Sprites for my Fangame

[OblivionMew]

I hav ebeen spriting for a while, but not pokemon sprites, so I decided to give them a shot!

FakeMon

-Starters

GARKIT-DARK

RAPUNTOR-FIGHTING

PSYBY-PSYCHIC

-Evos

ZAPHERE-ELECTRIC

-Legendaries

MEWGENIS-???

INFINITY-DARK,DRAGON

Trainers

MALE TRAINER

FEMALE TRAINER

PROF.JANE

Overworlds

-DP Legendaries FR/LG Style

REGIGAS

GIRATINA

MANAPHY

SHAYMIN

ARCEUS

-Trainers

MALE TRAINER

How are they? Please feel free to comment!

 

[Anastasia.R]

The feamle trainers' hair is wayyy to big! You don't need to use black so much for outlines. Try using the shades as outlines too.

~A.R​

 

[maxxa]

infinity is from pokemon acanthite....youve just made a crappy sprite of it
https://www.pokemonacanthite.com/images/artwork/Diavil.png
its very similar

 

[Gummy]

infinity is from pokemon acanthite....youve just made a crappy sprite of it
https://www.pokemonacanthite.com/images/artwork/Diavil.png
its very similar

Really, I see a lot of differences in the sprite. anyway, I like the overworlds but the rest of the sprites could use some work. Especially Jane's head and hair, which make here look kind of retarded. Either make the head bigger or the hair smaller.

 

[doesn't matter]

infinity is from pokemon acanthite....youve just made a crappy sprite of it
https://www.pokemonacanthite.com/images/artwork/Diavil.png
its very similar

maxxa, though your concern is appreciated, in the future it'd be best to point such things out via PM or report so it can be dealt with by staff.

In any case, I don't think we have an issue of stealing. To my experience that sort of design for a devil-like character has been used over and over. though if anyone wants to discuss this further, feel free to PM me.

Your Zaphere can be fixed up pretty easily it seems. Firstly, the circle isn't all that circular, so you should adjust some of the pixels on the bottom and the sides of the sprite. In addition, your shading is pretty wonky and takes away from the spherical shape. Your best way of correcting it would probably be looking at an existing Electrode sprite and emulating it's shading.

Trainer sprites are a good effort, but they all appear to be wonky somewhat. The Male trainer should have longer legs for one, and his left arm should be touching the top inside of his sleeve. In addition, his eyes are looking the wrong way, and there is no black on the outline, so you'll want to put some on there.

The Female trainer looks a bit better, but still needs some touching up. You've used way too much black on the hair, which seems worse since it's a light colour, and not enough black on the rest of the sprite - there should be at least some more on the legs and feet, since the light is obscured before reaching that far down. I'd also edit the legs a bit as well. Her right thigh is too straight, and maybe you should mover her left leg across one or two pixels to accompany the increased width of her right thigh. Oh, and her head is too small XD

Prof. Jane's head is even smaller btw XD And her hair is massive too. Her torso is good ;D, but from there everything seems distorted. Her left arm seems to resemble bendy wires more than an arm, so try to define an elbow and such. Her legs need to be fixed up as well, they just seem to .. well flop XD; Her ankles and calves are too wide; her right knee seems to be too high. Actually, what is she wearing? Maybe you should give her some shoes.

But uhhh yeah. That's all I can be bothered writing about now. I hope it helps, and good luck with your game ^^;

 

[Lyndon]

THose sprites are better scratches then i could ever do, so yeah, the only concern i have is the black outlines and the volume(bigness) of the females hair. o.o

 

[Virtual Chatot]

Pretty good scratch style...

Also, first thing I thought on Infinity was Pokemon Acanthite...

I recommended changing it..

 

[Meh]

Nice work. i really like the shading style of GARKIS. You've really captured the pokemon feel in ZAPHERE. Nice work.

 

[OblivionMew]

infinity is from pokemon acanthite....youve just made a crappy sprite of it
https://www.pokemonacanthite.com/images/artwork/Diavil.png
its very similar

I designed Infinity before I even saw that pokemon, it is just a coincidence.

 

[Nytkoi]

Not so ggod. The girl's hair is way too big and so is the profs