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Sabrina Fanclub

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I like the song, it does fit Sabrina well. Plus it's sung by a woman, making it better. You do a good job with finding these songs; of course you may have noticed that a lot of my chapter names are names of songs.
 
^^ Thanks. It wasn't as easy as I had hoped, as youtube had not every song on my long list of possible ones...>> And of course, sometimes, I hadn't been able to find the name of the singer.

I did notice that, and I copied it from you. Or, more accurately, I'll try to use that to keep the future fic in style, so to say. ^^
 
Yay! Another part of my fanfic style rubs off on you! All that's left is for you to start writing more dialogue than descriptions and then... wait, scratch that. You don't want to be so minimalist like me.

So I'm writing the next chapter, but since it's so important it won't be up until tomorrow... I don't know where the review will belong, after all it's mainly about the queen.
 
XD Sorry, CPF, but I'll use that style only for the future fic. ^^ My own fanfictions will stay in their own way. Meaning that I 'may' change my style for that fic and mix my style and yours. ^^ You know, more dialogue, but at the same time, my descriptions. I don't know how it will work out, just have to try it. ^^

Hm, important chapter then? And about the queen? Hm. I guess I'll post the review in the other thread, or I split it up and post the parts with Sabrina here and the ones with Cynthia in the other...yay, I love making it more difficult than needed. XD!
 
No Sabrina in the next chapter, I'm afraid. We're back to Sinnoh where some incredibly important things are going on, including that twist I told you about.
 
XD Okay, then, the review will be in the other club.
Twist, what twist? Again a twist? Man, I'm kinda behind. XD

Hm, shouldn't we talk about something ontopic here? Like what happens to Sabrina in your fic Like that happens to Sabrina and Roxette in my future fic Like...I give up. XD I just love talking about fanfics too much. ^^
 
I was just about to give it away, but I decided you can wait until tomorrow to find out. It may surprise you, I hope it does.

Sabrina's going to get some help from an old friend... things won't turn out nearly as badly as they could have for her.
 
XD Surprising me isn't easy, yet you've managed that a few times by now.

Hm, old friend...and things not turning out as badly? I remember that she wanted to turn herself in, I wonder if it's about that...after all, I really can't imagine Sabrina sitting in prison for the rest of the fanfic.
 
I think this time I'll surprise you, just wait and see.

Someone's going to have to talk things out with Sabrina to get her to realize it wasn't her fault... or at least in their mind it wasn't her fault. And besides, if we've got a murderer accepted as a queen, surely she could be accepted at least as an innocent person...
 
Well, we hope. ^^ I kinda want to be surprised.
Not to mention that I like to surprise people as well.

Well, seeing how you worded it, Will didn't manage to talk her out of it, did he? I am quite wondering now who that could be....the closest choice would be someone from her old days as a Rocket, but who is there? Koga is dead, Giovanni is dead, Blaine is, I think dead,....Lt. Surge? lols
I don't want to know who would even think of accepting Cynthia as queen, aside from Lucian, and Roy.
 
Well, those Sinnoh gym leaders have sort of accepted her... not to mention any citizens of Sinnoh who like their land being in power. But as for Sabrina, I didn't mean a "really" old friend, just a friend that she's had for a while.
 
But they don't know yet that she already killed. And the ones who assume that she could be cruel enough to do so (Volkner, Candice, Fantina) don't trust her anymore.
Ehm, is this the Cynthia or the Sabrina fanclub? *g*

Well, in this case, I can only think of Erica...eh, Erika, I mean. XD!
And, come on, they're not that old. It's only been, what, three/two years? XD
 
I can't say Sabrina actually had any friends at Team Rocket... even if she did, she probably wouldn't remember them. Even so, she wanted to be the best of all of them.

Actually, if you look back at my first story, there's one point where Sabrina proposes an idea to make the Rocket executives the new Elite Four and Giovanni the new champion... so in a sense her mind-controlled self sort of treated Giovanni like a king. Needless to say her real self didn't.
 
'Friends', well, okay, no real friends then, but at least these were the people she mostly talked and dealed with. ^^
Not only wanted, she was the best of them (I AM currently re-reading these chapters, you know ^.~)

Yup, I noted that somewhere in my notebook *rushes through it* (after all, I need to make little back-hints to your story). Even though I think Giovanni would have liked to be treatened like a king by everyone, I doubt he would have ever gotten the power Cynthia now has.
 
Sorry that I didn't get on today, P*A. But you're right, it was clear that Sabrina was the best and strongest of those Team Rocket executives.
 
No problem, I didn't do much yesterday, too (Check: Review? No. Chapter 4? No. *sweatdrops*).
She was the first one to turn against TR, too. 0=)

BTW...I'm not sure if we should discuss this here or via email or PM or whatever, but I'm thinking about including a tournament in my future fic. Yet I fear that I would be biased there and kick out Giselle in the first round, so...yeah. XD Help please. XD
 
What do you need help with? I know all about setting up tournaments, I know a site that does it, or is it something else?
 
Not directly with setting up the tournament, I did that once in my old fic, too. It's rather that I don't know how to make the battles without sounding biased. XD Because I just know I would throw Giselle out even though she's an almost unbeatable trainer, I would probably make the psychics too strong and leave other trainers out too much.
 
Oh, well, that's easy. Just let me choose the winners! Of course, if they are battles between people from people from the future, then I wouldn't know what to do. Seriously, though, you can have whoever you want win, but Giselle is supposed to be strong.
 
XD I guess I could even get away with you choosing the winner, but I need to make up the list first, too. I'm really not sure right now who to put on there. After all, quite a few new characters aside from Roy and Roxette (who may or may not be in the tournament. 0=) )
What makes it even more difficult is that I originally wanted to wait with making up the list until you're finished with part 5. Easy reason why...if I had started before part 4, Candice, Fantina and Volkner would certainly not have been on that list. 0=)

But we can agree on that IF Roxette and Roy are in the tournament, both are strong trainers, especially the latter.
 
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