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The Great Adventure *ReMake*

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    As Beo made his way through the perils of viridian forest he wondered when he would reach pewter city and if his pokemon were ready to take on such a challenge. Beo decided it wouldnt hurt to take an hour or so to train his pokemon while they still had some daylight available. "Ok everyone come on out" Beo hollered throwing his three pokeballs into the air.

    "Ele, Sen, Man--key" the three pokemon shouted as they started running around. A smile grew on Beos face as he saw his three pokemon that now made up his team. "Ok guys I thought we could use some training before we get to Pewter city, what do you guys think" Beo said asking his pokemon. The three pokemon nodded there heads and prepared themselves for some intense training.

    "OK so I figured we could first work on are speed, so I want each of you to start at me and sprint to the tree in front of you, first one to make it to the top of the tree wins and will recieve a special treat" Beo said as he watched his pokemon get ready. "Oh and you can use any tactic to stop the other ones."

    "On your marks, get set, go!" Beo shouted as the three pokemon took off with sentret pulling ahead.

    Then zaps shot a thundershock at the sentret slowing it down enough to gain the lead, meanwhile mankey was in dead last dancing and taking its time. "Oh come on mankey you'll never win that way" Beo said eagrly.

    As zaps reached the tree first it pushed off the ground hard and started jumping from tree branch to tree branch, before it was knocked out of the tree by sentrets tackle attack. Zaps hit the ground hard getting up slowly it then darted back into the tree as it reached the first branch it shot another bolt of lightning at sentret knocking it down a few branchs giving zaps enough time to pass it.

    Meanwhile while those two duked it out, nether of them noticed Mankey climbing further up the tree. Sentret and zaps threw each other out of the tree as mankey finally reached the top. Beo started to laugh as he called his pokemon over to him "Well like the say slow and steady wins the race" Beo said laughing as he handed mankey a treat. Then called his pokemon back into there pokeballs. "Well I better get moving if I want to make it before nightfall" Beo said as he started walking once again.

    After another half an hour of walking Beo finally made his way to the end of viridain forest and the entrance of pewter city where his first gym battle would take place. "Well this is where I prove it to you brother" Beo said.
     

    tim0789

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    chapter 5 part 3

    After winning his first real battel against a man who was only beaten by his rival tommy, Grecko realized he needed to step his training up a bit. So hes been walking through viridian forest battling every wild pokemon and trainer he could find. He is actually caught up in a heated battle at this exact moment.

    "Pooychena, use tackle!" Grecko shouted to his pokemon. Poochyena charged and knocked out his opponents slakoth. "Ahh slakoth, return you fought well." the trainer said recalling his fainted pokemon. "OK i got one pokemon left, lets go weepinbell!", the trainer shouted as he threw out his plant pokemon. "Alright poochyena, its time for you to take down this pokemon to, go use tackle!" Grecko ordered his pokemon. "GRRRR" poochyena growled as it ran towards the weepinbell. "Weepinbell use razor leaf!", the trainer said to his pokemon. "WEEEP!" the pokemon said as it threw leaves from its body. "Poochyena dodge them!" Grecko said to poochyena. Poochyena was able to dodge most of them but still got hit with a couple of the leaves, but he also successfully made the tackle attack on weepinbell. "Grr", the weakened poochyena said as it collapsed to the ground. "Ahh ok poochyena, you did a good job, now take a rest" Grecko said as he recalled his pokemon. "Ok its time for chyndaquil!" Grecko said as he summoned his favorite pokemon. "Cynda!" Cyndaquil shouted as it got ready for battle

    "Hmmp, Weepinbell use razor leaf on that little twerp of a pokemon", the trainer said to his pokemon. "Weep!" the pokemon said as it once again threw leaves from its body. "Cyndaquil use smokescreen!"Grecko ordered. Cyndaquil than put a deep fog around the battle area and weepinbell was blinded. "Now cyndaquil use tackle!" Grecko once again ordered his pokemon to do. Cyndaquil not being blinded by its on fog went and tackled the weepinbell, causing it to faint. "NOO!, i cant believe i lost to you!" the trainer said as he returned his second fainted pokemon to its ball. "Ha well i have some skill i guess" Grecko said modestly as he returned his cyndaquil. "But to be honest im just training this hard so i can beat an old friend of mine" Grecko said. "Ha sounds like u and your friend have some kind of rivalry dont ya?" the trainer asked grecko.

    (HMMMM i still remember that day) Grecko said to himself as he entered a flashback.

