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The Elemental Islands [For New RPers]

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Dragon Ryder said:
He was nice to hug. (lol)
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OOC: -_-" Latias ... is ... a ... GIRL!!!

IC:
"Ack..cchhack!"
Maddy had pulled Jett, along with all the other trainers, with the help of her pokemon, all the way off Moon Island to Clear Island for lunch.
"Wait, I gotta patch Skarmory up first!" Jett broke free of Maddy's grasp, ran into the Pokemon Center, and ran back out in less than 3 minutes, with Skarmory completely healed; resuming where he left off: In Maddy's grasp.
"Since you lost, I'll let you pick the restaurant", Jett said with a giggle.
 
Alix looked at her Gyarados. It made her remember everything about her childhood. When, during sleepy Sundays, she would try to wake her brother up from his afternoon naps. When she would try to wake him up to play tag, or some other game in the small garden in front of her house, dotted with bushes and flowers.
Plop plop plop. Alix began throwing more rocks.
Growlithe looked at his owner strangely. He slowly approached her. He nudged her on her shoulder with his snout. Alix snapped out of her memories, and smiled at her Pokemon. Growlithe barked, and continued to nudge his owner.
"Oh... You want me to play with you?"
Growlithe smiled and nodded furiously. Alix's smile slowly turned into a slight frown. She turned away from her Pokemon, looking at the sea, into the horizon. The Growlithe, confused, bit on Alix's sleeve, pulling on it.
"Let go, Growlithe!"
The canine Pokemon furiously shook its head, whining. He really wanted Alix to play with him.
"I said let go!"
Alix finally managed to make Growlithe release it's grip. It looked down, walking away from Alix and towards Dratini and Pidgeotto, disappointed. Why did Growlithe want me to... Then the answer just came into her head. He's worried about me...
 
Kerhra was quite shocked at Jett, "No-one thinks before talking." she said quietly, seemingly quite annoyed.
But she soon had Buddy tugging at her kimono "Don't, you might damage it." Kerhra then looked up and saw maddy beside Jett looking back at her. She sighed then said "Okay, i'll come." So Kerhra started down the hillside.

OOC: my posts seem too short -, - i'm clearly not a person that can write things and make it decent in length, maybe i should leave this RP
note: i do try
 
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I smiled at Jett and Kehra, they were coming! My cunning plan had worked! Well, it wasn't that cunning!
"C'mon guys!" I shouted.
I was happy, really happy. I watched Buddy get behind Kehra and start to push her, so much she almost fell over. Charlie and Draco were pulling on Isagi's foot, and made him fall over. Eve and Arctic were pushing Rain, one was pulling and one was pushing. It was so funny, making these people move with my pokemon. I laughed.
"The Winner's Circle Tavern. I might as well choose Jett, because you're new here!"
I laughed again as wel all ran down the mountain (except Isagi, he rolled)
 
Rain shakes her head, looking at her Bagon who had been on her shoulder the whole time. Some people just have too much energy, she thinks as they head down the mountain, cringing slightly as there's a buzzing in her ear. "Excuse me, can we stop for a second, this darn things on the fritz again!" She tries to shout to the others, removing a weird earpiece from her ear (duh).
 
I stopped and waited for Rain. I saw her pull a ear-thingy out of her ear, fiddle with it, then put it back in. It was a weird ear-thingy. Looked like a hearing-aid. It seem to buzz, like my grandpa's used to...
"What's that?" I asked. I could have been rude, but it dosen't get in the way of my curiosity.
I was curious, I'm always curious. I just seem to love finding new things, hidey-holes, new land and bush-walking. It's so much fun
 
"Its a pokemon translator," Rain says. "Fit it onto your ear like so, and you can hear pokespeak in any known language, and about 5 dead ones," she says with a slight nod as she fiddles with it using a skrewdriver. "The thing's always on the fritz for some reason, but its fairly easy to fix," she says, makes some adjustments, and fits it back on her ear. "I've got another one if you want it."
 
"Oh Wow!" I beamed at it in amazement.
"ow" I heard a small voice, i think it was Jett, as i was pulling him
I dragged Jett over to Rain. I stared at the translator
"Can I try one on? Ill give it back when i finish!"
I gave a little 'puppy eyes', so she would LOVE to let me use it
 
OOC: Hotaru, don't leave just because your posts are a little short. Mine are usually long and I'm ok with it. Please stay.

