@Zammy: I think only about twenty more pages. 0=) Hey, you could have thrown yourself into the post feast, yet you did not.
Hey, Will needs kids! At least in several different universes! Give them back! ...did I mention that I wouldn't mind being evil in your fic? 0=)
...BETA-READ!!! And WRITE!!! ...AND SHIR-....that's my trademark! *foxcry*
You know, if you get any slower, Chapter 5 Part two will be finished before you are finished with beta-reading! I am serious, it's already 12 pages long. XD
@CPF Is your new avatar a hint? >>;;;;
Queen Sabrina= evil. Even imo. We should be happy that we got over royalty and now they try to get it back again. x.x
A hint, just for the three of us? ^^ Yay!
Will this post be long enough for the review? I sure hope so. x.x
Title= *snicker* Ts, ts, ts.
She smiled, knowing she had his complete attention.
Is there one moment where she doesn't have it?
She had conquered every single opponent of hers during the last few months using only her Alakazam
*cough winning streak going to end as soon as she's going to meet Silver*
"How badly does he want this badge?" Sabrina questioned.
"How am I supposed to know?" the assistant responded.
Lol Great question- and great answer.
"Bring him to me – alone," Sabrina stated.
*snicker*
"I'm Gary Oak from Pallet Town, and I have six badges so far… I merely need two more in order to reach the Pokémon League," Gary replied.
O,O Just O,O...
just tell me who won," Will stated. "Come on, cut to the chase."
LOL He's like me, I don't care so much about Pokemon battles either...pain in the back to write about...
Alakazam utterly dominated the battle, and Nidoking was ready to faint.
*foxyay*
Gary left his Pokémon out there to take the ongoing abuse, at first not caring how bad it was getting beaten up psychically.
That's how Paul is today. ^^
Instead Nidoking came tumbling backward – right down upon Gary!
O,O ...x.x Ouch.
Gary just stared at Sabrina with a strange smile. "I must have died and gone to heaven," he said. "You must be an angel… tell me your name."
Eh, okay...Ooo~kay.
No boy had ever told her that she was beautiful before – all of them were too scared of her.
*nods* Can understand that completely.
She knew the best thing was to try to give him some sort of medical help, but she also wanted to continue to live out a possible fantasy of having a boy head over heels in love with her.
Is 'artificial' love (for lack of a better word) as good as real love? Methinks not.
"You wear boots… oh, aren't they perfect on you!" Gary exclaimed.
*shakes head* What's with boys and boots? XD
She did not want to kiss him… she wanted to reserve her lips for someone special.
Cool. Just cool. ^.^
She had resolved that she would only kiss a boy whom she truly loved.
True love is hard to find. Lucky that she found it (later). ^.~
This boy could have a girlfriend, for all she knew
Melody, later. 0=)
"Wait a minute, you offered to go out with a boy who was suffering through amnesia?" Will asked. "That's just wrong!"
She's your wife who wants to become queen, what did you expect?!? XD!!!
Not long after that, he remembered everything about himself,
Hmpf. Still not true love.
"So it was that important for my first kiss to be with you?" she asked him.
^.^ You know, for me it's kinda important too, just because I love the idea of Will giving her the first kiss. (Same with my fic, actually...)
"If I win, I get the Marsh Badge and you kiss me."
Oo In that case, I would go for the Marsh badge, too. 0=)
he tripped on the ground, falling and hitting his head.
*can't reist urge to blurt out a Uh oh*
Wasn't he going to stay with her? Wasn't he her boyfriend?
*headdesk* Is she that dumb not to notice what's going on?
"Am I allowed to be honest?" he asked.
Sabrina sighed. "Yes," she said.
"I'm so sorry, but I'm not attracted to you," Gary replied. "You're just not my type."
*sighs* At least he's honest. >>
She decided to allow herself to live a lie, allow herself to be fooled by a boy suffering through amnesia.
>.<
She had always wondered what it felt like to have her heart broken.
Well, now she knows. Twice. (Your fic and mine)
"But now you know why I fell so in love with you when I realized you were attracted to me… no other boy ever was."
Awwwwwwwww....*continues*
"Well, there was that one computer guy…" Sabrina began to say.
*literally bursts out with laughter* Don't tell me....XD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"His name was Bill… and he never kissed me. He tried getting me close by talking to me about my Alakazam… who knows where he is now."
O!!!!!!M!!!!!!!!!!!!!!G!!!!!!!!!!!!...*rolling on the floor* He is in Canada right now, studying Computer Science and hopefully busy beta-reading and NOT playing Platinum.
"I don't like this Bill already," Will said.
Mutual thing. Very mutual thing. *ggggggggggggg*
miles and miles away a woman of great power was planning their ultimate destruction…
-_- Why does such a good chapter have to end with such a bad sentence?
