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Sabrina Fanclub

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Well, the good thing about having a multiverse in your story is that you can do wacky things like that. How else would I have been able to get Hinata to glomp Naruto like she did? :P

And while I don't think I'll do much BlackVelvet Shipping in MC, I may skim over it for a bit, XD. But Sabrina has another guy on her mind, as you all know. And his name rhymes with 'pill.' =P

And believe it or not, the Shirona I have in mind for my fic is in fact very Queen-like, XD. Just wait a bit to see what I mean. ^_^

The only real yuri pairings I'll consider will probably be Soifon x Yoruichi and Nagisa x Honoka(the girl in my current theme). :D
 
I'm a OTP-type of person... the only time I've ever changed a pairing was Tabitha x Flannery to Steven x Flannery (and, in Haruhi Suzumiya, stopped shipping Koizumi and Mikuru after I realized how annoying Koizumi was). So it's just Will x Sabrina, and just Lucian x Cynthia... and you can notice that all my shippings follow a "straight" line, so to speak...

Soon enough more and more people will associate Cynthia with royalty... I really hope, at least. (Or at least those who read my fanfics, which can probably be counted on one hand.)

I pumped my fist when I read what you said about Sabrina having someone special on her mind... hopefully he is special to her... after all, you can always retcon the first chapter and make it so that Will wasn't the guy who killed Bill.
 
O,O You're kidding, Zammy....you WILL do BlackVelvetshipping?!? I thought you were kidding when I wrote my first post...(even skimming is enough for my taste- crackpairings like that only get so much love). But...whoa. Great. Wonderful. Marvelous. *.*

Yes, his name is Will. XD!

Thanks, Zammy. >> Soon, Cynthia will become a queen, Sabrina will get tortured by her and we all pray for airhead Giselle to beat her. Yay, wonderful future. I'll...wait...I'm a psychic Absol. o,o I would, technically, be the perfect pokemon for a dark/psychic like Cynthia is one. Uh oh....

CPF, I fear you might even notice some yuri pairing in my current fic. But not now. Later. But I fear it will come down to this...
 
Thanks, Zammy. >> Soon, Cynthia will become a queen, Sabrina will get tortured by her and we all pray for airhead Giselle to beat her. Yay, wonderful future. I'll...wait...I'm a psychic Absol. o,o I would, technically, be the perfect pokemon for a dark/psychic like Cynthia is one. Uh oh....

Is my fanfic that easy to guess? I will say that there is another woman besides Cynthia who hopes to have queen-like powers. And she isn't Giselle!
 
Is my fanfic that easy to guess? I will say that there is another woman besides Cynthia who hopes to have queen-like powers. And she isn't Giselle!
Me?!?!? I thought all these things already happened, CPF. XD And no, in reality, I have no idea who you mean. o,o How many women are there? Erica, Liza...waitasec...Karen...?!?!?!
 
Oh, I thought you were trying to guess my fanfic, because I was wondering why you were saying Cynthia "becomes" a queen... she's already a queen! And this woman who wants such power says she hates queens, but doesn't realize it herself that she wants to become one.
 
lol no. Since Zammy was thinking about including Queen Cynthia as well, I thought she would have soon enough 'power' in fanfics to really become queen, and then, well...you know the rest.
I won't guess anymore. I have to go to bed. >>;;;
 
We all love Queen Cynthia, don't we? I wonder how much we will tomorrow...

Good night, P*A... someday we'll look back at these as the "glory days" of the Sabrina Fanclub and PokeCommunity in general.
 
I love-hate her. And tomorrow (tomorrow is in 25 minutes for me...), it will be love-hate.

Yeah, thanks, goodnight. ^^ If we continue this for a while...I'll beat Zammy post wise and the Sabrina fanclub will become known as the home of the three freaks. XD!
 
I'm looking forward to seeing your new chapter, Alakazam.

And BTW, ff.net finally let me post the story up there (Chapter 2 is already up).
 
Hehe, yes, FF.net is back up. :D

And I unfortunately haven't gotten much done, XD. I'm going to call my brother shortly(he turned the big 2-0 today), and then watch some Sailor Moon. I'll hopefully get something posted tomorrow. ^^

And of course I have some stories to read as well. :P
 
Oo What's the DCC, Zammy? And how ill it help you? *evil face*

ff. net works? Halleluya, there are still miracles! XD Unfortunately, review will have to wait, university comes first (don't worry, CPF, will be done in half an hour or so)

Best wishes to your brother, Zammy. Even though he (probably) doesn't know me. =P

Hm, I thought you two would post a bit more without me...but oh well. XD
 
I slept way in today, so maybe I won't be able to write a chapter today... still I'm waiting for your review of Chapter 2... it should be interesting...
 
Sorry for the wait, but university kept me up.
I'll split the review a bit, cause it could get long again...

