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Pokemon GX
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Well first off, I?m not going to name the thread until I get a definite title thought of. So until then, it is the current one.
Now, this was written while I was at work so be harsh, but detailed as to what I should do. Oh and one more thing. I wrote it on a small memo pad so forgive the short paragraphs.
It is nowhere near finishing, but that is the first chunk I?m submitting for now. Have at it.
Second block:
Since I haven't thought of what I want the characters to look like this is where I'm stuck. I have to describe the person now that you would be able to see the person in the light.
Now, this was written while I was at work so be harsh, but detailed as to what I should do. Oh and one more thing. I wrote it on a small memo pad so forgive the short paragraphs.
One night as you lay down in bed you feel a sharp poke in your back. Like a needle when they take blood. The world begins to turn warped then starts to dissolve.
You wake up upon a cold hard surface. There is a bright light a few feet from your head. All around you, people in lab coats are milling about. You notice out of the corner of your eye, a man leaving while pocketing what looks to be an old style watch. As you glance around yourself, you begin to notice various instruments. You ask the obvious question, "Where am I?? One of the people in the lab coats replies, "The question isn't where. It is when."
So now you are confused. Did you jump into the future? Are you dreaming? No, this is too real. It can't be a dream. You can feel the cold surface under you, feel how hard it is. Hear the muted voices of the labcoated people. So what is going on?
First. Find out where you are.
As you look around again, you begin to see details of the instruments around you. They look remotely familiar. You decide you must be in some sort of hospital. A hospital that is far more advanced than what you are used to seeing when you go in for a check-up.
The person who spoke said that the question wasn't where, but when. What did that mean? Why would it be more important to know when I was? So you look around to see if you can find a date of some sort. All you see are the readouts of your health...
The people begin to leave. When they are gone you just lay there unmoving. You feel hungry. So you look for a call button. You don't find one. You try shouting for a nurse. No one comes. Now what are you going to do?
It is nowhere near finishing, but that is the first chunk I?m submitting for now. Have at it.
Second block:
Boom...
The surface shakes. Or is the whole world that shook? It doesn't really matter. It wasn't stopping. Boom. Boom Boom. Then nothing. The power flickers then goes out completely. There is no light nor any sounds.
The door opens. You see a ray of light from what looks like a flashlight. Someone comes towards you and speaks in a strange language. You feel that you should understand what is being said, but it just won't come to you. From the voice you assume the person is female. You see a shadowy gesture that would indicate that the person wanted you to follow. You find you are able to sit up. You move your legs off the surface to hang down. The person extends a hand, palm up, and you take it. It feels very soft. You drop from the hard surface. You watch the blanket that had been covering you up to now, fall on to the floor. You see that you are naked before someone you have never even met before. You find that you aren't embarrassed. Somehow you feel as though this is natural between the person and you. You become scared at that thought, and then realize that there really isn't much to be done about it right now. It is for another time. The here and now is to get out of this place.
The person begins to pull you towards the door. You follow holding tightly to the hand of the person. As you enter a hallway, you notice several bodies on the floor with large bits of the ceiling around them.
What is going on here? Something just isn't right. It doesn't make any sense.
You are still unable to see the person leading you clearly. The dim lighting is casting a shadow upon the person. You begin to speed up to keep pace. You feel as though you have been walking forever. It is getting harder to keep up. Your legs feel like lead and your heart like it is going to burst. Suddenly, you stop.
You and the person are standing in front of a large set of double doors. The person walks to one side and messes with something. The doors begin to open. Bright light floods in though the opening, blinding you. You shield your eyes from the harsh light. You see the person's outline in the light, still unable to clearly see the person. You hear one clear crisp word. "Come".
Since I haven't thought of what I want the characters to look like this is where I'm stuck. I have to describe the person now that you would be able to see the person in the light.
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