    "Grecko hey! guess what i finally got my first pokemon" the younger tommy said to the younger grecko. "Wow thats great tommy im happy for ya" the young grecko said. "Ha thanks grecko but hey when are u going to get ur pokemon?" the young tommy asked grecko. "Well actually my dad is taking me to the caves tommorow to catch me any pokemon i want"the young Grecko said while laughing and smiling with his friend. "Thats amazing i wish my dad would have taken me to get my pokemon, instead he just bought it off a friend who breeds pokemon."the young Tommy said looking a bit angry with his father. "Hey atleast he still cared enough to get it for ya" the young Grecko said reassuring. "Ya your right, you always are haha" The young tommy said. ""Thanks, but hey tommy lets make a deal to each other ok" the young Grecko asked his friend. "Sure but what is it?"The young tommy asked. "Lets just promise that we both will become as strong as we possibly can and become two of the best trainers out there!" the young Grecko blurted out to his friend. "Ya i like that idea, and sure you have a promise" The young tommy said as him and the young Grecko shook hands.

    (BACK TO THE PRESENT)

    "Ya i guess we do" Grecko said laughing as he had just remembered the day before his fathers dissapearance. "Hmm i gotta get stronger" Grecko said as he walked further on his journey through the viridian forest.
     

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    To dboring: Good post! You made it to Pewter City!

    To tim0789: Good post! The rivalry and friendship is pretty strong from what I see.
    Cyndaquil grew to level 11!
     

    tim0789

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    chapter five part 4

    "Poochyena, use tackle on caterpie, and shinx use tackle on wurmple" Grecko shouted to his pokemon who were in the middle of a two on two battle with a bug catcher trainer. "Wurmple, use string shot, caterpie use tackle!" The bug catcher yelled in response, but it was futile cause poochyena and shinx knocked out the trainers wurmple and caterpie. "Alright guys! we did it" grecko said to his pokemon after winining yet another battle in viridian forest.

    Later that day Grecko and his pokemon were relaxing when he saw the end of viridian forest and the entrance to pewter city. "Ha alright!" Grecko said to his pokemon as he and his pokemon ran towards the exit. Than out of nowhere another bug catcher jumped in front of him. "Where do u think your going kid!" the bug catcher said to Grecko. "Pewter city, i have to take the Gym battle there" Grecko said confidently. "Well first you have to beat me" the bug catcher said. "Fine lets do it!, go Cyndaquil!

    The bug catcher threw a pokeball into the air and out popped a beedrill. "OK Beedrill its time to show this kid what were made of" the bug catcher said.

    "Well then Cyndaquil use smokescreen to blind the beedrill" Grecko shouted.

    Smoke started shooting from cyndaquils back and clouding the area "Now cyndaquil run in and use tackle on it" Grecko ordered.

    "Beedril use pinmissle all over the area" the bug catcher shouted.

    Cyndaquil jumped at the beedrill but was knocked down by a pin that hit him directly in the chest.

    "Errg cyndaquil get up and use tackle again but make sure to dodge all of his attacks" Grecko yelled as cyndaquil moved through the remaining shadows of the smokescreen.

    "Beedrill use pin missle again" the bug catcher shouted in anger.
    Beedrill started shooting pin's all around the area, once again. Cyndauil swiftly dodged all of the pins and hit the beedrill directly knocking it to the ground and fainting it.

    "Great job cyndaquil" Grecko shouted returning it to it's pokeball.

    "Errg return Beedrill, great battle and good luck at your gym battle" the bug catcher said as he left. Grecko then walked on towards the exit of viridian forest and into pewter city, knowing he was ready for his gym battle.
     

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    Chris awoke, early in the morning and noticed Blue had disappeared. After looking around the camp Chris noticed Blue's stuff was still here but his pokeballs were gone, otherwise everything was the same as it was when Chris fell asleep, his pokeballs and bag was still where he left them and there were no new pokemon tracks around the site so no-one had been in and taken anything, Blue must have gone out for an early morning battle or some training. Chris quickly packed everything up and grabbed blues bag. Reaching for his belt, Chris grabbed a pokeball from his belt and threw it up into the air, as Scyther burst from the ball. "Scyther, see if you can spot blue from the air, and when you spot him hover above the location, Ill get Mr. Mime to teleport me there" Chris called up to his fathers pokemon, with a nod the bug pokemon sped off above the tree tops.

