TD's first comic

Good..but...you...stold the style I stole from Shadow xD...anyway...much better! But I like the othe rsprites better..it goes more with your backgrounds....
 
tyranitar_dude said:
READ THE POST ABOVE YOURS D00D.
I just said I cant think of any jokes to put XD
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That is a stupid, stupid excuse. Do you think musicians bang their heads against keyboards during concerts because they can't think of anything to play? No! They think of a good idea BEFORE they play music. You have to have some plausible concept. You can't just make comics for the sake of making comics if you don't have any ideas. Find a different medium for your degree of creativity, because comic strips AREN'T FOR YOU.
 
My god.if you dont like my comics then **** off,I dont really care. Because ya know what..my thread...ISNT FOR YOU.
 
Allstories said:
That is a stupid, stupid excuse. Do you think musicians bang their heads against keyboards during concerts because they can't think of anything to play? No! They think of a good idea BEFORE they play music. You have to have some plausible concept. You can't just make comics for the sake of making comics if you don't have any ideas. Find a different medium for your degree of creativity, because comic strips AREN'T FOR YOU.
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IF YOU DON'T LIKE THE COMIC DON'T READ IT.
 
Thats exactly what im trying to tell him. I've only made 3. There is such a thing called improvement,which obviously isnt in his dictionary. There are people who give good criticism and people who say they give criticism but try to make people feel like ****. He's one of those people.
 
tyranitar_dude said:
Thats exactly what im trying to tell him. I've only made 3. There is such a thing called improvement,which obviously isnt in his dictionary. There are people who give good criticism and people who say they give criticism but try to make people feel like ****. He's one of those people.
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Alright, ALRIGHT. I'll admit that my last line may have been a little harsh. I'm sorry. I'm sincerely apologize. If you want to do these, it's no business of mine whether you do them or not, and your free to pursue any creative outlet you want. But, I'm not gonna tell you what's good about it when the bad things outweigh them so drastically. You can't expect people to only give you positive criticism. It's not fair to anyone, ESPECIALLY yourself. It's not doing you any favors to tell you it's all fabulous when it's not. Do you want some positive comments? Alright. You have some nice backgrounds. But that's it. I honestly can't think of anything else that's good about it. You need to think your comics through more, you need to work on your dialogue, and you need to make it interesting in some form or another. You need to give some sort of reason for people to read your comic, or it's just a waste of effort.

Logmon1 said:
To Allstories: Improvment: To get better at something. Put that in your pipe and smok it!
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Oh, c'mon, man. That didn't even make any sense.
 
Allstories said:
Alright, ALRIGHT. I'll admit that my last line may have been a little harsh. I'm sorry. I'm sincerely apologize. If you want to do these, it's no business of mine whether you do them or not, and your free to pursue any creative outlet you want. But, I'm not gonna tell you what's good about it when the bad things outweigh them so drastically. You can't expect people to only give you positive criticism. It's not fair to anyone, ESPECIALLY yourself. It's not doing you any favors to tell you it's all fabulous when it's not. Do you want some positive comments? Alright. You have some nice backgrounds. But that's it. I honestly can't think of anything else that's good about it. You need to think your comics through more, you need to work on your dialogue, and you need to make it interesting in some form or another. You need to give some sort of reason for people to read your comic, or it's just a waste of effort.
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Now,that is constructive criticism. Thanks,ill use the advice =)
 
tyranitar_dude said:
I DID give credit,check in the bottom right hand corner.
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Oh, I didn't see that.
 
XD Its no Problem.

I made a new comic btw,I used the overworld sprites of me I made. Plus,its a different style from which i was using. I actually thought it was kinda funny. Anyway Enjoy: *image removed*
 
hey, that one is great, but I am not stupid ;_; I am an idiot XD can't wait til others come out, I'll be supporting ya. ~Johnny~
 
Thanks! I think overoworld comics are much funner to make then other types.
 
Umm... suggestions : Make jokes more funnier, don't mix sprite styles, mini-pokemon sprites, aren't overworlds, better textboxes...

But otherwise, very good for a beginner.
 
Pretty good. But I didn't find the joke too funny and you used non-overworld sprites on the overworld. 7/10.
 
Do you think musicians bang their heads against keyboards during concerts because they can't think of anything to play?
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I always though that they did.........
anyways the guys explained it. I dun't like fartin jokes. but hey, not too bad. for firsts.
semi good/10 kk? k!
 
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