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    Hello there thanks for viewing I've just recently got into spriting but I think I've improved every time I make a new spirte I'll let you be the judge of that here is a list of sprites I've done in order from oldest to newest(top down)
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    Tell me what you think I know I could improve alot so suggestions/tips are great.

    The only thing's in this that were : the trainers head and back hand against his chest and Birobulb's Bulb all were edited slightly.

    To those trigger happy reporters : I made sprites 2 - 7 for my friend Curt_09 I was apart of a hack called pokemon faze for proof go to our threads. 1 and 2.
     
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    Soo.

    1.My first sprite ever
    If that is your FIRST SPRITE EVER, it's REALLY good!

    2.A sprite for pokemon faze I learned alot about shading
    Hmm, this fakemon looks nice, but - please don't use dithering on small places like this. It getting worse than without it. And BackPic looks like other fakemon xD

    3.I got more advanced on shading
    4.Probably my favorite sprite
    Heey, I save them already somewhere... Do you make any Hack or something?

    5.The best back sprite I've ever made though the front sprite kinda sucks
    I really like this one. I Think it's the best of all your sprites showed here. So sprite up more fakemons and learn! xD
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    Nice job! For a first sprite ever, that's really good. The little orange cricket/grasshopper is original and good. Is it just me or is the second fake a redone version Bulbasaur's bulb? The Jigglypuff is good but the the curl is a bit to large.

    ~Professor W.
     
    Soo.

    1.My first sprite ever
    If that is your FIRST SPRITE EVER, it's REALLY good!

    2.A sprite for pokemon faze I learned alot about shading
    Hmm, this fakemon looks nice, but - please don't use dithering on small places like this. It getting worse than without it. And BackPic looks like other fakemon xD

    3.I got more advanced on shading
    4.Probably my favorite sprite
    Heey, I save them already somewhere... Do you make any Hack or something?

    5.The best back sprite I've ever made though the front sprite kinda sucks
    I really like this one. I Think it's the best of all your sprites showed here. So sprite up more fakemons and learn! xD
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    1.Thanks :]
    2I'll keep that in mind! What do you mean it looks like other fakemon?
    4Yeah I did make a hack or was in the process of making one. It was called faze verson.
    5 Thanks :D.
    Nice job! For a first sprite ever, that's really good. The little orange cricket/grasshopper is original and good. Is it just me or is the second fake a redone version Bulbasaur's bulb? The Jigglypuff is good but the the curl is a bit to large.

    ~Professor W.
    On the 2nd fake sprite you're not mistaken it is. I forgot about that it was something someone wanted me to make for a hack. The bulb is the only thing taken though. On the jigglypuff one I wasnt trying to stay true to jiggypuff as he/she is known today. But rather how I wanted it to be depicted. As such the curl is a bit bigger and covers his eyes. But thanks for the feedback!
     
    ok i dont know you but i have respect for you.

    your first sprite was in g/s/c style and it looks very good but there is one issue with it.
    it looks way to symetrical. it looks like all you did was one side and copy/pasted it onto the other. though seeing it was your first sprite good job. oh also you sure do have a on of highlight but your shadow is lacking. try to add more of the darker color into the sprite.

    ok now im gonna move onto your trainer since i honestly only want to comment on your g/s/c stuff :D

    so back to the trainer sprite. the gsc is a good start but it is lackng. you didnt do any shading on it which is understandable. you should try to use dithering in places that would need shading. also there are areas that are lacking in an outline which should be there, like by the pokeball theres a blue dot and a part lacking a little outline, just try to fill that in. also by the arm not holding the pokeball theres no outline there is an arm there. it looks like its a blob of shading. yea another also (there seems to be a lot of those sorry) th pokeball and hand hlding it look a little to big.

    yea so in other words work on dithering shading and working on your outlining.
     
    Some of these sprites are stolen from Curt_09, He made them.
    No he didn't, He asked me personally to sprite his art work for a pokemon game called Pokemon faze the team responsible was called team faze I am apart of that group I am one of the spriters for that group go to the thread and look for yourself. Ask Kirbychu or anyone else involved with that hack. Sorry for coming off as rude but it infuriates me that someone would think I stole work that I rightfully spent time to make.
     
    ok i dont know you but i have respect for you.

    your first sprite was in g/s/c style and it looks very good but there is one issue with it.
    it looks way to symetrical. it looks like all you did was one side and copy/pasted it onto the other. though seeing it was your first sprite good job. oh also you sure do have a on of highlight but your shadow is lacking. try to add more of the darker color into the sprite.

    ok now im gonna move onto your trainer since i honestly only want to comment on your g/s/c stuff :D

    so back to the trainer sprite. the gsc is a good start but it is lackng. you didnt do any shading on it which is understandable. you should try to use dithering in places that would need shading. also there are areas that are lacking in an outline which should be there, like by the pokeball theres a blue dot and a part lacking a little outline, just try to fill that in. also by the arm not holding the pokeball theres no outline there is an arm there. it looks like its a blob of shading. yea another also (there seems to be a lot of those sorry) th pokeball and hand hlding it look a little to big.

    yea so in other words work on dithering shading and working on your outlining.
    Really well it's nice to know I won someone's respect though I have no idea how I got it.
    Alright a detailed review. :D

    On my first sprite I made that awhile ago but yeah I think thats what I did...

    the g/s/c trainer sprite I guess I could have stayed true to the shading there I'll work on that.
    Really? Because I was also on the team and Curt said that he made them himself.
    And also, Sorry If am wrong.
    Yeah I did. which ones did he say he made? Because he did make the original art for them and asked me to sprite them. So in a way I guess he is the original author but I still think I can show it off as something i worked on in the past. But that's ok mistakes happen.
     
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    Really? Because I was also on the team and Curt said that he made them himself.
    And also, Sorry If am wrong.

    Lolwut? The only thing I work with is pencil and paper, I leave the spriting to people like Squidly.

    I'd kind of like to see where I said I made the sprites, as it's known that I'm a terrible spriter. I don't know why you bothered causing Squidly so much grief...

    Great sprites Squidly, I'm always happy whenever I see you make a new one ;)
     
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