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The choa garden!!!

Suddenly, red eyes looked through the smoke, and a huge light arrow shot through eclipses right wing. Walking through the smoke was a chao that looked like a mix of a Hero Chaos Chao, a Dark Chaos Chao, and A netural chaos chaos. It had horns on its head, yet it also had a light between the horns, and a halo above that. It's wings were both leathery and feathery. and it's arms were both clawed, and had a wrist band with a mini-light dagger on top of them. the feet were both tough,thin, and fat. a Rainbow aura was generated around it, and it carried a sword that was light on one side, dark on one side, and a orange light that somehow casted a slight shadow. It looked at Eclipse, and said, "I am Simply the Chao of chaos. I have more power than Chaos itself. At the same time, what I think my intentions are good, some of you think they are evil. And Vice versa. I am Ion, and I shall destroy you and all others who dare interfere in my regime!!", and slashed her with it's chaos sword, penetrating through all the sheilds and illusions, and sliced Eclipses arm off. The arm wiggled around for a moment, then crumbled to dust. "Don't think about regenerating, Eclipse," Ion said. "When my chaos blade slices off, it will never come back." He said, and pulled out a chaos arrow, and aimed at Eclipse...
 
"you leave me no choice. you have turned into pure evil, and for that, my duty as Archangel is to eleminate you from this world." and with that, Eclipse regenerated herself and brought out the Blade of Order, the true enemy of Chaos. "Forgive me father, but I am the only one who can do this.." she whispered to no one in particular. then, with a movement faster than can be seen, she appeared right in front of this new monster, and sent her blade straight through it's heart and twisted it. "So long as you were at least partially pure it was aginst my code to destroy you! but this monster you have allowed yourself to become is not pure!" She roared, before pulling the blade from his body.
 
"Hehehe...." Ion said, with a twisted grin, as rainbow-colored blood dripped from his body, he said, "You think a mere blade of order can stop me??" and stood up, the cut fadeing, as though it were never there. "Order, in fact, is the thing that creates chaos, for people argue over whether the order is right, or if the order was wrong, that creates chaos." Ion said, and grinning, he slammed the blade of order with his chaos blade. Suddenly, the blade of order shattered. Ion grinned, and slashed Eclipse in two with his chaos blade. Eclipse stood for just a moment, then collasped to the ground, but as she hit the ground, her body dissapeared, until there wasn't a trace left.
 
Ion laughed, and said, "Yes, Eclipse is finally destroyed!!!". He flew to the capital city of the world, and taking over a commoner's body, he walked to the president's building.....
 
Ion was nearing the president's building, when he saw a food stand. He wasn't hungry, but the body he was controling was. So, fed up, he teleported to the presidents office, and began his world takeover...
 
Ion looked at Toby, grinning.

"You actually thought I was Red, you insolent little chao??" Ion said. "No, I am Ion, The Chao of Chaos. And you will..." Suddenly he stopped talking, and dropped down. "No..." Ion said. "It can't be two hours already.... They fused 45 minnutes ago..."He said, and realized, "Darn...That blade of order may have not been able to kill me, but It did a good job of shortening the time I had in this form... Darn it.." He said, and suddenly, two chaos walked out from the sides of Ion, One Shugo, The other Red. After they were comepletly seperated, Ion's body dissapeared.

Red looked at toby, and said, "You have no idea what you're up against.", but as he prepared his blade to strike. Shugo said, "Wait." He looked at toby, and said, "Hey little guy. Ya wanna train ta become a neutral chaos chao??".
 
OOC: I was thinking to start posting here (As I had made my character), but seeing as how people are forced out of this thread, I decided that I'll not.
[Poof]
 
OOC: Jolteon, as I can see, wants me out of this thread, so I'll just post rarely here.
 
OOC: Jolteon, Ion didn't have ta come back mysteriously. Chaos chaos are immortal not only in this story but also in the game. So no, He don't have ta come back mysteriously because he didn't even die!!!:pirate:
 
OOC: back for no apparent reason, but if that was true, Eclipse couldn't die becasue she had reached the chaos chao stage. besides that, normally the only people who can kill charecters are the people that play them. Plus, you were being unfair because you were being immortal while I was letting my charecter tire. Especially since the entire aspect of Chao was completly disregarded
 
OOC: What I forgot ta say was, the only thing that can kill a chaos chao, is the chaos blade. Get it??XD

And you were the one disregarding!!
 
OOC: and who, exactly, shot who in the first place? anyway, I figure since things have calmed down a bit, it's safe to revive my charecter..

IC: In the Mystic Ruins Chao garden, one of the shrines glowed for a moment, and a familer chao matirealised in front of it. Eclipse stood, and putting on her cloak, headed straight for the dark chao garden.. perhaps this time she could be left alone...
 
Red stood up, and said, "Ah, Eclipse has returned.". Shugo snickered, and said, "Yeah. I expected her ta be back alot sooner. That chaos blade strike we pulled was nowhere near enough to destroy anything for good.". "Yeah," Red said. "But did you notice the presence of a different soul??" He said. "Yeah" Shugo replied. "We were only able to choose how strong the attacks were. The body was controled by something else." He said. "Let's flip a coin on who goes back and tells eclipse." Red said, and drawing out a coin, he threw it up in the air...
 
Eclipse quickly reached the dark garden, and quickly found out that she had no control over her power any longer. her power instantly absorbed into the ground, sending power shocks all through the area.. no way! when I died, I must have lost my ability to control my power and mind, I have to start training all over again! she thought.. she headed straight for the corner and started the ancient chant, but she knew her mind was open for mental control... she sensed a presence behind her and turned, breaking her chant. it was a devil chao, but this one had a power signature that spelled pure evil. "Who are you and why are you inturupting my training?" Eclipse said.

"simple. I know you are currently at your weakest state, and now you're going to pay for bothering being compassionate to another chao." it said, and before I knew it, he had me pinned to the wall by the throat. "unhand me you little-" I started to yell, but he simply increased the pressure on my throat to keep me from continuing. then, as if I had not spoken, he said "before they killed you you were impervious to my mental control. but now you're mine." and with that, he started muttering an incantation under his breath.. I knew that once he finished the spell, i was his slave...
 
Just as red grabbed the coin, shugo's eyes turned green, and turning to the hole that led to the dark garden, he pulled out a light arrow, and fired it. It grew as it flew through the hole, destroying any evil of a chao. It slammed into the devil chao. The arrow turned upwards as soon as it hit the devil chao, and it careened into the sun, creating a huge explosion. Red turned around, and said, "What the??". "I don't know, myself." Shugo said. "It was as if I sensed somebody was in danger. You think...." He said to red, but they both shook their heads, and said, "Nah."
 
Eclipse had been lucky. 3 more words, and the spell would have been complete. but she wasn't really sure it mattered, as her energy had totally been soaked out of her body. and because the spell was so close to completion, it had delt intense damage to her. She rubbed her throat, and noticed the blood from where the chao's claws dug into her. she flew over into the corner, and just hardly able to keep on her feet, resumed chanting...
 
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