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LOL! I love #1, 3, 4 funny as hell. You know you should make a website with your latest releases etc... I've seen dozens of sites like that and some are good but some... eh..
Now for another edition of 'Screw These Comics: PC Edition.' Today we're reviewing Sora's Story.
No duh. We're reviewing another comic in the Sora's Story thread.
-.- Anywas, a reminder first. This is just to review, point out errors, and help you make better comics. Critique is the word.
So what we have here is a Kingdom Hearts-related sprite comic with Chain of Memories sprites.
Yup. The same game you and our backgrounds are from.
SILENCE! What do we comment on first again?
Going in STC fashion (which we're parodying, not copying >.>), sprites are first.
Rips from Chain of Memories and Sonic Advance.
The Pooh edit is small, but sweet.
The sprites are used well, but bittages are mixed. Tails is from the Advance series, but the Tornado is from the Genesis era.
And you are one to talk about mixed bittages... Sprites get a 5. Nothing too special, nothing too bad, just average. Now for backgrounds I supposed.
The first two have no backgrounds and the last two have backgrounds from Sonic.
From Sonic 3 & Knuckles and Sonic Advance. Ending Movie from S3&K and Neo Green Hill Zone I believe...
Why is the sky flipped upside down in panels 3 and 4 in comic 3?
Because the sky is falling. Now go tell Ducky Lucky.
*runs off to find Ducky Lucky*
I can't beleive it worked. For background being only existant in half of the issues, they get half of the highest score. 5
For the story we have Sora not wanting to work with Disney (who owns his copyright and came up with the idea of Kingdom Hearts ironically) and running off to the Sonic world. Then some unseen voice sends Agent Pooh...
Mr. Sora. Welcome back. We missed you.
...Agent Pooh to get Sora back. Not that bad of a storyline so far. Not much has developed, but seeing as it's only the fourth issue, we can't expect too much. 8
Special effect time! As always, there is none.
There are those extra life icons in the corner when they're in the Sonic world...
Fine, it gets a 3. Characters. Sora hates Disney, Riku is jealous and ignored, Pooh is from the Matrix, Sonic is greedy, and Tails is also ignored.
Once again, it is only the fourth comic so not much about the characters has been revealed. 6 Now for humor.
There's some humor in there, but not enough to make you fall out of your chair laughing or anything. 5
*turns into the grammar police*
Time for spelling. Spelling isn't too bad. There's a misplaced apostrophe in the word isn't in comic 3, panel 6. Capitlization errors all around though,
Looks like you on AIM. B...
SILENCE YOUR PRATTLING! Spelling is mine! The bad capitalization gets a zero. Big fat zero.
Isn't that a bit harsh?
*reverts back to normal self*
Uggh where am I?
You were here, about to give spelling a 4.
Right, a 4. Final Markings:
Sprites - 5
Pros: Decent usage
Cons: Nothing too special
Backgrounds - 5
Pros: Good backgrounds to go with the general idea of what's going on
Cons: No backgrounds in first and second issues
Story - 8
Pros: A decent storyline for only being four comics so far
Cons: Not too indepth yet
Special Effects - 3
Pros: Neat little life icons
Cons: No other effects
Characters - 6
Pros: No cliched BnG personalities yet
Cons: Not much revealed about characters yet being only 4 issues long
Humor - 5
Pros: It's funny at parts
Cons: Not too funny though
Spelling - 4
Pros: Good spelling
Cons: Bad capitalization
Overall - 5.1
Wow, we were really leniant compared to the real STC.
I'm surprised as well. This would be close to making it on their top ten list if we really worked there.
Which would never happen because we're too nice, especially for being Heartless.
*walks up*
I can't find Ducky Lucky, I forgot why I was looking for a duck with a rhyming name, and I'm hungry.
OK, it lives with Mother Goose in an old boot, you we're looking to fight it, and lose terribly, and you can fry and eat the boot it lives in.
*runs off*
That was fun. Wait a minute. You never answered why I can talk.
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