. Usually. 0=)

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

The awesome thing is, you won't know until the day of the next-to-last chapter whether Sabrina lives or dies. So every single chapter is another chance for her to die... that's 22 chances (obviously no one dies in the epilogue). So I could keep her alive for a while, then kill her off suddenly at any time I want. Oh, how I love being a fanfic writer... I hold the power! (Actually, Cynthia does...)

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Well, a lot of suspense waiting for me, no? *sarcastic laughter* 21 chapters full of hoping...and then her dieing in the last chapter, lol. Of course, the final fight with Cynthia is going to be epic, but I hope not epically sad.
No one dies in the epilogue? Oh, I wouldn't be so sure of that. =3
Hehehe...have you ever asked yourself if you have more power or your characters? I did that once, when I was still writing my German fic. I made a sort of 4th wall breaking with me, as the author, communicating with my characters and each of us threating each other. They with their psychic and dark powers (I love to use these themes...obviously when one of the main characters is Sabrina) and I with the powers of the magic keyboard, as in, I could make literally everything happen (like reviving their old enemy who had been kinda dead for years then)...ah, the nostalgia.

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

What happens if Cynthia gets the ultimate power she wants? Wouldn't that mean Sabrina would have no chance of survival, no place to run, no place to hide? It will be fun, that's for sure, I look forward to writing it.

Sometimes I'll plan on writing something and then realize, I just like that character too much, and I spare them whatever bad stuff that was going to happen to them. It's just the way it works sometimes.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Depends on what ultimate powers means. There are many kinds of powers...and Cynthia already has a lot of them. >>
...after reading all that stuff about Cyrus, Dialga and the 'new world', I think I won't even dare to think of what you plan to do...no, no, no, this kind of character t(h)reating is too much for my poor soul to take. XD

Nah, not for me. 0=) If I want to kill off a character, I do so. Yet, so far, I did not. Luckily for my characters. ^^
As for the other part of the review...
Title: Did I tell you that there is a song 'Imagine'? Not that I like it, just that I was reminded of it...

"That's okay, Sabrina, I'll just eat yours," Liza said, ripping the vegetables off Sabrina's plate.

*stares and sweatdrops*

"Sabrina needs to lose a little weight, don't you think?" Liza asked Tate.

WHAT?!?!?! ...*shakes head* Liza, you're on thin ice...

"Oh, why did you get me in on this?" Tate questioned.

Because a certain reader demanded it.

"What is it, Will, that you couldn't share with me?" Sabrina asked.

"That's the thing, Sabrina, there's nothing!" Will exclaimed.

Even when Liza tries to be helpful, she ends up causing trouble. Especially between our favourite couple...

"And the Master Ball is ridiculously expensive, you capitalist pig," Liza broke in. "Who set that price of ¥30000? That's the price of a video game system."

*loling with tears in her eyes from laughing*

"It's a ball that can catch anything – not just Pokémon, even humans," Will explained.

Sabrina gulped and gave Will a cold stare. Liza giggled.

"I don't think Sabrina likes that idea of yours," Liza said.

O,O Methinkgs *I* don't like that idea, either!
BTW...isn't there already a Ball called Super Ball or is it that stupid translation mistake the German Nintendo made with mixing up the balls? ><

That's why it's all top secret,"

Top Secret= Cynthia will know about it next chapter.

But with a Super Ball, any living being can escape at will.

...Mix of Master Ball and Super Ball= ultimate weapon. >.<

"You're crazy," Sabrina exclaimed, getting up from the table. "You and those money-making hogs over at the Silph Company are so big on making a yen that you'll create something that could risk people's lives. Come talk to me when you've got an actually good idea, like something we could use if Cynthia were to attack our city."

Well, either you could use it against Cynthia, or Cynthia could use it against you. XD

"I like your boots!" Will shouted, hoping for Sabrina to change her mind with a bit of flattery.

Random. Really random.

She turned back to look at him, but simply gave him a cold stare, before turning back away and leaving the room.

And not working. XD!

She's seen things like Cynthia sitting on a throne made of gold, Sabrina no longer being on the face of the earth, an entire nation bowing down before Cynthia… I say they're nightmares, she says they're things of the future."

I say it's a new world.

I refuse to accept something like that, where Sabrina is gone...

Me, too.

Liza, I think you need to get your head checked

She's not the only one...*cough Cynthia cough*

Those premonitions you're having, they couldn't possibly come true.

They can. >.<

Just as much as I'm not going to rescue everyone, those bad things aren't going to happen.

Knowing their *luck*...they ARE going to happen.
You know...if Liza had a premotion about what is going to happen in 18 years...I doubt she would tell Will&Sabrina. Just for the fun of it, she wouldn't. XD!

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Wait a minute, did you review backwards here? All this is very important, and fortunately you haven't guessed how yet. The title "Imagine" was indeed based off the song by John Lennon, which for whatever reason came to my mind while thinking of a chapter name. Not that I agree with that song though, I know a money-making guy like Will certainly wouldn't!

 

[Psychic*Absol]

I split the review because one part was more fitted for this club, the other for the Cynthia club. ^.~
Well, who says I haven't guessed right and just didn't bother with posting my assumptions? =P
I know that song because my English teacher played it to us EVERY FRIGGING CHRISTMAS.
And it was such a nice song. ^.^ *hums to it*
Money-making? No, you haven't guessed my plot idea for Will, have you? Oo
On another note...both the fic and the pics might get delayed. >> Sorry. Zammy is not online right now, so the fic has unfortunately to wait, and my friend has yet another more important thing to do on Wednesday.
Yes, I'm as annoyed as you. >.<