IC:
After catching Ralts, Kid was full of excitement and energy.

"I've got a Pokemon! I'm an official trainer now! Yay!" Kid exclaimed.
Lugia was nudging Kid looking angry.
"I know, I know; I have you, too. But I've known you my whole life, and the same goes for you. Aren't you excited to finally have another Pokemon on our team?" Kid asked Lugia.
Lugia's angry expression turned to a smile.
"There. I told you. Let's go get something to eat. It's been a long night."

So he headed down the stairs of the hotel and to the town center of Moon Island.
Lugia, who usually rested on Kid's shoulder, was now flying beside Kid as he jumped, skipped, and ran around the town square.

"So, do I want to eat at the pancake house or the tropical restaurant? Hmm, I am hungry for a fruit drink, and being a vegetarian, sausages and pancakes doesn't seem to appealing." As he passed the 'door' made of strings of beads, he shouted to Lugia, who flew high above, "I'll be in here, ok buddy? Wait for me until I get us some grub!"

OOC: I have no idea why there's a tropical restaurant on Moon Island. :P
IC:
"I'll have the banana pineapple smoothy, please. And could I get two strawberry smoothies in bowls, please. It's for my Pokemon." Kid told the waitress.

Meanwhile, Lugia was flying high above the city, and he decided it was the perfect day to explore the island. As he approached Mt. Night the sky seemed to get darker. He could see that there were Staryu's glowing in the water, even though it wasn't nightime, but breakfast time. He looked over the sea to the north where the main continents were, far away. Lugia got a strong sense of forboding evil when he looked out that way. He decided it was for the best that he inspect the problem himself, if just a little. Kid would be proud of him for scouting ahead. So he flew low enough to get close to the Staryu's. But it wasn't close enough, so Lugia dived headlong into the ocean.

"Lugia! I've got your breakfast here! Lugia!" Kid called.
With a confused look on his face, he pulled a Pokeball from his waist and sent out Ralts.
"Here, Ralts. I didn't know which flavor you liked, I hope strawberry is okay. It's Lugia's favorite." As he set the bowl down for Ralts to eat, Kid suddenly got a strong sense of something forboding coming this way. Ratls looked up at Kid, sensing his fear.
"Huh? Lugia!" Kid ran toward the beach, hoping to find Lugia there. Ralts squiggled off the bench backwards, and fell with his butt in the sand. He got up immediately and followed Kid, leaving tiny footprints in the sand.
 
...Right, because I'm feeling nice, and because I failed to specify, (even though I shouldn't have to either way) Warning 2.5, because:

Posts like this
where you press
enter every other few
words, don't count as
paragraphs. M'kay?

So don't do those. Make full length lines, and again, my specifications with layout are, if you want to see what your posts look like to me on my layout's tablet, then go to Blue Variant. Then you can tell whether your posts are paragraphs or not.

Hotaru, your posts are short, I won't deny that, but after the second warning they got a little bit better, and out of the red zone. Add another line or so, and you'll be out of the yellow zone, and into the green. There's no reason for you to leave this RP unless you want to leave yourself.

PARAGRAPHS. FULL. PARAGRAPHS.
 
ah kay, thank Bijou......

I smiled with glee as Rain handed me a Pokemon Translater. It looked like a hearing aid, but had a small pokeball design on the outside. I put it in my ear, hoping to hear some sort of voices.
[Can you hear me?] I heard Arctic, as she landed on Rain's shoulders. She sounded gentle. I nodded and smiled.
"This thing is great! I'll pay for it!" I smiled and handed over some of my money (10 000 PokeDollars((OOC: It might seem like a lot of money...))) and continued to pull the others, before Rain could say no. I pulled them down to the bridge to Clear Island. But then I remembered a great tropical resturant on this island.
I smiled and said to everyone, "Wait, there's a place down the road, we'll go there!"
I pulled them around to the resturant. I walked in, and their pokemon were automatically released, without them doing it.
"A new sort of technology, makes pokemon jump out of pokeballs when passing through it,"
I pulled them all to the counter and said, "All-You-Can-Eat Salad Bars for everyone, plus drinks!"
"Table 24," the waiter said in a droney voice
 
The gang sat at the table to look at the menus.
"I'll just have the chef salad," Jett decided, "and two bowls of Pokemon food for Skarmory and Latias." The waiter wrote down his selection while he shot a curious glance at Latias, and then moved on to the other trainers. Skarmory perched at Jett's feet. Latias flew in gleeful loops between Maddy and Jett, pleased at making a new friend.
Jett looked at the different trainers at the table. I wonder if, perhaps, we could stop Team Universe, he thought.
 
