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Sabrina Fanclub

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We'll see... I think it's still a long way off until Sabrina and Cynthia have their big battle, so she'll have some more time to live for now. *evil laugh*
 
Alakazam17 said:
I think I speak for Psychic*Absol as well when I say this, but...DON'T KILL SABRINA!!!!!
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*g* Zammy, in case I'm offline and CPF gets crazy, unreal ideas like this again, you surely have the permission to speak and behead him for me.
....I'm torn. Either CPF isn't kidding and will kill Sabrina in the finale battle, leaving me with quite some plot problems *gets out her scratchbook again and tries to think of ideas how to fix her plot* or he's just teasing me with the possibility and in the end, will *almost* kill her again, giving me a heart attack.
....have I ever mentioned how much I hate you? >>
(j/k)

BTW, Zammy...Chapter 4. Please. NOW.
 
If Sabrina survives, it'll be out of my sympathy for Will. I don't want him to live the rest of his life without his wife, so I'll have a hard time actually killing her. At the same time I've got to think about Cynthia's feelings, and she wants Sabrina dead. When you try to cater to your own fictional characters, you end up having problems like this.
 
...you'll only let Sabrina live because of Will?!??!?! ...ehm, are you sure you still belong to this club? After all, I could throw you out any moment.
Cynthia is a murderer. She wants people, certain people dead. That is no acceptable wish anymore, that's insane. >>

*still waiting for Zammy*
 
No, of course I love Sabrina. But wouldn't it be beautiful for her to go down in defeat as a strong woman, risking all she had for the love of her husband and her daughter? It's a zero-sum game. Someone has to win, someone has to lose between Cynthia and Sabrina. There's no way for it to end in a tie... so it's just about me choosing who wins and who loses.
 
...it kinda would be beautiful, but...no. No, I don't want her to die. Not for the sake of Will, not for the sake of Roxette, not for my sake, not for the sake of my plot, just never. Just imagening how heart-broken Will would be makes me almost cry. I know, theoretically, there cannot be a tie, but...I don't want either of them to die. I like both Cynthia and Sabrina. There has to be another resolution besides "there can only be one". Of course it would be herioc, but...damn it, CPF, you can't kill her. >.<
Will would commit suicide then and who raises Roxette then? Liza? Cynthia?!?!?!

Btw, posted Chapter 4 today. >> In the mood to kick out a certain champion in the next chapter and a certain abra in the epilogue.
 
I should have made myself a Starmie...

Come on, P*A, you know how I teased you before and I never killed Sabrina off, what makes you think I will this time? Though I will admit I have seriously considered it this time... I have to create suspense in some way, because otherwise you've managed to guess almost every single major plot point. Though you won't guess what's coming next...
 
Crazy Packers Fan said:
I should have made myself a Starmie...
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Or a Ditto, these are hard to kill. *g*
(I can still change that, btw. The epilogue isn't written yet at all. [But I know already that it will have even more insider jokes then before...dealing with certain champions, their evilness and teasing])

Crazy Packers Fan said:
Come on, P*A, you know how I teased you before and I never killed Sabrina off, what makes you think I will this time?
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This:
Crazy Packers Fan said:
Though I will admit I have seriously considered it this time...
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And the fact that I can *see*, like I said before, the plot moving on without Sabrina. Especially because you seem to be currently super-obsessed with Cynthia, shoving Sabrina into background and possible death. >.< I don't want to influence your story that much, but...I guess it would hurt me somehow if Sabrina now died after four friggin parts where she always (or nearly always) found a solution.
 
I think I forgot Starmie was a Psychic Pokemon the last time you asked what Psychic Pokemon I would be, because it is my absolute favorite Pokemon, plus it's even more silent than an Abra. There's little coincidence that I gave Giselle a Starmie.

The plot could move on without her, but you do have to remember the one thing about me... I love WAFFLEs. Warm And Fuzzy Feeling Lovely Endings. (Plus I love waffles too, but that's another story...)
 
Kay then you'll magically have been transformed into a Starmie. *g* But you have to say a few lines, no complete silence. *g*

*bakes you 'waffles'- double meaning, heheh* If that keeps Sabrina alive, then you'll get tones of these. ^^
 
I'm still not sure how long the story's gonna go, but I don't think I can finish it in 20 chapters. So it's still a long way off until the ending. In the coming weeks I suspect life will become busier and I might fall behind the timeline of the story. Currently I'm at March 20, so I'm still a week ahead.
 
I don't think that, either. Many, many conflicts build up here, too many to find conclusions to in twenty chapters, considering how far you already are.

Yeah, my life will get busier in April too. >< I hoped I would have finished Spring's Revenge by then, but it turned out to be longer that expected. ><

BTW, I'll review chapter tomorrow. Too tired today.
But...go back to Sabrina & Will soon, plz! >.<
 
Boo! So disappointing, not getting a review today. Oh well...

I'll return to Sabrina and Will in Chapter 13, because I have a great storyline for them (well, maybe not so great). But Chapter 12 is a very important chapter, remaining in Sinnoh.
 
No, CPF will not force you to review today, you are tired, no, CPF will not force you to review today...
Argh, short review. Cynthia is not in vain, she's insane, Lucian is cracked up and the only sane one is scarred.

It better be great. >> Or else...!
 
That's about what I thought you'd think of this chapter. Neither Cynthia nor Lucian has any bit of normalcy remaining... they're both set in their ways. It was actually hardest to write Candice's part, because I was having trouble thinking what a normal human being would say. I almost had Cynthia show just a little bit of humility, but I took that out at the last moment.

When I say great, I mean I'm really excited about writing it. But it's not so great in that it may be a little depressing. And no, Sabrina will not even come close to Cynthia, so there's no chance of her dying (I promise!). There's just... oh, that's enough for now.
 
o,o That's a nice way of putting it. I was at least screaming "She's insane!" three times and there were a few moments where I wondered just how their relationship could went so wrong, but then I guessed some men like to be kicked around by their girls.
Not even Will is that...I don't know, weak? Definitely not the right word, but I don't know another.
...well, I give the crown of being the most insane member of the club to you, without doubt. I may regain it once I write the sequel to Spring's Revenge (that one will focus more on humour and heck, it will be fun if everything I set up works out), but for having trouble to write Candice's normal part, you get that prize.

...should I be afraid? >.< At least she does not die, but everything even a bit depressing is hard for these two right now, I think. They went through so much....>.<
 
Will doesn't really like being pushed around by Sabrina, he just sort of accepts that Sabrina's always going to be a strong woman. And with Giselle and Joe, Joe is just so enamored with Giselle's beauty and power that he goes along with whatever she says. But Lucian actually seems to enjoy being inferior to Cynthia. And there's no doubt that Cynthia enjoys being superior to him.

Anything bad that happens to Sabrina in Chapter 13 is your fault. Yes, you heard me. Because I was ready to let Sabrina off the hook for her past sins, and you insisted to me that she was a murderer. Now, she will pay.
 
XD Will has got to accept that, for he will never be stronger than Sabrina, in many ways. Joe admires Giselle so much that he doesn't think about beating her down or anything. It's just Lucian that is that weird...
Yet, at least you have very different sorts of men. XD

*goes off to poke herself*....if she ends up in prison for the rest of the fic, I'll punish myself in a way I have to think of. Probably will have to do with my fic. Won't be nice. ><
As long as not only Sabrina gets punished in the end, but also Cynthia...
 
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