Alright it looks great, and don't worry I know about the border :3
But just so you know when you map for the hack, I do want the trainer to be able to pass through of the trees.
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On second thoughts, I will actually have something to show you. Gimme a while and I'll come up with something :D
EDIT: Alright.. this took me like 20 minutes or something, and please ignore whatever tile errors are there because I know what/where they are already. Also, please excuse the trees on top and bottom for being straight, but they need to be for my border to work. Otherwise it'd look terrible. I'm new-ish to making trees look less straight, so apologies.
As another added note, I DON'T typically allow the tops of trees to be passable, just because the fact is I like to make borders like I have on the sides. (With the spaces between the trees, as well as stacking them) I will stack them all if necessary but I'd rather not; but this makes it so I can't have grass mixed in on the tops of trees, which looks stupid anyway.
https://img688.imageshack.us/f/map1f.jpg/
There's the link.
Edit 2: This is just a simple short route in case it was hard to tell :P I also hate houses in the middle of routes unless they have a significant purpose..
Edit 3: Oh right... The tileset is different, obviously, from the normal FR, but I can adapt to any tileset given, unless it's absolutely HIDEOUS. Then I'll probably die ;__: I got this tileset from.. somewhere, I honestly couldn't tell you. Sorry for the edits.
I'm going to give some feedback and a rating.
Way Way Way too many flowers and grass. Remove some of it. It seems you just shot out Grass and flowers. The flowers do not go good straight. The grass patches will make me angry because running into wild Pokemon Oh My god Noooooooooo!!! (Runs into a Pikachu)
The top ledge has an error in it. The two ledges connected together is a big no no. Connect it with a boulder instead. No bushes? Add some. The one boulder is odd because it doesn't fit. As I said add bushes. There are too many entrances. Connect the trees together so that won't happen.
Sorry if I'm going a little harsh I'm just trying to help you get better.
Rating: 4/10
I'm going to give some feedback and a rating.
Way Way Way too many flowers and grass. Remove some of it. It seems you just shot out Grass and flowers. The flowers do not go good straight. The grass patches will make me angry because running into wild Pokemon Oh My god Noooooooooo!!! (Runs into a Pikachu)
The top ledge has an error in it. The two ledges connected together is a big no no. Connect it with a boulder instead. No bushes? Add some. The one boulder is odd because it doesn't fit. As I said add bushes. There are too many entrances. Connect the trees together so that won't happen.
Sorry if I'm going a little harsh I'm just trying to help you get better.
Rating: 4/10
I'm going to give some feedback and a rating.
Way Way Way too many flowers and grass. Remove some of it. It seems you just shot out Grass and flowers. The flowers do not go good straight. The grass patches will make me angry because running into wild Pokemon Oh My god Noooooooooo!!! (Runs into a Pikachu)
The top ledge has an error in it. The two ledges connected together is a big no no. Connect it with a boulder instead. No bushes? Add some. The one boulder is odd because it doesn't fit. As I said add bushes. There are too many entrances. Connect the trees together so that won't happen.
Sorry if I'm going a little harsh I'm just trying to help you get better.
Rating: 4/10
Bushes: That is really bad that it didn't come with it. LolThanks for the feedback :) I appreciate it because it was actually constructive. But like I said, I put this out in about 20 minutes.
Flowers/Grass: I'm a fan of decorating, otherwise it looks bland to me. just as well, if you notice, you're only going through 19 patches, and those are required to get through the route. I made emtpy patches just for that reason, and all the grass is just because people should be forced to go through at least some. And what about hidden items? You should have to walk a bit for them :)
Bushes: My tileset doesn't have bushes: it has rocks. Otherwise I would have. My tileset is odd that way.
Ledges Running Together: Why is this bad? :o I've never had anyone say this before.
One Boulder: Lol, I realised I misdid my trees later on, space wise, and wasn't about to restart so I put a rock there.
Entrances: No, there are only two. Sorry for the confusion, it's just the way I make my trees sometimes. (Explained a couple posts up. Already discussed with Pep.)
But once again, I really do appreciate your constructivity. If you'd explain the ledge thing, though, that'd be nice. (I'm actually not sure which ledges cnnecting you're talking about. Please point that out as well; but now that I think of it, you're probably talking about the northwestern one and the one in the middlenorth.)
Bushes: That is really bad that it didn't come with it. Lol
Ledge Running Together: Yeah I'm talking about that one. It just doesn't look appealing IMO.
Entrances: An Idea is IDK yet.
Pretty decent map.
You told me some of corrections and it's a 6.5/10
:) Thanks. OK, yeah, I was also wondering about the ledge too, but basically put it there anyway. It looks better with the rock since I added it.
So, that's what I'll be using from now on. I still need bushes though ;__;
Actually, the tiny trees might be the bush replacement. Oh well.
I added a map!!!
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Fine I will rate it Lol.I added a map!!!
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