[SCRIPT FIRE RED] Game freezes upon interacting with person event (trying to make a new choose starter script)

[Moonshake]

So i wanted to make this new choose starter script

there's these three separate objects that are the starters

i made this script for one of them:

#dynamic 0x810D88
#org @grass
lockall
checkflag 0x211
if 0x1 goto @urdone
showpokepic 0x1 0xA 0x3
msgbox @budeer 0x4
closeonkeypress
msgbox @choice 0x5
compare LASTRESULT 0x1
if 0x1 goto @yes
compare LASTRESULT 0x0
if 0x1 goto @no

#org @urdone
msgbox @cantpick 0x6
releaseall
end

#org @yes
hidepokepic
addvar 0x4031 0x0
setflag 0x206
setflag 0x828
hidesprite 0x5
msgbox @picked 0x6
givepokemon 0x1 0x5 0x0 0x0 0x0 0x0
fanfare 0x13E
msgbox @receive 0x6
waitfanfare
closeonkeypress
msgbox @nickname 0x5
compare LASTRESULT 0x1
if 0x1 goto @yesnick
compare LASTRESULT 0x0
if 0x1 goto @nonick

#org @no
hidepokepic
releaseall
end

#org @yesnick
fadescreen 0x1
special 0x9E
waitstate
goto @nonick

#org @nonick
applymovement 0x8 @ronanpicks
waitmovement 0x0
msgbox @ronan 0x6
setflag 0x207
hidesprite 0x6
fanfare 0x13E
msgbox @ronanchoice 0x4
waitfanfare
closeonkeypress
releaseall
end


#org @budeer
= [green_fr]This is BUDEER, a GRASS type\nPokémon.\pIt's very playful but scaredy\nat times.

#org @choice
= Will you choose this Pokémon?

#org @cantpick
= You already picked a pokémon, you\ncan't pick this one anymore.

#org @picked
= This pokémon is the perfect\nchoice!

#org @receive
= [player] received the Budeer from\nthe professor!

#org @nickname
= Do you want to give a nickname to\nthis Budeer?

#org @ronan
= I've decided! You will be my\nfirst Pokémon!

#org @ronanchoice
= [rival] obtained the Lapillox from\nthe professor!

#org @ronanpicks
#raw 0x13
#raw 0x1
#raw 0xFE

But no matter what i put into that person event, i can put literally anything it will always freeze the game and i don't know why
I'm losing my mind at this point, does anyone know why interacting with the person object makes it freeze no matter what?

UPDATE: Now one of the three starters works but:
1: the movement commands get completely screwed up once i compile it in game
2: only one of the three starters work, the other ones? still freeze the game

 

[Pyxal]

So i wanted to make this new choose starter script

there's these three separate objects that are the starters

i made this script for one of them:

#dynamic 0x810D88
#org @grass
lockall
checkflag 0x211
if 0x1 goto @urdone
showpokepic 0x1 0xA 0x3
msgbox @budeer 0x4
closeonkeypress
msgbox @choice 0x5
compare LASTRESULT 0x1
if 0x1 goto @yes
compare LASTRESULT 0x0
if 0x1 goto @no

#org @urdone
msgbox @cantpick 0x6
releaseall
end

#org @yes
hidepokepic
addvar 0x4031 0x0
setflag 0x206
setflag 0x828
hidesprite 0x5
msgbox @picked 0x6
givepokemon 0x1 0x5 0x0 0x0 0x0 0x0
fanfare 0x13E
msgbox @receive 0x6
waitfanfare
closeonkeypress
msgbox @nickname 0x5
compare LASTRESULT 0x1
if 0x1 goto @yesnick
compare LASTRESULT 0x0
if 0x1 goto @nonick

#org @no
hidepokepic
releaseall
end

#org @yesnick
fadescreen 0x1
special 0x9E
waitstate
goto @nonick

#org @nonick
applymovement 0x8 @ronanpicks
waitmovement 0x0
msgbox @ronan 0x6
setflag 0x207
hidesprite 0x6
fanfare 0x13E
msgbox @ronanchoice 0x4
waitfanfare
closeonkeypress
releaseall
end


#org @budeer
= [green_fr]This is BUDEER, a GRASS type\nPokémon.\pIt's very playful but scaredy\nat times.

#org @choice
= Will you choose this Pokémon?

#org @cantpick
= You already picked a pokémon, you\ncan't pick this one anymore.

#org @picked
= This pokémon is the perfect\nchoice!

#org @receive
= [player] received the Budeer from\nthe professor!

#org @nickname
= Do you want to give a nickname to\nthis Budeer?

#org @ronan
= I've decided! You will be my\nfirst Pokémon!

#org @ronanchoice
= [rival] obtained the Lapillox from\nthe professor!

#org @ronanpicks
#raw 0x13
#raw 0x1
#raw 0xFE

But no matter what i put into that person event, i can put literally anything it will always freeze the game and i don't know why
I'm losing my mind at this point, does anyone know why interacting with the person object makes it freeze no matter what?

UPDATE: Now one of the three starters works but:
1: the movement commands get completely screwed up once i compile it in game
2: only one of the three starters work, the other ones? still freeze the game

A "typical starter script" is more complex than this. Try looking at the PokéBall scripts in Oak's Lab in vanilla FR for reference. If you still have an issue, feel free to ask.

 

[Moonshake]

A "typical starter script" is more complex than this. Try looking at the PokéBall scripts in Oak's Lab in vanilla FR for reference. If you still have an issue, feel free to ask.

sorry for late response, i was busy these days, but update:

i managed to make it work, but the script idk why compiled itself with an error, at @nonick when it got compiled the tool put a weird offset and somehow compiled itself with it, and it doesn't want to change no matter how hard i try

So if i don't want to give a nickname to my starter the game freezes, and i can't compile the script again