Sandstone story

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    Pokemon Sandstone Version

    Your story starts as a boy/girl on your 13th birthday. You are told to go to professor oak's lab to get a pokemon. But, when you get there Oak has no pokemon. He tells you to go to starter island (name open to suggestion) and to find the pokemon breeder. He gives you the starter pass and shows you to the boat at the south of town. When you get to starter island, the breeder is nowhere in sight. As you explore town you find him in the pokemon center. He tells you to go away but, when you tell him you are sent by professor Oak he gets all nice. The breeder shows you to his home and lets you into the backyard. His back yard is split into multiple sections each one resembling a starter pokemon from kanto johto and hoenn. The Sinnoh starters will be available later on in the game. You are given a pokeball and are told to catch your starter pokemon. Then the breeder realizes that you have never been in a pokemon battle before. The breeder takes you around the backyard and catches the three kanto starters while giving you three lessons. Then he sets you on your own. When you catch a starter he will then give you the 3 starters he caught earlier to take back to oak. When you give oak the starters he gives you 3000 pokebucks and sets you on your adventure.
    In the second area you are forced to search for your first five pokeballs.
    Your player is forced to battle gyms so they can use hms.
    Before the sixth gym you must battle the evil gang. They have kidnapped your father. When you defeat them they release your father and he shows you that he has been hiding the fact that he is a pokemon trainer to. He offers to accompany you on his pidgeot home. There he gives you hm fly.

    More story is to come.
    This game has been in development since mid-September 2008.
    All constructive criticism and suggestions are welcome.
     
    There was a TCG set called Sandstorm, yanno? Kinda sound alike...kinda not. Let's go:
    Pokemon Sandstone Version




    Your story starts as a boy/girl on your 13th birthday What is so special about your birthday besides getting older?. You are told to go to professor oak's lab Why? Why are we in Kanto, anyways? Or is this Professor Gary Oak? to get a pokemon or what purpose?. But, when you get there Oak has no pokemon Pkmn researchers always have pkmn...no free ones? I'd buy that. Maybe he lied because he doesn't like giving out free pkmn.... He tells you to go to starter island (name open to suggestion Starter Island? Uh, change that, like, right now...anything. Just name it after something. Might I suggest a name? Odyssey Island) and to find the pokemon breeder. He gives you the starter pass To get to the island? and shows you to the boat at the south of town. When you get to starter island, the breeder is nowhere in sight. As you explore town you find him in the pokemon center. He tells you to go away but, when you tell him you are sent by professor Oak he gets all nice How come? He Oak's little pet?. The breeder shows you to his home and lets you into the backyard How generous.... His back yard is split into multiple sections each one resembling a starter pokemon from kanto johto and hoenn Why those regions? How did he get them? Can you tell us anything about this guy, or is he just a caricature?. The Sinnoh starters will be available later on in the game This is...way too formulaic.... You are given a pokeball and are told to catch your starter pokemon Why? Aren't they already owned? Why the free pkmn?. Then the breeder realizes that you have never been in a pokemon battle before. The breeder takes you around the backyard and catches the three kanto starters while giving you three lessons Anything new here?. Then he sets you on your own. When you catch a starter he will then give you the 3 starters he caught earlier to take back to oak For what?. When you give oak the starters he gives you 3000 pokebucks and sets you on your adventure.


    In the second area you are forced to search for your first five pokeballs.


    Your player is forced to battle gyms so they can use hms Okay, what are the HMs for? What is the purpose of this game? I don't see what happens at all....


    Before the sixth gym you must battle the evil gang For what?. They have kidnapped your father Cliche...why?. When you defeat them they release your father and he shows you that he has been hiding the fact that he is a pokemon trainer to What a revelation ~_~.... He offers to accompany you on his pidgeot home. There he gives you hm fly.




    More story is to come.


    This game has been in development since mid-September 2008.


    All constructive criticism and suggestions I can't suggest until I know what actual plot you have here...please answer some of my questions, and we can go from there. are welcome.
     
    I will begin on the updated plot today.
    Thanks for the suggestions.
     
    Kanto will be a side region but, it will be included in the new storyline.
    I have a better storyline made. Much better!
    I am just going to wait till a little closer to the first beta.
     
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