Swift, I was wondering what was going on xD I didn't c/p the last paragraph of my post made in word, so that's why that part wasn't in it. I'm sorry. I edited my post, maybe you should to then?
You're post is nice, I like what you did with the flashback.
@ Feign I like your needless intro, it was amusing. And it made me feel bad for his parents and sister... But I liked it
@Z It is really short, but I understand that if you want his being to be tightly tied with the music that it was kind of necessary. Just make sure you post longer next time okay? I was still amused by the withdrawal part though.
I'm sorry for elaving abruptly yesterday, but I forgot Desperate Housewives was on and well... I need to watch Desperate Housewives XD