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Absorbing the dark attack sounds too much like what happened in my story...and kinda like my general interpretation of dark attacks. *g* As the opposite of psychic, they kinda have to work on the soul, too.
(Somebody explain to me again what teh difference betwenn 'light' force and 'dark' force in Star Wars is, again. Is there even one? )
Well, there's always the chance of buying an alarm clock or, working at a gorcery. *pokes a certain someone*

I hadn't doubted her staying alive for quite some time. >> Is there even some way to kill her? Aside from using crosses and holy water, you know...
^.^ I'm happy that I can make you write without resorting to blackmail. I might even have another surprise up my sleeve, you know...
(not to mention that I'm already thinking about a plot for that future)
 
Hopefully the new chapter is up for you, so you can see it now. Your reaction to it should be interesting...

And there's probably no way to kill Cynthia, the only question is, does she still have a heart? Besides the one that beats for Lucian... we'll find out.

And may your plot for the future be contingent on everyone being alive? Uh-oh, then...
 
I looked, but it isn't up right now. >> Hmpf. Will read it asap, though. As soon as it's up, rather.

I thought so. And yeah, she may be as evil as a devil, but...she has a heart. For Lucian AND Roy. 0=)

XD Well, right now, only our four psychics and their children, though I'm thinking about taking Erica and Karen into plot...though, I have to remind you, that's still only a 'starting' plot, nothing really serious yet. Besides a few key scenes, nothing it written in stone yet (nothing is written at all, yet XD).
 
Strange that it's not up yet, I got a message that it was updated.

I feel such mixed feelings... I really like Cynthia, and I want good things for her... yet I've made her evil, and I always make evil characters pay... but she has a son, I can't make her son grow up without a mother.

I'll make sure not to kill off those characters... well, unless I already did!
 
^^ It's up now. I guess ff. net is a tad bit slow today. >>

You're not the only one, you're not the only one...I adore Cynthia as a character, yet I want an epic battle between her and Sabrina where Sabrina brutally murders beats her fine and fair. Cynthia is damn good as an evil character, yet that's something I never wanted her to be (remember, many months ago, when you hinted that Cynthia would be your new villain and how my reaction was? I never wanted her to be one...), so...I'm unsure as well.

You don't have to. ^^ If it fits your plot more to kill them, then do so! XD I can still modify my plot, I'm sure of that. ^^

Edit: Just when I was about to read your chapter, my MP3-Player (set on random) was playing "Staying Alive"...the irony, the irony!!! XD
 
I remember you didn't want Cynthia to be evil, but she was perfect... after all, she basically is perfect... a powerful Champion, with absolutely beautiful looks... so that makes her a perfect femme fatale. Would Sabrina ever beat her, though, I don't know... *evil laughter*

I'll kill off whoever I want of course in that case, maybe everyone... *more evil laughter*

Oh boy, it'll be interesting to see what your reaction to this chapter is, that's for sure...
 
*takes deep breath* My reaction to this chapter? You want my reaction to this chapter?
You'll get it.

Funny version: When I said, you can kill off whoever you want if it helps your plot...let me correct myself. Not everyone.
(Goodness, now it's playing Bleeding Love...how more ironic can this go? >.<)
A bit more serious version: CPF, you have a list of people that hate you now that's as long as the phone book of Berlin, if not longer. Me, Zammy, Sabrina, ME, Will, every other member of this club, ME
Most serious version:
ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME (AGAIN), CPF?!?!?!?
*takes another deep breath* Had to get this out before I get onto the review. (which will be in the next post and probably long [and painful] again)
 
Not everyone... oops...

Now what are we going to do without Sabrina? I guess you'll find out tomorrow...

Maybe the second-most anticipated review ever, behind the first time I tortured Sabrina. It should be interesting.
 
*glares* >> Yeah 'oops' is the right word.

What we're going to do without her? Well, I know what I'll do. If the next chapter doesn't include a nice happy surprise...this won't only be the second-most anticipated review, but also the last.
Told you I would stop if you killed her for real. 0=)

"Why?" Will asked, rushing over to his fallen wife. "What has she ever done to you?"