The title hurts. It does. Ouch.
The next morning, with the temperature fairly cool
0=) Of course, it's still March.
at whichever time she pleased.
*rolls eyes* Because she can.
His mansion was in a central portion of Saffron
I'm quite happy by this...though, if they get attacked, there's no way to flee.
Sabrina sighed, but she knew that since her parents were taking care of her daughter, she was free to now do this.
*giggles* See, babysitters are good. Though, I fear her taking care of this is not. ><
Where's Will when I need him? she thought, noting that her husband was at work.
I actually noticed that Will had not appeared yet...XD Wants to get away from home, that guy, doesn't he?
This time, her Alakazam had a tough time taking down its opponent.
Bronzong is Steel/psychic, right? Of course harder opponent for Alakazam.
"We have declared war on your city!"
And on the whole of Kanto, I might remember.
Apparently, she was starting her attacks right here, in Saffron City.
D'oh, I wonder why...*rolls eyes*

Short part, but I want to see your reply to it, first. 0=)
 
I couldn't have Sabrina getting into a battle while holding onto her baby, could I? So I made sure to give her to her grandparents for the time being. And of course Will's busy at work these days, making whatever they are now making at the Silph Company. This was one of the few times I actually mentioned weather, making me a poor writer, most likely (but I'm a minimalist, I say, who cares about the weather?).
 
Lol, yeah, you're right. That would remind me too much of these awful Xena episodes. Really, fighting with a baby...*shakes head*
I mention weather to use it to emphasize certain moods in the story (snow and winter in the 1-3 chapters, and the new spring in the fourth chapter), but I doubt it's that important to the story.

Erika, watching this from her gym in Celadon City, immediately prepared to leave and go fight against the Sinnoh gym leaders.
o,o Now it won't be Erika that you do kill, will it? Omg, that would actually surprise AND sadden AND scare me. Erica beat Cynthia last time, without her...one fighter less. Ouch.
"Je ne suis pas d'accord," Fantina told Candice.
My French knowledge gets stretched...XD!
"What is with you?" Gardenia asked. "Do you wish to anger the queen so much that you're willing to fight against our own?"

"I'm only doing what I feel is right," Candice replied.
Yay!!!! ^.^
all of the Sinnoh gym leaders who had attacked Saffron had been defeated
Except the one who had turned against Cynthia. ^.^
There was damage to quite a few houses, but no one had been killed.
So far, no one had been killed.
"This has been a total failure," Volkner cried.
No failure on your side as long as Cynthia hasn't been defeated yet. >>
THE VERY NEXT SENTENCE
"No, it hasn't," a voice said.
...I AM psychic. I knew she would appear now. o,o Whoa.
Cynthia then teleported away, with Sabrina stuck in the ball of dark energy.
*pokes* And Will? I suppose Cynthia doesn't care about him. (Lucian, though...)
 
Yeah, it's a female rivalry. Cynthia hates Sabrina, but she couldn't care less about Will. As for what Fantina said, I forget already! I'll have to translate that and see what I had her saying...
 
Women are so predictable. I guess it is. XD And Will is spared for now, cause Lucian has other things to take care of. 0=)
XD!!! I don't know either...ask Zammy, maybe he knows. XD
Last part of today. (I read until the end, and damn, I feel bad. ;.;)
"I didn't get to kill you the last time we met," Cynthia replied.
AND YOU WON'T TODAY; YOU WON'T WON'T WON'T!!!! >.<!!!!
"No… no more… you are…" Sabrina replied.

"Why, thank you," Cynthia said. "I didn't have to force it out of you this time."
1. I think either Roy or Roxette is the strongest psychic now, and second...I never thought I would say this, but...I hate you Cynthia. >>
"A baby? Now isn't that a coincidence?" Cynthia stated.
It's more a coincidence that these two should theoretically be born only days apart from each other. (My interpretation: Roxette 1st March, Roy 3rd March. 0=) )
And it will be even more of a coincidence if your Roy comes home fourteen years later, Cynthia, and tells you that he fell in love with a girl called Roxette
he is destined to be greater than your daughter.
That's what YOU think. (Though it IS in his genes, theoretically)
"Please, stop, Cynthia!" Sabrina cried.

"That's Queen Cynthia to you!" Cynthia yelled. "Attack more, Lucario!"
;.;
"P-please, Q-Queen Cyn-thia," Sabrina cried weakly. "Show some mercy."

"Never!" Cynthia replied. "Attack!"
;.;
Will, Sabrina said telepathically. Take care of Roxette for me.

She then closed her eyes and passed out.
;.;
"I think my Xatu could carry you,"
XD Funny fact: The Xatu of your Will can fly too, like the one of mine. ^^
"I feel Sabrina's presence in… eastern Sinnoh, the Pokémon League."
*NOW* he should know what's going on. >.<
"Does Queen Cynthia really care about having Sinnoh take over Kanto, or does she just have a personal grudge against someone from here?" Volkner wondered.
I'll personally go for the latter, and no, I'm not biased, not at all....
"Queen Cynthia told us too!"
>>;;; So if she tells you to jump off a cliff, will you do that, too? (old joke, I know, but I just had to use it)
"Même ici," Fantina added.
Ici= here, so...hm...
"Queen Cynthia may have powers, but how powerful really is she? I wonder if she can withstand the power of ice…"
I fear she can, I fear she can....

Now, did you ever ask if you tortured Sabrina too much? *sarcasm*
 
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So this was the tough part, Cynthia torturing Sabrina. I thought about her showing some mercy halfway through, but I decided against it. That leads to what happens in Chapter 3, "Komm, süßer Tod".

And the babies may end up growing up to being stronger psychics, but not quite yet... their powers still need to develop... though I think I'll take your birthdays for them, those sound just about right... 3/1 for Roxette and 3/3 for Roy.

Oh, and I meant for Fantina to say "Same here," hopefully that was the right way to say it, if not, Fantina's language is broken anyway.
 
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