TEH FRAGILENESS :D D: ROFL KIPS ANTI D_A :D D: TREMORZ!! GET ANGRY

[Sora_8920]

My team:

Opposing team:

(Funny how both of our teams have Porygon-Z's as leads. xD)

- I know how the match was kinda poor, but bear with me. xD This is also the best I could do, and it may be a little messy. =/

Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause
owno sent out Porygonz (lvl 100 Porygonz).
Itachi 2008 sent out Porygonz (lvl 100 Porygonz).
Porygonz's Download raised its stats!
Porygonz's attack was raised.
owno switched in A striped man in black? >_> (lvl 100 Electivire ?).
Porygonz used a mysterious power.
Electivire lost a tad of its health.
---
Itachi 2008 switched in a Mudkip D: (lvl 100 Swampert ?).
Electivire used a slightly powerful Focus Blast. soiherdjooliekchoicebandmudkipz lost a bit of its health. a Mudkip ate the apple it was holding! Health restored by a little.
---
Electivire created a tremor.
a Mudkip lost a bit more of it's health.
a Mudkip used a tremor that was extremely more powerful than Electrivire's.
It did only a passive amount due to Electrivire being weakened before by Porygon-Z's HP Fighting.
Electivire lost all of it's health.
owno's Electivire had to be returned back to it's pokeball.
soiherdjooliekchoicebandmudkipz ate the apple it was holding. Health restored by a bit.

---
owno switched in a Ghostly presence / Casper teh ghost (lvl 100 Gengar ?).
Itachi 2008 switched in Weavile (lvl 100 Weavile ?).
Weavile is exerting its pressure!
Gengar created a massive, engulfing explosion! Boom! Somebody set us up the bomb!
Weavile lost all of it's health.
Itachi 2008's Weavile had to be returned back to it's pokeball.
owno's Gengar had to be returned back to it's pokeball.
---
owno switched in the green mean, fighting machine. (xD) (lvl 100 Porygonz).
Itachi 2008 switched in Jackie Chan / 128-palms (lawlwut?) (lvl 100 Heracross ?).
Porygonz's Download raised its stats!
Porygonz's attack was raised.
Porygonz used a frigid beam of ice
Heracross lost a tad of it's health
Heracross used delivered a powerful, super effective Close Combat!
Porygonz lost all of it's health and had to be returned back to it's pokeball.

---
owno switched in a fragile Eevee evolution (lvl 100 Jolteon ?).
Itachi 2008 switched in a Mudkip D: (lvl 100 Swampert ?).
Jolteon used Thunderbolt.
It doesn't affect a Mudkip
a Mudkip ate the apple it was holding. Health restored by a tad.

---
Jolteon used Baton Pass.
owno switched in A ferocious dragon. >_> (lvl 100 Gyarados ?).
Gyarados's intimidate cut soiherdjooliekchoicebandmudkipz. D:'s attack!
A Mudkip created a tremor.
It doesn't affect the mighty dragon. A Mudkip ate the apple it was holding. Health restored by a little.
---
Gyarados used Teh dance of teh dragonz. xD
Gyarados's attack was raised.
Gyarados's speed was raised.
soiherdjooliekchoicebandmudkipz. D: used a frigid, normally effective beam of ice.
Gyarados lost a little bit of it's health.
Gyarados was h@xx0rred! xD
Gyarados ate the apple it was holding! Health restored by a little.
A Mudkip ate the apple it was holding! Health restored by a little.
---
Itachi 2008 switched in His Green mean, fighting machine xD (lvl 100 Porygonz).
Gyarados was un-h@xx0red! Oh noez!
Gyarados used Teh dance of teh dragonz. D:
Gyarados's attack was raised.
Gyarados's speed was raised.
Gyarados's ate the @pple it was h01ding, health restored by a little. xD
---
owno switched in Teh fragile Eevee Evolution (xD) (lvl 100 Jolteon ?).
Porygonz used teh Thund@b0ltz! The sky turned really dark and creeped the new Pokemon Moderator out! xD J/K, DA.
---
Itachi 2008 switched in A Mudkip D: (lvl 100 Swampert ?).
Jolteon used teh Thund@b0ltz again!
It didn't affect the mudskip evolution! (Didn't you learn your lesson from last time?! xD) A Mudkip ate the apple it was holding! Health restored by a little.
---
owno switched in Teh h@xx0red drag0n! (lvl 100 Gyarados ?).
Gyarados's intimidate cut soiherdjooliekchoicebandmudkipz. D:'s attack!
A Mudkip used a normally effective, frigid beam of ice. (Was the best move I could do, learned my lesson. xD)
Gyarados lost a little bit of it's health. Gyarados ate the apple it was holding! Health restored by a bit! A Mudkip ate the apple it was holding! health restored by a bit.
---
Itachi 2008 switched in A Flying Airplane. (Lolwut?) (lvl 100 Togekiss ?).
Gyarados used Dancing w/ the Stars. >_>
Gyarados's attack was raised.
Gyarados's speed was raised. Gyarados ate the apple it was holding! Health restored by a bit.
---
Gyarados used mah spring! -faints- Gimme back my spring, or $10!
Togekiss lost more than half of it's health.
Togekiss used Yoda!
Gyarados is paralysed! It may be fastened to it's seat belt! (Yeah, that's right , baby, hold on tight. xD)
Togekiss's ate the apple it was holding! Health restored by a bit.
Gyarados's ate the apple it was holding! Health restored by a bit.
---
Itachi 2008 switched in A Mudkip (lvl 100 Swampert ?).
Gyarados used mah spring again. >_> I told you to give it back, ya' fool!
soiherdjooliekchoicebandmudkipz. D: lost almost half of it's health. A Mudkip ate the apple it was holding! Health restored by a bit. Gyarados ate the apple it wsas holding! Health restored by a little.


