Smarty_Arty is back with a new comic

Smarties-chan

Should've had that name change
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    This is my second try to make a sprite comic and I am already aware of my bad grammar so you don't need to mention that. Another frequently asked question is 'why are you putting the text in a panel under the comic?' it doesn't take a genius to figure that out does it? The answer is quite simple actualy, if you put the text in speech bubbles you'd have to make countless comics to give the reader the information he/she needs, that's why I prefer the 'panel system'.

    You might also be wandering why there aren't any of those status bar thingies on the battle screen, that is because I want the battles to look animeish.

    *NOTE* This comic might contain some rude language so if you're sensitive don't read it.

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    Credits go to:
    The spriter's resources for the sprites
    Signomi for inspiring me, you might aswell check out her comic too​
    *pokemonelite2000 link removed* for the battle sprites

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    King zeon gave me a stamp of pwnage
    [PokeCommunity.com] Smarty_Arty is back with a new comic
    don't ask why it's called that, you should just go ask king zeon ^^

    Sprites and stuff ripped or made by me:
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    Glad you like it =) I'm actualy making the second eppy right now.
     
    Hmm its different. I haven't seen this done before. Well anyways text under the panel (I don't like), seems sort of like a R/S thing, the battle system seems pretty basic. But other than that its nice, 7/10 highest grade i've given a pokemon comic in awhile.
     
    Yayness I got good feedback =) Well, everyone I have to go now so the next part will be up tomorrow.
     
    Ah yes, I haven't seen this done before either ^^ Good use of decoration. Plus it's a little too early in the comic for me to give a proper rating, but I like how it's going so far smarty_arty ^.^ Keep it up dude!

    ~ Siggeh *
     
    can I join it 'cause this comic looks supersuper *1 centurie later* super good !!! look in my sig for the overworld and the sprite!
     
    its sexy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
    I'm glad everyone likes it, but I prefer to make my own characters so I'll have to refuse the offers to join the comic. Well, of I go to make the next part of the comic then.
    *EDIT* Dark summoner don't spam please I don't want this thread locked.
     
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    nice. Is tht Bob Crunt? XD
    Text Bubbles are your friend....but basicly, this comic is good. Continue plz.
     
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    Thanks for the good comments everyone, I haven't had time to reply because I was making my comic. Well it's up now so just go check my first post.
     
    Sorry for the double post, but I don't want this to die and the third part is up.
     
    Thanks =) I might get two parts up today if I feel really inspired.
     
    My, my...double posting, aren't we Arty? *Wags index finer dissaprovingly* Very naughty...

    Well, your comic is technically good, but your chars need more personality. I mean, this is a kid of what? 14 or something? And he's still speaking completely formal...try to give the different characters different speech patterns to make them more interesting. Oh, and I do agree that speech bubbles are your friends. It gets kinds of tedious to keep shifting your eyes between the box at the bottom and the screen where the actual action is going on, but I think that I've expressed these opinions earlier. Ah well, keep at it. ^^
     
    Since so many people say I should use speech bubbles I will.
    Btw. The new part is up and it will be the last part with the 'panel system' I know the comic isn't funny and interesting yet, but it will be it might take some parts before it will, but trust me it will get interesting, my brother already gave me a few ideas when I was playing around making trainer sprites.
     
    Well, everyone the new part is up and it has *gasps* speech bubbles. Enjoy.
     
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