[Pokémon] Seviper and Dawn

[Brisingr122194]

i just want to start out i like stories where pokemon eat people if no one likes these kind of stories i didn't know and i won't write about it.


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[Brisingr122194]

Rated PG-14 tragedy

One Day Dawn was Walking Through the Jungle have fun. She didn't notice a pair of eyes staring right at her. the eyes turned out to be none other than a fifty ft long Seviper that could Talk and has hypnotic powers. Say now what do we have here (says the Seviper) It's a girl all alone in the Jungle This is going to make a good meal. I'll follow her till she falls asleep and then i'll eat her. so the seviper starts to follow Dawn through the Jungle.

Dawn/ Man it is such a pretty day today the sun is shining the breeze is blowing nice and slow and everything is so quiet i think i'm just going to rest a little by this tree. Seviper/ nows my chance to get me a tasty meal i'll lower my tail and pull her up and hypnotize her.

while Dawn was sleeping she heard something move and barely woke up she looked down and started to freak out a tail was warped around her stomach and had her arms pinned down she was slowly rised up into the tree. When she reached to top she came face to face with a seviper. Dawn/ oh great i'm about to become a meal for a seviper this just made my day go from good to bad.

 

[Astinus]

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