    While Scyther was searching Chris grabbed Eevee's pokeball, reaching into his bag, Chris pulled out some foam targets and hung them at different heights on the surrounding trees. "Ok Eevee, use tackle on the first target full power", said Chris, pointing to a target, the small dog-like pokemon crouched low for a second before running and launching itself at the target, as Eevee hit the target right in the center, Chris's poke-etch beeped, "71.5Lb" Chris read out from the small screen "Thats 5 times your body weight, I can see our training been paying off, lets see if we can find you a battle soon and give you a real test", Eevee smiled and nodded, as they continued training, Eevees attacks were getting faster and more accurate. "Ok now Eevee now for a bit of a challenge, I want you to run at that tree, jump, hit the target with your feet, launch off it into a tackle and hit this target here" said Chris pointing to where Eevee should do each maneuver "now GO" Chris yelled excitedly, Eevee followed Chris's instructions exactly and hit the target right in the middle, "Great work today Eevee, and look Scyther found our new friends" he siad pointing to the bug pokemon hovering above the forrest, after putting the targets back in the bag he sent out Mr. Mime "Teleport us to Scyther" he said, and a golden light began to surround the trainer and his pokemon.

    A second later they were below Scyther, who Chris immediately recalled Scyther and Mr. Mime and Called Eevee, up onto his shoulder, "There you are" called Chris emerging from some bushes into a clearing, "Couldn't you wait for me to wake up before you ran off battling?" said Chris slyly tossing Eevees pokeball up and down in a challenging manner
     

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    To tim0789: Good battles there.
    Poochyena grew to level 6!
    Shinx grew to level 5!
    Cyndaquil grew to level 13!
    Cyndaquil learned Ember!

    To Triaspia: I guess I should be nice and give your pokemon some Exp since it doesn't battle as much as everyone else.
    Eevee grew to level 9!
    Eevee learned Sand-Attack!
     

    Triaspia

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    ooc yeah, thats kinda why I made half my team already established, I'm planing to alter the character slightly once team rocket starts to become more involved like at the celedon casino (under 18's not allowed lol)..... it always seemed weird that gambling for pokemon was nessisary for your pokedex, more so in a game aimed at 10 year olds, anyway, during the cerulean theft celedon casino, silphco building, cinabar lab, and viridian city (2nd visit) etc my char is not holding back
     
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    if its not too late to be a recruit
    Name: panther
    Gender: male
    Age:16
    Appearence: the rse male trainer

    Pokemon: shiny ccharmander
    Nickname:blaze
    Gender: male
    Attacks:
    fire spin flamethrower cut ember
    history: Panther met Blaze when he was just 5

    Pokemon: larvitar
    nickname:thunder
    gender:male
    attacks: sandstorm, crunch, ice fang, and bite
    history: Panther rescued thunder as a larvitar when it was abandonned by its trainer

    pokemon:aaron
    nickname: tank
    gender: male
    moves: headbutt
    history: Panther saved tank as an aaron when it was being attacked by a vicious pack of mightyeana and they since became friends

    pokemon: gible
    nickname: shark
    gender: male
    moves: , dragon rage
    history: Panther got gible from his father hatched from an egge that was a gift before starting journey

    Pokemon: rhyhorn
    nickname:rhino
    gender: male
    moves: tackle
    history: Panther got this from his motherasa gift as an egg hatched before starting journey

    pokemon: Tropius
    nickname: brachio
    gender: male
    moves: fly, cut, airslash, and razor leaf
    history: Panther saved brachio from a forrest fire both have become friends ever since


    extra: the six pokemon of panther's team are good friends.

    in storage
    pokemon: Aerodactyl
    nickname: dracosaur
    gender: male
    moves: fly, hyper beam, giga impact, and ariel ace
    history: Panther befriended dracosaur when he saved it fromthe same forrest fire as brachio
    and how do i get a trainercard sig?
     
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    To lvl99rayquaza: I don't mind if you join just a few things: 1.) Everyone here are beginner pokemon trainers so their pokemon are at the beginning evolutionary stage. You were probably looking at the sign-up sheet on the first post and I changed it around.
    2.) Just like I just said I changed the sign-up sheet from the person who orginally started this rp. You can go to the Great Adventure OOC and look up the profile and post yours there. Sorry for the confusion!
     
