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Shoddy battle team

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AppleJ

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    Yeah I have made an shoddy team, works quite well but i can need some rates.

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    Infernape (♂) @ Focus Sash
    Ability: Blaze
    EVs: 92 Atk/232 Spd/184 SAtk
    Hasty nature (+Spd, -Def)
    - Grass Knot
    - Flamethrower
    - Earthquake
    - Close Combat

    I really need Earthquake, i tried out in several battles!
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    [PokeCommunity.com] Shoddy battle team

    Weavile (♂) @ Life Orb
    Ability: Pressure
    EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
    Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
    - Night Slash
    - Ice Punch
    - Substitute
    - Swords Dance
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    Raikou @ leftovers
    Ability: Pressure
    EVs: 160 HP/252 Spd/98 SAtk
    Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
    - Calm Mind
    - Substitute
    - Thunderbolt
    - Hidden Power [Grass]
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    Forretress (♂) @ Leftovers
    Ability: Sturdy
    EVs: 252 HP/96 Def/162 SDef
    Relaxed nature (+Def, -Spd)
    - Toxic Spikes
    - Earthquake
    - Explosion
    - Rapid Spin

    Explosion is very usefull on Forretress and toxic spikes are imo better then Spikes/ Stealth Rock couse its good in combination with bliss.
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    Blissey (female) @ Leftovers
    Ability: Natural Cure
    EVs: 148 HP/252 Def/104 SAtk/6 SDef
    Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
    - Softboiled
    - Ice Beam
    - Seismic Toss
    - Sing
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    [PokeCommunity.com] Shoddy battle team

    Gyrados (♂) @ Leftovers
    Ability: Intimidate
    EVs: 212 HP/38 Atk/150 Def/100 Spd
    Adamant nature (+Akt, -SAtk)
    - Stone Edge
    - Taunt
    - Waterfall
    - Dragon Dance
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    I am not sure use Blissey and Gyrados
     
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    AppleJ said:
    Yeah I have made an shoddy team, works quite well but i can need some rates.

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    Infernape (♂) @ Focus Sash
    Ability: Blaze
    EVs: 24 Atk/232 Spd/252 SAtk
    Hasty nature (+Spd, -Def)
    - Grass Knot
    - Flamethrower
    - Nasty Plot
    - Close Combat

    What are you trying to accomplish with Earthquake?

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    Weavile (♂) @ Leftovers / Life Orb
    Ability: Pressure
    EVs: 40 HP/252 Atk/218 Spd
    Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
    - Night Slash
    - Ice Punch
    - Substitute
    - Swords Dance

    Sub blocks status anyways, so Lum Berry is unnecessary.

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    Raikou @ Leftovers
    Ability: Pressure
    EVs: 64 HP/252 Spd/96 SAtk / 96 SDef
    Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
    - Calm Mind
    - Substitute
    - Thunderbolt
    - Hidden Power [Ice]

    HP Ice over Grass, as swampert fears Infernape here. Ice is better anyways. ALWAYS lefties on Raikou, it needs them.

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    Forretress (♂) @ Leftovers
    Ability: Sturdy
    EVs: 252 HP/96 Atk/162 Def
    Relaxed nature (+Def, -Spd)
    - Stealth Rock / Spikes
    - Gyro Ball
    - Explosion
    - Rapid Spin

    You'll probably want to mess with those EVs more. You have no way to deal with guts abusers, so run SR or spikes. Seeing your lack of a ghost, SR might be preferable.

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    Milotic (♂) @ Leftovers
    Ability: Marvel Scale
    EVs: 204 HP/36 Def/96 SAtk/172 SDef
    Calm nature (+SDef, -Atk)
    - Surf
    - Ice Beam
    - Recover
    - Hypnosis

    Needs Bold and more Def.

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    Yanmega (♂) @ Expert Belt
    Ability: Speed Boost
    EVs: 6 Def/252 Spd/252 SAtk
    Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
    - Bug Buzz
    - Air Slash
    - Hypnosis
    - Shadow Ball

    Two sleep inducers?
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    No amazing walling going on here. I see Mixape plain destroying you.
     
