tell me what you think...

[Kimicatdemon]

I made a Wild arms sprite comic awhile back, and I'm not sure if it's good enough. Tell me what you think of it and I might start a little story line.
BTW: the sprites came from www .wildarms -zone. info /cgi-bin/wa_bbs/yybbs.cgi

https://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d90/kimi_catdemon/wildarmscomic.gif

 

[Signomi]

Hmm, well the first chapter itself didn't really catch my interest all that much. You might want to tidy up its neatness aswell, make the snow seem more realistic, instead of just white, add shading to it, like darker shades of white rather than just white only, I'm not too sure about what the girl is wearing either, it doesn't match the style of her head, again, try and add shading to it, using light and darker shades of a specific colour. But never the less, nice attempt, I look forward to seeing more from you :)

 

[Esupio]

Well for snow I would use a very very light blue thats close to white but still distingusible enough. You didn't make the sprites (thats what I gathered). The humour was weak unless it wasn't supposed to be humour. Just keep practicing and giving it your all and you'll get better.