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    To lvl99rayquaza: I don't mind if you join just a few things: 1.) Everyone here are beginner pokemon trainers so their pokemon are at the beginning evolutionary stage. You were probably looking at the sign-up sheet on the first post and I changed it around.
    2.) Just like I just said I changed the sign-up sheet from the person who orginally started this rp. You can go to the Great Adventure OOC and look up the profile and post yours there. Sorry for the confusion!
    ok except for garchomp and rhyperior he got those from his parents
     

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    ok except for garchomp and rhyperior he got those from his parents

    You could just make it where he got Eggs from those two pokemon or something. It is pretty unlikely that somebody with no gym badges will be walking through the Viridian Forest with two super powerful pokemon like those two. Not trying to mean or anything, but it's just the truth.
     

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    ok so when may i start? cause im ready when u say so

    Okay, go back and find chapter one and chapter two. They have the number of posts you can do for each chapter in parenthesis next to the chapter. Go ahead and post for chapter one and part one of chapter two. You can refer to some of the other posts if you need to.
     
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    sorry guys, i'll post the first chapter in the morning. i have to go to bed (on summer break geez) i swear it'll be up first thing in the morning so be ready.


    Okay, so let's finally start this rp. Just want to say a few things about the rp before we begin-

    - i will post a chapter and then you post something based on what the I tell you to do in the chapter. If the chapter requires more than one post, then post one part of it and then wait for me to notify you before posting the second part

    - I will have something appear in and out of the rp called special pokemon. These will be rare pokemon that are found only once in the rp and there will only be one pokemon of its kind. there will be some special situation with the pokemon (it'll become more clear later). It will be the first come first serve deal. but if you get a special event pokemon then you can't get another one no matter how bad you want it.

    - Team Rocket will appear now and then with some horrible plan. When this happens, the trainers will gather and try to put a stop to them. hey, this is the whole reason you're doing this rp, right?

    so with that being said, let's begin

    Chapter One- Professor Oak's Lab (One post)

    Professor Oak laughed quietly as he put some letters down on his desk. It was in the middle of the night, and he was reading some letters from kids requesting to pokemon trainers. It had been so long since this had happened to him- what was it, nearly twenty years? He was brought back memories of the kids who came into the lab to begin their journey so long ago. He was getting too old…

    The next day, six beginning trainers walked into Professor Oak's lab. To much of his surprise, all of them possessed at least one pokemon so he didn't have to pass out any of his own. So he grabbed some mechanical devices.

    "These are pokedex's," the professor explained while waving one in the air. "They will help you record and store data on any pokemon you see or catch. Try to fill it as much as possible."

    The professor walked down the row and passed out a pokedex and five poke balls to each trainer. He explained that the poke balls were tools for capturing wild pokemon.

    When the trainers received all their things, the Professor let them go to start their adventure.

    "But wait, there have been reports on the remaking of Team Rocket. They're an evil organization that will snatch your pokemon if you're not careful," the professor warned before they left.

    He didn't know that the trainers were starting their adventure to battle this evil team.

    What you do: Just write a post explaining the trip to Professor Oak's lab and then get to Route 1. That's it!

    chapter 1
    Panther woke up and looked outside after yawning. "ok blaze" said Panther "time to get my pokedex." Panther picked up blaze and put blaze on his back. "well here we go to start our journey" said panther, "oh ialmost forgot shark and rhino." Panther hurries to his desk and gets three pokeballs and puts the mon his belt. "oh yeah" said panther, "brachio, tank, and thunderare coming too." Panther gets the remaining three pokeballs. "ok now we go to professor oak's lab" said Panther. Panthe not knowing what would somedayhappen in his journey started for professor oak's lab. "char char charmander" said Blaze. "yeah i see oak's lab too" said Panther. So Panther arrives at the lab and gets his pokedex plus some pokeballs.

    ooc: just to remember what i need to do
    Chapter 2 Route 1 (2 posts)
    Route 1 is the first obstacle for all beginning trainers. It is a flat grassy land that is filled with wild pokemon that will sometimes attack people who pass by. It is usually dangerous to go on this route without any pokemon with you. Trainers prowl on this route, waiting for anybody wishing to challenge them.
    Wild Pokemon
    Pidgey
    The Great Adventure *ReMake*

    Type- Normal/Flying
    Level- 2-5
    Gender- Random
    Attacks- Tackle, Sand-Attack (if level 5)
    Ability- Keen Eye
    Rarity- Common

    Bidoof
    The Great Adventure *ReMake*

    Type- Normal
    Level- 2-5
    Gender- Random
    Attacks- Tackle, Growl (if level 5)
    Ability- Simple/Unaware
    Rarity- Common

    Sentret
    The Great Adventure *ReMake*

    Type- Normal
    Level- 2-5
    Gender- Random
    Attacks- Scratch, Defense Curl
    Ability- Keen Eye/Run Away
    Rarity- Common

    Poochyena
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    Type- Dark
    Level- 2-5
    Gender- Random
    Attacks- Tackle, Howl
    Ability- Run Away
    Rarity- Uncommon

    Some Things You Can Do
    .Battle trainers you meet on the road
    .Catch wild pokemon
    .Find items (potions, tm's, etc.)