"She's my main competitor in this world,"
And what's with Roy and Roxette? 0=)
"Don't say that!" Will shouted. He then picked up Sabrina's lifeless body. "Oh no."

"Oh yes," Cynthia responded. "Sabrina is dead."
WTFHAOMAMEOAKPAJDIJ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? (yes, this pretty much sums up my reaction)
"You… you murderer!" Will shouted.
She was, before, too, you know...
"Xatu must have the power to teleport people
Funny thing that Will doesn't know the basics about his own pokemon, but okay, the situation is not one to think about attacks and stuff....
"How wonderful it would be to have you suffer the same fate as Sabrina."
Will she/you kill Erica? Won't she/you? Do I even care anymore? T.T
holding his wife's body in his hands
Arms, rather. Or did she shrink in death? (Goodness, why am I meaking so stupid jokes? >.<)
"No… no…" he cried. "This can't be…"
;.; How can you torture so many people....goodness, Roxy's going to be half-orphaned....>.<
Will, just get me to the hospital already!
I reeled back at his. I really did. Then I broke out with laughter. NO, I'M NOT DEAD YET, YET I WILL BE IF YOU DON'T GET ME TO THE FRIGGIN HOSTPITAL SOON! lol
he did not know whether he was imagining it or if she had really telepathically spoke to him.
I hope she really spoke to him. ;.;
Apparently, she was still alive… just barely.
^^ And still has the power to scream at her husband. That's the Sabrina we know. ^^
The "battle" had barely begun, and Erika found herself on the ground, powerless. She had been hit by a giant ball of dark energy by Cynthia, and it completely wiped her out. She looked up as Cynthia came walking towards her, ready to step right on her face.
o,o Just o,o And ouch. A big fat ouch.
Cynthia did not want to kill Erika in front of them,
Any reason why?
so she merely gave Erika a kick in the face.
You know, Cynthia should start wearing these soccer shoes....>>;;;

First part, finished. You got me through a rollercoaster ride, quite one here.
 
I can't force you to, but just remember there's still an *important* chapter coming up tomorrow... and there will then be three people in Will's house...

Arms, not hands... oops...

Cynthia still wants to look good to the Sinnoh people, remember they don't believe she killed anyone. So she couldn't kill Erika like that.
 
*rolls eyes* The third one will be Liza. And she will be there because of a funeral.

Np. I should start a second job as a beta-reader. ^^

Oh, okay, right, of course, my mistake. I forgot about that, but you're right. ^^;;;;

"I'm not mad at you… but I am upset with a certain two of you."
Remember, kids, do not try to lie to someone who's psychic.
"I am a merciful queen,
*coughs* Yeah, riiiight. *last chapter cough cough, Sabrina begged for mercy, too*
"I promesse," Fantina added.
That's one thing I do know! ^^ (I= Je in French, so it should be Je promesse). And I doubt you two will do that. ^.~
I have other business to take care of."
Like killing innocent gym leaders.
"I have no use for you, Lady Erika,"
I just noticed...Queen Cynthia calls her Lady Erica...hm...some respect there for her after all or just a slip into un-queen-likeness?
"Gloom, paralyze her," Erika said.
Same trick won't work twice.
Will had left it behind on purpose, in order to give Erika an escape route.
Or he had left it because he had been deeply troubled about other things and wasn't able to think about his Pokemon.
Cynthia looked on, not upset at all.
Has there been one moment where she was seriously upset? Aside from her time in jail without Lucian, that is...
"I can't figure her out," the doctor said. "There's no way someone should be able to survive in this condition, but miraculously she lives on."
That's our Sabrina, isn't she? Quite a strong one she is...*wipes away a tear*
Take care of Roxette… be a good father… make her a strong woman… Sabrina replied.

I will, Will responded. But you're going to be with me the whole way.
*starts to cry* Oh my god...If you ever think that you don't manage to write romantic moments between these two anymore...I can tell you...you're wrong. This one is...very romantic. ;.;
 
I will tell you this... read tomorrow, and you'll be a very surprised Absol... there's something I said yesterday that will happen then.