---
Gyarados used Nooo000! 1 will not give you back your spring! I am teh evilness, like Anti! (J/K Anti.) Give it back, nao!!!1
A Mudkip. almost half of it's health.
A Mudkip. used Rawrrrrrrr!!!!1 (DA is scared. J/K) (roar)
owno switched in Pink Fatty Cheesecake (lvl 100 Blissey ?). A Mudkip ate the apple it was holding! Health restored by a little.
---
Itachi 2008 switched in 128-Palms Hi-ya! (lvl 100 Heracross ?).
Blissey used I am fat, so I'll just give you my ST quick so I can go back to sleep and be lazy like Snorlax. Hence, the Lax in it's name. D: (Seismic Toss)
Heracross lost a bit of it's health.
---
Heracross used I know kung-fu! Hy-ya! (Close Combat)
It's super effective!
Blissey lost all of it's health.
owno's Blissey died of a heart attack. xD

---
owno switched in Teh Fragileness. >_> (OMGF, new word. ^_^) (lvl 100 Jolteon ?).
Itachi 2008 switched in Scout Master Lumpus (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
Jolteon used I'm t00 phat t0 m0ve! (Thunderbolt)
Heatran lost 48% of its health.
---
Jolteon used I gotta go to teh bathroom. Brb. Hurry up!!! (Thunderbolt)
Heatran lost 48% of its health.
Heatran used teh powa of Toxic. (Earth Powa.)
It's super effective!
Jolteon lost all of it's health.
owno's Jolteon fainted.
---
owno switched in Ima no longer ferocious. Damn. (lvl 100 Gyarados ?).
Gyarados's intimidate cut Scout Master Lumpus's (Heatran) attack!
Itachi 2008 switched in I do not want to hurt you! CATS: good for us, then. xD (lvl 100 Porygonz).
Gyarados used I told you to give my back spring, damnit! No, actually it was the other way around. Give it back nao!!!!!!!
Porygonz lost 18% more than half of it's health. Gyarados's ate the apple it was holding. Health restored by a little.
---
Porygonz used I destroyed your spring while you weren't looking. >_> NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! xD
It's super effective! (Thundabolt :P)
Gyarados lost all of it's health.
owno's Gyarados died of fear of Michael Jackson.
Itachi 2008 wins!
owno has left the room.

 

[airconditioning]

Sounds like it was a good battle. Although between the small font and lack of commentary, I got bored around the first turn and skipped the rest of the log. But you did well, I think.

 

[Aquilae]

Pretty bad formatting there, I could not read the log, which is badly massacred and lacking a lot of, if any, readability.

I also feel that both the players played badly, for one Electivire is not a good switchin into PZ as it will get massacred by Tri-Attack. Electivire without HP Grass obviously loses one on one versus Swampert, Weavile is not a good switchin on Gengar as it does not resist anything but Shadow Ball, Gengar exploded on a physical tank with its low base attack, and Swampert obviously cannot beat BulkyGyarados one on one unless it has Stone Edge or HP Electric. Gyarados was a prime, and only viable switchin on Heracross at that point resisting Close Combat.

I hated the changing of the battle log, towards the end I could not follow the battle, and the leet speak made it even harder to read and comprehend, as well as the obvious exclusion of attacks.

 

[Sora_8920]

Pretty bad formatting there, I could not read the log, which is badly massacred and lacking a lot of, if any, readability.

I also feel that both the players played badly, for one Electivire is not a good switchin into PZ as it will get massacred by Tri-Attack. Electivire without HP Grass obviously loses one on one versus Swampert, Weavile is not a good switchin on Gengar as it does not resist anything but Shadow Ball, Gengar exploded on a physical tank with its low base attack, and Swampert obviously cannot beat BulkyGyarados one on one unless it has Stone Edge or HP Electric. Gyarados was a prime, and only viable switchin on Heracross at that point resisting Close Combat.

I hated the changing of the battle log, towards the end I could not follow the battle, and the leet speak made it even harder to read and comprehend, as well as the obvious exclusion of attacks.