    You're not limited to just the things listed above. You can be creative if you want or you can even be creative with some of the things listed above! Just do not overkill it and make it unrealistic.​

    At Route 1 you will be taking your own path, away from the trainers you met at the lab. After that, begin your adventure in your very first obstactle!​

    chapter 2 part 1
    Panther leaves oaks lab and heads for route 1. "CHARMANDER char char char" said Blaze. "yeah I guess we should be careful" replied Panther. Panther sees the sign for route 1 when a wild bidoof suddenly appears. "Blaze use cut on that bidoof" commanded Panther. "Char char char charmander" said Blaze as it uses its claws to give the bidoof a full body shave. "good work but it is coming back so use ember" said Panther.
    Blaze unleashes a small burst of blue-greenfire that hurts the bidoof."pokeball go" said Panther. Panther throws the pokeball and catches the bidoof. "yes i caught a bidoof" exclaimed Panther, "but since i already have six pokemon it is gonnago to storage with DRACOSAUR." Panther notices that it is getting dark out so he sets up camp with blaze lying close to him. The next morning Panther wakes up and finds a wounded Poochyena next to him."Mani better get youto the pokecenter in viridian forrest" said Panther. "poochy" barked the poochyena happily. Panther starts off for viridian city when heis challenged by a bug pokemon trainer that only has a caterpie and a weedle. "go blaze" said panther.

    "Caterpie I choose you" said the trainer. "Blaze ember on the caterpie" commanded panther. Blaze uses ember on the caterpie which faints immediately.

    "Go weedle" yelled the bug catcher. The trainer sends out a weedle. "Blaze us flamethrower" said Panther. Panther wins because bug is weak to fire and also the trainer only had 2 pokemon. "cheater" cried the trainer,"my bug pokemon are invincible so i could not have won you cheater." Panther notices that it is about to storm and quickly finds shelter for the day in a cave.

    "poochy poochyena" said the poochyena.

    "goodnight to you to wolf" said Panther, " and good night blaze."

    "Char charmander char" said blaze.

    ooc: Panther is sort of like a poke whisperer. he can understand pokemon and wolf is a poochyena who might join Panther due to Panther helping it.​
     
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    To lvl99rayquaza: I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but your posts made my head hurt. You have got to learn proper grammer and put some effort in your posts. Actually seperate the words. Also, your posts were just like "and then" "and then" "and then". Focus around a certain subject for each post. If you don't fix these mistakes then I'm kicking you out, no questions asked. I don't think I can take this for a long time.
     
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    To lvl99rayquaza: I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but your posts made my head hurt. You have got to learn proper grammer and put some effort in your posts. Actually seperate the words. Also, your posts were just like "and then" "and then" "and then". Focus around a certain subject for each post. If you don't fix these mistakes then I'm kicking you out, no questions asked. I don't think I can take this for a long time.
    OOC: ok I will fix them so your head does not hurt
     

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    To lvl99rayquaza: Okay, I'm just taking this one thing at a time. Now each post after the first chapter should circle around one thing like capturing a pokemon or doing a battle, or whatever. It shouldn't be where you capture a pokemon, and then battle, and then capture another pokemon. Nope, don't work that way.

    To Triaspia: If you beat me to a post, then you can just post and I'll follow off of what you said. Like if you said you watched Blue battle, then I'll make up a battle. You don't have to wait for me. I doing so many other rps that I can hardly get around for posting for this one.
     

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    Name: Savanna
    Gender: Female
    Age: 13
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    Pokemon

    Species: Vulpix
    Nickname: Flare
    Gender: Female
    Attacks:
    Ember
    Tackle
    Quick Attack
    Headbutt

    Species: Pidgey
    Nickname: Ace
    Gender: Male
    Attacks:
    Peck
    Gust
    Tackle
    Whirlwind

    Species: Nidoran
    Nickname: Jewel
    Gender: Female
    Attacks:
    Poison Sting
    Tackle
    Horn Attack
    Peck

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    The Reason I Dont have A Starter Is Because Savanna Made Friends With Her Vulpix In The Wild So She Decided She Didnt Need A Starter. :P
     
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