The Funny Comic of mine V.2

[SuperDeoxys]

Here is my comic i made:
Comic 1
Comic2
Here is episode 2:

 

[[NovaPirate]]

One you need better jokes. Much better jokes.
And get better backgrounds, the eye blinding paint default colors are.. blinding my eyes.
You definantly need better grammar. Spell check on word :)
Speech bubbles would be nice.

 

[SuperDeoxys]

Episode 3 done (well when i edit)
And i changed comic 2

 

[Crazy Weavile]

Meh. Not funny, bad graphics. I'd advise using overworld sprites, better jokes, and a more coherent story.

 

[Death Rogers]

A few words of advice:

1 In-battle sprites are pretty much the worst kind of sprites for a comic. You should use overworld sprites, except for when there's a battle.

2 Don't use default paint colors for backgrounds.

3 Use speech bubbles. Using just a line and words makes it hard to tell who's saying it.

4 (This is going to sound harsh, but I'm only trying to help.) Get better jokes. The ones you're using now aren't even remotely funny.

 

[SuperDeoxys]

When i get speech bubbles i get a see through speech buble!

 

[Weatherman Kiyoshi]

it's okay. I've seen worse. I didn't laugh, and The story could use some sence,
and it could use better backrounds and jokes. But, atleast you set up a chairter
basis. use overworlds and smaller -like poke'mon games- backround for them
to walk on.

 

[ck1109]

actually I thought it was ok. It was a very good try

 

[Defranco]

Its alright The jokes werent funny though and the backgrounds were rather annoying.

 

[Young Wallflower]

I agree with Achamo; the comic could use some sense. I didn't really understand it at first. =/

It made me giggle, though. :P