I could have translated the whole sentence to French, but remember that Fantina's language is broken, so she sometimes speaks half-English, half-French, and that was a case there.

And no, Cynthia purposely called her Lady Erika. She knew about her name because, well, she's psychic, and it was meant in a condescending way. (As in, you think you're something for being Lady Erika, while I'm still queen.) And note that Erika still calls her Queen Cynthia.

And if those were Sabrina's last words... weren't they romantic?
 
(My browser killed itself again...Hmpf. >>)

Great, now you make me skip through all your posts of yesterday...maybe I'll find something.

Yeah, yeah, I remembered that, but I still wanted to point that out...to remind myself that I can still speak French myself. XD

Ah...very clever idea, really. B-)
(Maybe Erica has a thing for...no, no, no, won't even try to think about that. ...)

T.T Of course they were! Reason why I'm near crying! (And not only because I choose to listen to Greogrian love songs now....these help a bit...)Will's words were romantic, though, too. He really loves her...*sniffs*

Giselle had just previously been nonchalant about Cynthia's declaration of war on Kanto.
*rolls eyes* That girl changes her opinions everyday, too, doesn't she?
"Giselle," Lorelei said, "do you remember Cynthia's power?"

"Yes," Giselle responded. "I stood up against her well!"
Then you don't remember them well.
I would have won myself!" Giselle argued.
Yeah, riiiiight. Keep dreaming, girl.
"She nearly beat all those trainers by herself the last time we battled."
Someone should try to beat her with Pokemon. Not in a Pokemon battle I mean, but Dark/psychic...BUGBUGBUGBUG pokemon against her.
Giselle had fallen into his trap.
What trap?
"Three-time defending champion, that is,"
With three-times the amount of air in the head a normal person could take.
"And it won't just be Kanto she's fighting against."
*.* Now *this* will be an epic battle!
"This Team Rocket will not make the same stupid mistakes of the past Team Rockets,"
Like using ridicolous T-Shirts with big, red, 'Rs'? *giggles*
"It starts…" Karen replied, pausing for effect, "…with your cousin, Lance."
Great, the (ex) champion joins Team Rocket. This gets weirder and weirder. But if it helps against Cynthia...*shrugs*
"But I've heard some disturbing reports lately."

"You mean about Cynthia and the Sinnoh gym leaders attacking Saffron City?" Lance asked.

"Yes, those would be the ones," Clair replied.
And what would be of the ones of two gym leaders (hopefully only) nearly killed? ;.;
"Currently I am forming a team of trainers that will serve as persuasion experts," she replied. "We are going to spread negative rumors about Sinnoh across the Kanto and Johto regions, until everyone is fully aware of the need to be united against Sinnoh. Then, once we have enough support, we will make our move, and swiftly destroy Sinnoh's hopes of taking over our lands."
You know...if you try to destroy Sinnoh, and not only its hopes, then you're not much better than Cynthia. >>
"Don't worry, they have no intention on recreating Team Rocket,"
*rolls eyes* Of course not. ...how stupid can Lance and Clair be to believe that?!?!
"He's just as naïve as ever."
He is. >>
"Remember, the key word is persuasion, not propaganda. We're only persuading people, not propagandizing."

"It's the same thing," Bruno commented.

"Of course it's the same thing!"
Help me, these two are the same thing? o,o According to my (online) dictionary, they aren't...
And I hate Karen more and more....*giggles* Any more reason to use her in my future fic. *evil grin*
it seemed to him that as much as Karen hated the idea of Cynthia being queen, Karen herself wanted to be a queen.
*searches for one of her older posts* *can't find it* But you remember that I guessed right here, didn't I? B-) Again! Yay!!!
Coincidence: 0, P*A 2 Ha, Ha, Ha!!!

You know which part will come now...
 