[Whooo-eeee, New Friends!] I heard Latias say in much glee. She was smiling, and i smiled back. I gave her another hug. I hoped she liked them, as I keep doing it.
"What would you like, madam?"
"Alfredo Pasta Sauce, by itself, with croutons, a cheeseburger and ice cream later on, thanks!"
I looked at my pokemon, and heard their requests.
[Just a poke-burger!] Buddy said happily
[Ice-icles] Arctic smiled
[Chip-pyramid] Trapinch jumped up and down at his favourite
[Pure water and flavoured sea grass] Draco curled up, and waited for me to tell the waiter.
[Just pokefood for me] Eve said with a warm smile
I repeated the requests to the waiter who looked at me in utter confusion. Never-the-less, he wrote it down.
"Oh, and plus, desert for them afterwards," I wanted to give my pokemon a treat, as they had been battling greatly today.
The waiter stared at me again. He looked at my ear, and nodded, satisfying his confusion.
He moved on to the next trainer as i said to Jett, "You gotta try this thing! It's great!"
I passed the PokeTranslator to him and smiled as he put it in his ear.
 
OOC: Is this restaurant the same place I'm at? Or isn't it? Either way, it's kinda important to the my next post that we're all on the same island. Kid is currently on Moon Island and I believe the majority of you guys are on Clear Island?

And Bijou, even though typing only this is against the rules...

"I've got a Pokemon! I'm an official trainer now! Yay!" Kid exclaimed.
Lugia was nudging Kid looking angry.
"I know, I know; I have you, too. But I've known you my whole life, and the same goes for you. Aren't you excited to finally have another Pokemon on our team?" Kid asked Lugia.
Lugia's angry expression turned to a smile.
"There. I told you. Let's go get something to eat. It's been a long night."
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...I'm not in trouble if I'm writing parapraphs before and after that. Right? Because if there's confusion or there's a borderline between it being ok and it being not ok, I'll stop writing like that.


Thanks for not giving us warning #3.
 
No probs, but...whuh? x_x

*stupid light turns on*

You mean if you do something like this?

Paragraph 1

Paragraph 2

Paragraph 3?

Because that's okay, because that's more then one paragraph. And, there's nothing wrong with that paragraph by itself anyway. There weren't any problems on warning 2.5 except for Dragon Ryder's repeated half-line posts, so no worries. Those have been fixed.

Eech. I feel like I'm spamming up this RP. *will delete this later on*
 
Rain gives it some thought before deciding on her order, likewise, she passes on the orders of her 6 pokemon, with a little smile at the waitress' confusion. She smiles, and lets Ruby, her Bagon, rest in her lap. Serena and Rina, her Dratini and Trapinch look curiously at the other pokemon around them. Hera, her torchic is just looking out the window at the moment. While her Feebas, Mystic and her Horsea, Queenie, are doing whatever water pokemon do in a resteraunt.

With these gals on my side, I'm sure to eventualy reach my goal of being the best dragon trainer in the world, but with Lance around still, the journey won't be easy, she thinks. Lance, what happened? Why did you change?
 
(*shrugs* Its your post, I think.)
 
OOC: btw, is this post long enough? 'Cause I was posting here using my PSP (Im crazy like that >.<) and, it has a character limit for posting, and...well, I used it up xD

myself said:
The gang sat at the table to look at the menus.
"I'll just have the chef salad," Jett decided, "and two bowls of Pokemon food for Skarmory and Latias." The waiter wrote down his selection while he shot a curious glance at Latias, and then moved on to the other trainers. Skarmory perched at Jett's feet. Latias flew in gleeful loops between Maddy and Jett, pleased at making a new friend.
Jett looked at the different trainers at the table. I wonder if, perhaps, we could stop Team Universe, he thought.
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