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FireRed hack: The adventures of a Traveler (Time Version)

PaulGR

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    [PokeCommunity.com] The adventures of a Traveler (Time Version)

    ++++++++The adventures of a traveler++++++++
    [PokeCommunity.com] The adventures of a Traveler (Time Version)

    -Storyline-
    What happened when your dad dissapear what would you do?
    Try to find him? Wait for him?
    Build a time machine and travel back in time?
    --------------------------------------
    Part 1
    ---------
    Beat all eight Time Protectors(*1)
    of Tame Region (*2)
    to collect the eight stones of Time (*3)
    so PRO.Ash can built a Time Machine to sent you back
    in Time,to Hoenn Region, to find your father who is the
    Elite Four Leader.
    Part 2
    --------
    You are in Hoenn Region trying to beat all the
    gym Leaders to take place in the Champion to
    talk to your father. You cam acros dialga several
    times who tryies to stop you.!

    [PokeCommunity.com] The adventures of a Traveler (Time Version)

    -Progress-

    Spoiler:


    Route 104 -100%-
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    [/SPOILER]

    Islend Island -100%-
    Spoiler:

    [PokeCommunity.com] The adventures of a Traveler (Time Version)
    [/SPOILER]

    Hale City -100%-
    Spoiler:

    [PokeCommunity.com] The adventures of a Traveler (Time Version)
    [/SPOILER]

    [PokeCommunity.com] The adventures of a Traveler (Time Version)

    -Pokemons-
    New Pokemons
    Spoiler:


    Legendary Pokemons
    Spoiler:




    ​
     
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    As good as this looks you kinda need to stick to one tile style.
    For example you have two different pallettes for the main grass
    [PokeCommunity.com] The adventures of a Traveler (Time Version)
    [PokeCommunity.com] The adventures of a Traveler (Time Version)

    see?

    Also the name 'Time Version' has already been taken.
    By me in fact (see my sig) So, you might wanna change that.
     
    I mean this in the nicest possible way, mind you, but your grammar is atrocious. If you're intending to be taken seriously, it would help to learn how to speak properly.
     
    Nintendork15 said:
    As good as this looks you kinda need to stick to one tile style.
    For example you have two different pallettes for the main grass
    [PokeCommunity.com] The adventures of a Traveler (Time Version)
    [PokeCommunity.com] The adventures of a Traveler (Time Version)

    see?

    Also the name 'Time Version' has already been taken.
    By me in fact (see my sig) So, you might wanna change that.
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    Well the full name is Pokemon Time Traveler Version but i make it Pokemon Time for the logo
     
    Some other things.
    How come all 'your characters' aren't yours. You just renamed current pokémon characters and the Thread's prefix says Fire red hack and this is clearly is a ruby hack
     
    Some of the tiles look kinda 3D'ish. Which wouldn't be bad except for the fact that you have flat house tiles in the same map, which just makes it look funky.

    Same thing goes for the grammar, characters, and palettes. This hack will take a lot of polishing. The basic stuff isnt bad, but you really need to work on this.

    Not trying to be mean or anything, just kinda frank :)
     
    I don't mean to beat on a dead tree here, but I agree the grammar does need fixing.

    One thing I'd like to add is unless there is some special thing going on with the trees (like headbutting them or make something out of them), you don't need a script on every tree saying it's cute, tall, purple, staring at you from long distances, etc. It just wastes your time and space in the ROM if you do it for every tree.
     
    Teh Blazer said:
    I don't mean to beat on a dead tree here, but I agree the grammar does need fixing.

    One thing I'd like to add is unless there is some special thing going on with the trees (like headbutting them or make something out of them), you don't need a script on every tree saying it's cute, tall, purple, staring at you from long distances, etc. It just wastes your time and space in the ROM if you do it for every tree.
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    I dont wanna realveal anything but i have to.. O NTHE GOLDEN TREE AFTER SAVING YOUR FATHER WILL BE A RARE POKEMON ;)
     
    Guys, we get it.His grammar isn't the best, his title is already taken, and is tilesets need improving. Saying over and over again just gets annoying, so stop hatin' already. I think the idea is good and that if he could get some help, instead of just getting told that he needs improving, this could be a really good hack.
     
    niven said:
    Guys, we get it.His grammar isn't the best, his title is already taken, and is tilesets need improving. Saying over and over again just gets annoying, so stop hatin' already. I think the idea is good and that if he could get some help, instead of just getting told that he needs improving, this could be a really good hack.
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    No-one is 'hatin'.
    We're just merely pointing out errors in his hack and telling him in the politest way possible.
    If you want I can get meaner. C:

    @PAULGR
    You still didn't say anything towards the multiple styled tilesets D:
     
    You guess are repeating yourselves when you point out problems, we all know the grammar isn't the best but it can still be read and with everything else try to only say it once. I think its a good idea and story but the thread just needs a little fixing for now (:
     
    Dont let people hate on you when youve got something good. I think its just greate that people are still entusiastic about creating pokemon hacks. Its a great hack but does lugia play any big part in this. Would be cool if he did
     
    About all the different tilesets of ground.... In every region the grass is not the same.. i do not like to have just one to work with... I like my hack to be more ''realistic''
     
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