(Maybe Erica has a thing for...no, no, no, won't even try to think about that. ...)
A thing for what? I'm strangely curious...
What trap?
His "trap" of trying to get her to care... that's hard enough, you know.
Help me, these two are the same thing? o,o According to my (online) dictionary, they aren't...
No, not really, but for Karen's intents and purposes she's only trying to do one thing, and that is to blackmail Cynthia and the land of Sinnoh...
*searches for one of her older posts* *can't find it* But you remember that I guessed right here, didn't I? B-) Again! Yay!!!
Come next chapter, a third woman will want to be queen. Power-hungry girls all over the place.
 
A thing for what? I'm strangely curious...
Originally, I wanted to say 'women', as in, well, you know what, but now, I think maybe Erica has a thing for monarchies, too. XD

His "trap" of trying to get her to care... that's hard enough, you know.
*waves hand* Hey Giselle, I' drowning here! Hey, Giselle! GISELLE!!! ...*light bulb* I want an autograph! ^.^ *Giselle rushes over*
*ggg*

Come next chapter, a third woman will want to be queen. Power-hungry girls all over the place.
o,o Holy heck, another? We have Cynthia, Karen, (Giselle),...who's next, Liza?!?!
Or Erica?!?!

Prepare to be killed now. >>
she heard a man sobbing loudly.
!!!! >.<
(Offtopic...the song I'm listening right now is about a man who sings that he will be king and his girlfriend will be queen...the coincidences are scaring me...)
where she saw Will crying hysterically.
>.< I knew something was wrong here, but...(next sentence)
"Sabrina is dead," a doctor told the nurse.
This is the one sentence Sabrina fans never want to read. Omg...for a moment I hoped that doctor was called 'House' too...but now...omg...*sniffs*
Sabrina, he thought. Please, just say something… let me know you're alive…

He got no response, and he continued to cry.
;_; That poor guy...I can so feel with him...sitting there, waiting, hoping...*sniffs* Goodness, very moving scene. And serious. Because even when she was hurt by Cynthia the first time, and Will feared she would die, too (you know, where you almost got me, too...), she talked to him, reassuring him that everything was okay...but now she's silent...this scares me. Seriously.
His worst nightmare had come true.
Our worst nightmare. Omg, that poor guy...he never wanted Sabrina to fight with Cynthia again, probably because he knew how this would end...but in the end, she had no chance....*sniffs*

I read through your last posts and I think I have an idea about what's going to happen...wild guess....dark powers.
 
you know what, but now, I think maybe Erica has a thing for monarchies, too
Erika has a boyfriend, she just is a very polite woman who respects her superiors. Maybe a little too much...

So Sabrina is dead. Now what do we do? Can we even move on as a club? Yes, we must. Because tomorrow something not-so-surprising will occur, and then not everything will be okay again.
 
...since when is Cynthia her superior? Cynthia is Sinnoh league, Erica is Kanto league, so...

Yes, we can. >> Because there are still other fics out there. And I hope for your sake that something will happen tomorrow because something like this happened before.
I'm only unsure what the *not everything* means...okay, Cynthia staying alive is technically a bad thing, but...
Though, the surprising...hm...it would fit into my theory, though....
 
Cynthia's a queen. Erika may not live in Sinnoh, but she still respects Cynthia's position.

Are my stories becoming too predictable? I mean, you seem to have guessed everything that has happened with Sabrina and Cynthia so far... I hope I'm not giving away too much information...
 
Okay, okay, okay. Though, if I were in the pokemon world, I wouldn't respect Cynthia as a queen. Rather Sabrina then.

No, no, no!!!! XD It's not your fics again, it's good old me that's just damn good at guessing plots and fics and everything, that doesn't happen just with your fic, but a lot of fics...I told you how I drive authors crazy with it....it's my own fault. ^^;;;; I scared my best real life friend with it once, guessing half the plot of her vampire fic out of the blue. XD!!!
 
But would Sabrina want to be a queen herself? That's an interesting question.

Maybe after I've finished scaring you enough times, I won't give away as much, and make it a little harder for you to guess. Of course it's necessary for me to get you to read the next chapter, otherwise you'll give up on reading, so I've given out enough hints as to what's going to happen. Wouldn't it be cruel if I told you that I was lying about these hints and that Sabrina really was dead?
 
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