the dragon riders of ahril

[rayquaza master z]

this is the story of the legendary dragon riders of ahril here you can be 1 of the many dragon riders either hero or villan any number of ppl can apply.
application
name:
age:
dragon:
special power:
side:

dragons-
shadow 1 villans only
black 5/5
red 2/2
blue 5/5
green 5/5
grey 5/5
white 2/2
golden 1 hero only
if you dont like these u can pick youre own


this is my application
name: necroshunter
age: 21
dragon: shadow dragon
power: corrupt
side: villan

 

[Karasuma]

name:MT
age:90
dragon:Kingdra
special power:Obliteraion
side:Pure Good Hearted

 

[rayquaza master z]

ok so are you like a hero paladin or just a simple dragon rider?

 

[Xhaiden]

Would I be able to play as a dragon? or am I required to play a rider as well?

 

[rayquaza master z]

umm u can be both or just a dragon u choose

 

[pokehunter56]

this sounds pretty sweet. ill join

name:Arthor
age:37
dragon: midevil blade dragon
special power: blade slash
side:forces of good.

 

[Shadowfaith]

x_x Umm...you need more than two lines for a plot sorry to say. You need background information, description and furthermore information on what the RPGers must do. So:

Add in:

Where is Ahril, what does it look like and what resigns there. Give information on the land.

How did the Dragon riders come to be and what must they do. Give background information and History on how they were formed.

Who are the villains, who are these riders after and what must they do to accomplish their victories.

Any sub plots you may want to add?

Anyways, also you may want to work on grammar and punctuation, I know you can't be good at everything...heck I suck at grammar and spelling, but I try, so try adding full stops, commas and furthermore capital letters.

Try using word and checking your punctuation, or get someone else to do it for you ^_-

 

[rayquaza master z]

k umm ahril is a distand land were dragons magic and wizardry is real like the lord of the rings places
the dragon riders are people chossen by dragons to help them stop evil or help create it
what every1 has to do is try to capture the orb of the dragons but in order to get to the top of the summit were it rests you must either beet enough riders from the oppisite side
and if anyone has anymore question pm then to me and i will answer them =)