{Spoony-Chan's Poetry}

This thread is dead! NUUUU!!!!!!! ;; *ressurects it*

Spoony, you just get better by the minute! ^^ I love this new entry! It is so vivid and descriptive, I just...love it! =3
 
Still excellent Spoon!
They just get better and better and better etc!
 
Now that I know this thread is 'awake' (just to let you know, it was sleeping xD) I can start with my exciting and vivid new entry! *starts writing*

And, I have news! According to my step-father, we should be getting our new computer today =3
 
Spoony~Chan said:
Now that I know this thread is 'awake' (just to let you know, it was sleeping xD) I can start with my exciting and vivid new entry! *starts writing*

And, I have news! According to my step-father, we should be getting our new computer today =3
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Yayness for both the new entry and the computer! ^______________^ *skips around like a happy sick person* Wait, what would that look like? o.o

YAY!!! ^.^ *cough* ;; YAY!!! ^.^ *cough* ;; YAY!!! ^.^ *cough* ;; *figures the world has gotten the idea*
 
*looks up from blank paper that doesn't exist*
Um...er...These poems get more difficult by the days passing ><

Okey, preview...this next poem will be called "The First Campaign" and it will be about Se--er, "the narrator" going into battle with the Westerners going after So--er, I mean "the girl's" castle...

Oh, heck, how 'bout I just post you a picture of the dude's from the poem...
 
Spoony~Chan said:
*looks up from blank paper that doesn't exist*
Um...er...These poems get more difficult by the days passing ><

Okey, preview...this next poem will be called "The First Campaign" and it will be about Se--er, "the narrator" going into battle with the Westerners going after So--er, I mean "the girl's" castle...

Oh, heck, how 'bout I just post you a picture of the dude's from the poem...
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Okie! ^^ I would loves to see! *takes out camera*
 
Wow...you make poems like stories..long but still very much interesting...bravo Spoony..XD
 
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I saved my thread =3 Okay, here's the picture. To the left is the narrator dude, and the right is the girly-girl-friend dudette! Whoo!
Wow, they're really cubey lookin' O.o
 
NEXT POEM!!!

Is This War...?
I awoke too early to be allowed,
For nightmares haunted my mind.
Images of death, fire, blood,
And enemies who weren't too kind.

Still in my bed robes, I roused the troops.
I told them to dress in steel.
They were rather obedient, to my surprise,
And even skipped their meals.

They quickly lined up outside the doors,
Stone-faced, for God's sake.
I told them to stay there, locked in their stance,
Until the princess was waked.

I ran up the stairs, my helmet to armpit,
My sword jiggling in its case.
I ran fast and swift up to my room
But still kept a nice steady pace.

"Princess!" I cried into the room.
"Are you still well?"
Her head rasied from the bed.
She groaned and would not tell.

I went to her side and held her hand.
"Princess, do you hear me?"
SHe opened her eyes and smiled warmly.
"My name is Sophia, you see."

She touched my cheek with her dainty fingers,
The heat escaping my face.
I pulled her hand away and said,
"I must leave without a trace."

I kissed her then right on the lips.
She leapt back in surprise.
"My name is Seda." I told her.
"And you I shall never despise."

I left without a last look at her face.
I imagined her to fume.
But I hadn't time for love affairs!
This war of protection had to resume.

I mounted my steed and lead on the horde,
Viciously galloping forth.
I arched my back and picked up speed
Heading to the west of north.

A sea of black figures upon the horizon
Told us that our foe had arrived.
How should we face them? What should we do?
That was for me to decide.

We came face-to-face--
The East and the West.
The fear that welled up inside me...
To face THIS was the test.

I thought I heard my father's voice
As the world had seemed to cease.
"Do not worry, Seda, my son...
Your task is to defend the East."

I scowled across the border
Dividing our two lands...
Scowled into the eyes of a coward.
The King of West was the man.

With a downward strike of the sword,
The sun reflecting off steel,
I signalled this War to commence at once.
To the West I would never kneel!

Yesh, the War begins to help his poor girlyfriend.
 
I'm lonely...lonely! Why aren't people replying? ;.;

I've written the next poem, but it's rather short. Just consider it a "sub-poem." It's still an important detail. I almost want to add it to the one above.

The Retreat

The battle was bloody.
Much blood was shed.
And my men were the ones...
The ones who had bled.

I lost more than half--
More than half of my men!
Yet our enemy was going strong.
They'd barely lost ten!

We knew the cause.
It was their fearless king.
His power and force--close to a god.
His sword in the dead winds would sing.

And it sung straight across my back.
Just barely, though.
A mere cut to be mended.
Then I would not go.

My spirit was not lost.
My heart did not freeze.
All was black for a moment,
Then I got up--with ease.

But I fell.
I fell down on my knees.
Were we losing?
Was her treasure to be seized?

"Retreat!" I cry out in agony.
My men did not think twice.
They kicked their horses on the sides,
Flocking off like wild mice.

But I would not lose hope.
The war had not begun.
I had to fight--ward them off.
Fight as both a lover and a son.
 
Haven't been here for a while...

Anyway, all the poems are brilliant as always.
Is This War...? is incredibly well written.
 
Thenks you, Pete ^^

Another writer's block. It happens too often. ;.; And this next poems supposed to be when they actually get good.

*aherm* Preview! (yay!)

The next poem is when they are at their camp. Seda has his back against a tree, healing from wounds. His army is losing ;.; They fought way to many battles and everyone is hurt--bad. Then this guy comes along, all dress in a black cloak. He tells him that he can give him the power to win the war. *cue Harry Potter music*

That ice cream is getting to me...
 
this is realy good i loved it!keep up the great work!
 
Thank you, Yuuka! ^^ Sorry about not posting here in forever...yet again. I still haven't gotten to the next poem. I'm making sprites for Zerros new game ._.; I'll get to it tonight. Stay patient, everybody!
 
Your poems are very good. ^^
They show emotion and are worded in a good way. XD

(just thought I'd pop in and take a looky)
 
Midori Chi said:
Your poems are very good. ^^
They show emotion and are worded in a good way. XD

(just thought I'd pop in and take a looky)
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*bows* Ah, but my poems aren't as good as yours =)

I actually started this next poem, but it isn't finished. ;.; I'm using a different type of rhyming system...slightly different, and not as annoying =D
 
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