Speedo_nh's Sprite Showcase

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    Hey guys, these are some sprites i made. Adore them or criticize them, but plz, no flaming....

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    My Main Hero

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    Hero OWs

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    Random OWs (all made in ruby except the "ash" on the end, which was made in FR)

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    This is a gymleader i made (i don't really like him :P )

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    This is another gymleader

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    This is a new sprite i made, it is a team rocket masquerade guy

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    An Emo! (Zi212 has permission to use this)

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    Another guy i made

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    A variation of the hero from Gold (KebaSun has permission to use this)

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    "Bionic Woman" (-Blade- has permission to use this)

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    "Bionic Woman" OWs (-Blade- has permission to use this)

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    "Tropican" Front and Back

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    "StormBeet" an evo of heracross. The pose is the same i know, but just ignore that :P

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    Brand New! "Dolphoil" (my first scratch X3)

    Well that's all i got for my first two months of spriting, but hopefully i will have more soon! So go ahead and C&C!

    Thanks for looking!
    Speedo_nh
     
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    They're all good, but the main hero and the hero OWs could use fixing. The hero looks like he has a double chin and no mouth, and the OW facing forward's hair seems to get shorter when he walks forward...
    Keep up the good work though!
     
    First of all, you never really want to sprite your outlines in all black. Especially when you're working with Pokemon sprites. Your outlines are also too choppy for the majority. They just don't have that smooth look to them, which is contributed to by using only black. Your shading could use some work as well. In some areas the shading doesn't seem to be consistent with one light source. Try imagining a small sun in the upper left-hand corner of your sprite, then shade accordingly to how the light would hit the sprite. You've got some potential to be a quality spriter though, so keep working at it. XD
     
    Woah! I almost forgot about this thread! 0.0;
    Anyways:

    @Megafuz, thanks for the tips, i'm always getting told about my poor shading! XP thanks for the comment!

    @Namine, Wow! What encouragement! Thanks very much! :)

    I have not produced much work lately, i have had sooo much other stuff going on, i never had a chance. But! Summer's coming soon so expect to see more work then! ;)
     
    You got some talent, I like them there cool can you make your own pokmon sprites instead of joining them? Can't wait to see more :)
     
    @pokefiend: Thanks for your praise! BTW the dolphin i made- dolphoil- is a scratch, which basically means it wasn't made by joining anything, i was made from nothing, but i will do some more scratches if you like......when i finally find the time to sprite again! XD
     
    the shading is good but the team rocket masquerade guy mask is a little off and the outline on the fakemon are a little too dark, but like the creativity though


    :t354:~*!*~Queen Boo~*!*~
     
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