Well, as aforementioned in my signature, it was my very first log. But I'll note this advice, thanks. =) I really don't know any format I could use at the moment, so I'd appreciate it if you could tell me what I could use for that. =/ Also, as for the leet speak, I was trying to make it funner by that, but if you don't want me to utilize it, I'll remove it. =)

And I am a bad player, btw. =/

 

[airconditioning]

First, NO SIZE 1 FONTS. If I have to squint to read it, I'm not reading it.

Two, add some commentary. Just a plain old log is boring.

Three, edit out Lefties recover, Life Orb damage, etc. It's nice to see the first time, but after that, we know they have Lefties. We don't want it forced in our faces.

Four, try bolding/ coloring important parts, such as players, Pokemon, or commentary.

Last, leet speak hasn't been funny since 2001.

EDIT: Now that I've actually read some of it, add in approximations of damage dealt/ recieved. 'A tad' is not a valid description of the amount of damage that Electivire takes from Porygon-Z's HP Fighting. Oh, and it'd be nice to actually know WHAT MOVES ARE BEING USED BECAUSE THAT'S KIND OF IMPORTANT.

 

[Sora_8920]

First, NO SIZE 1 FONTS. If I have to squint to read it, I'm not reading it.

Two, add some commentary. Just a plain old log is boring.

Three, edit out Lefties recover, Life Orb damage, etc. It's nice to see the first time, but after that, we know they have Lefties. We don't want it forced in our faces.

Four, try bolding/ coloring important parts, such as players, Pokemon, or commentary.

Last, leet speak hasn't been funny since 2001.[/QUOTE]

Lol. Thanks for the help, I appreciate it. :]

 

[Archer]

- Its not bad, but you might wanto to add some more of an intro as well as laying out the teams better. (You sort of left out the opponent's Blissey...)
- Small font doesn't bother me, but I have good eyes and my laptop screen is like 7 inches from my face, soooo...
- Be more specific with attacks (less Freaky Dragon used I'm gonna take your springz0rz kplsthx. It did damage and stuff.)
-Nicknames. People don't want to keep scrolling back up to find out who 'Scout Master Lumpus' was.

Overall, it's nice it just needs a few layout tweaks.

 

[ABYAY]

Yeah, the text is way too small, cutting down my ability to easily read it. I give you major props for customizing up all of the text, but at some points, I couldn't tell what you were talking about. What was "The spring?" Waterfall?

Anyway, I still highly credit your creative thoughts.

 

[Sora_8920]

Yeah, the text is way too small, cutting down my ability to easily read it. I give you major props for customizing up all of the text, but at some points, I couldn't tell what you were talking about. What was "The spring?" Waterfall?

Anyway, I still highly credit your creative thoughts.

Yeah, I have to admit I made it confusing kind of. =/ Yes, Waterfull = Teh Spring . :P EDIT: Ty. :]

 

[Anti]

This log makes me wonder how in the world people EVER thought leet speak was funny. Quite frankly, it only makes the log EXTREMELY annoying and bordering on unreadable. IT also makes it look very newbish and unprofessional (and making these "professional" really isn't that tough to do).

I'm going to agree with Aquilae and ac though. Neither side played exactly great. If you're not a good battler, is there really any point in posting a battle log? The entire point of battle logs is to show a match where both players made good plays and usually a few mistakes, ultimately ending up in a well-fought battle and an interesting read. This was none of those, which is ultimately why it fell short for me.

I'll give you some advice here:

- Add commentary. Generally, explaining your moves gives the reader a better idea of what you were thinking during the match.

- Get rid of the leet speak and the annoying jokes. They really aren't funny, and they just clutter up and make a mess of the log.

- Change the nicknames or don't use them in place of the pokemon's name. Reading "soo I herd j00 liek mukipz D:" a million times is extremely irritating. I'd really just use their names so you can follow it.

- Try putting what move was actually used. I really don't want to try and figure out what creating a tremor is (only in less obvious situations). After all, I never have heard of a move called "mah spring" before. Or "mysterious power."

- Take out the blue font and organize the log. It's really bunched up and unorganized, and the font just makes things annoying.

I have to be honest...I barely took the time to skim this. It's pretty much unreadable. Next time you post a log, I just recommend making it better organized and without the annoying leet speak, as well as it being a better battle.

I'm not trying to be too critical, but this does need a lot of work.

 

[BeachBoy]

Oi Itachi, poor son of a biscuit got his head blown off. D:

For future reference... Check out → this thread. Also, you really got slaughtered with comments on the format, so I'm not going to damper your spirits further. Why don't you try private messaging your next battle log to someone before posting it. That way, you don't get this type of massacre again. ;D

Rough battle to read, but at least you took some time to post it. Good luck with your future battle logs~

` BeachBoy

 

[Sora_8920]

For future reference... Check out → this thread. Also, you really got slaughtered with comments on the format, so I'm not going to damper your spirits further. Why don't you try private messaging your next battle log to someone before posting it. That way, you don't get this type of massacre again. ;D

Rough battle to read, but at least you took some time to post it. Good luck with your future battle logs~

` BeachBoy

Thanks.

Oi Itachi, poor son of a biscuit got his head blown off. D:

It's kind of ok since we didn't have this thread when I made this IIRC. >;)