    AppleJ said:
    Infernape (♂) @ Focus Sash
    Ability: Blaze
    EVs: 170 Atk/170 Spd/170 SAtk
    Hasty nature (+Spd, -Def)
    - Grass Knot
    - Flamethrower
    - Earthquake
    - Close Combat

    wtf is this? just go standard MixApe or ditch it

    Weavile (♂) @ Lum Berry
    Ability: Pressure
    EVs: 40 HP/252 Atk/218 Spd
    Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
    - Night Slash
    - Ice Punch
    - Substitute
    - Swords Dance

    SD Weavile is srsly so gay but w/e

    Raikou @ Expert Belt
    Ability: Pressure
    EVs: 4 HP/252 Spd/252 SAtk
    Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
    - Calm Mind
    - Substitute
    - Thunderbolt
    - Hidden Power [Grass]

    Raikou always wants Leftovers as he needs the recover as much as possible
    those are gay EVs
    196SpAtk / 152Spd / rest wherever

    Forretress (♂) @ Leftovers
    Ability: Sturdy
    EVs: 252 HP/96 Def/162 SDef
    Relaxed nature (+Def, -Spd)
    - Toxic Spikes
    - Gyro Ball
    - Explosion
    - Rapid Spin

    considering how much Heracross rapes you, i wouldn't recommend TSpikes

    Milotic (♂) @ Leftovers
    Ability: Marvel Scale
    EVs: 204 HP/36 Def/96 SAtk/172 SDef
    Calm nature (+SDef, -Atk)
    - Surf
    - Ice Beam
    - Recover
    - Hypnosis

    again, not feeling the EVs

    Yanmega (♂) @ Expert Belt
    Ability: Speed Boost
    EVs: 6 Def/252 Spd/252 SAtk
    Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
    - Bug Buzz
    - Air Slash
    - Hypnosis
    - Shadow Ball

    not seeing the real use for Shadow Ball here
    Protect or Sub or HP [Ground/Ice]
    never run max speed
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    As stated before, Heracross and Tyranitar run through your team like a hot knife through btter.
     
    Yeah I have made an shoddy team, works quite well but i can need some rates.


    Infernape (♂) @ Expert Belt
    Ability: Blaze
    EVs: 92 Atk / 232 Spd / 184 SAtk
    Hasty nature (+Spd, -Def)
    - Grass Knot
    - Flamethrower
    - Nasty Plot
    - Close Combat
    If you're going to use Infernape, at least use it in a manner of coolness.
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    Weavile (♂) @ Choice Band / Life Orb
    Ability: Pressure
    EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
    Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
    - Night Slash / Pursuit
    - Ice Punch
    - Brick Break
    - Aerial Ace
    CB Weavile is where it's at, okay
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    Raikou @ Leftovers
    Ability: Pressure
    EVs: 208 HP / 252 Spd / 48 SAtk
    Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
    - Calm Mind
    - Substitute
    - Thunderbolt
    - Hidden Power [Ice]
    Needs HP with Hidden Power Ice for best results.
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    Forretress (♂) @ Leftovers
    Ability: Sturdy
    EVs: 252 HP / 80 Atk / 176 Def
    Relaxed nature (+Def, -Spd)
    - Stealth Rock / Spikes
    - Gyro Ball / Earthquake
    - Substitute / Light Screen
    - Rapid Spin
    Just what the hell are you thinking by putting EXPLOSION on your Physical Wall and Spinner?
    Also, EVERYONE knows that ToxiSpikes only benefits Heracross, which is a total nightmare.
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    Milotic (♂) @ Leftovers
    Ability: Marvel Scale
    EVs: 212 HP / 224 Def / 72 SAtk
    Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
    - Surf
    - Ice Beam
    - Recover
    - Hypnosis
    Bold nature and Defense EVs. DO IT.
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    Yanmega (♂) @ Expert Belt
    Ability: Speed Boost
    EVs: 6 Def/252 Spd/252 SAtk
    Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
    - Bug Buzz
    - Air Slash
    - Hypnosis
    - Shadow Ball
    ...Ditch this for something cool, PLEASE.
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    Tyranitar, Heracross, and even Electivire will make you mad.
    Also, lack of Status resistance is also disturbing. Get a CurseLax or a Blissey (seeing as of how you're in need of a Sp. Wall :/)
     
    ok thx for you ratings, i will do some changes now.

    ok imo my team is quite good now. I`ve beaten guys 6:0 with that team.

    btw:sorry for DP
     
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    caseythomasowns, i suggest reading the rules of pc before posting again which can be located here : -https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=91723

    In which it states threads over a month old cannot be posted in.


    In addition you broke another rule, again which could of been avoided if you actually read the rules, here in S+M this time.

    Rules of S+M said:
    → When you make suggestions, back them up with REASON
    Why should their Scizor run Superpower over Brick Break? Why should their Lucario be replaced with Machamp? You cannot assume the members you give rates to automatically know what you're suggesting. So when you propose a change, tell the member why, explain. If you yourself don't know, what are you doing rating teams? Show some understanding.
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    This ^.



    I see you are new, so i wont go too hard on you.


    Thanks.



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