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[Pokémon] The Gym

HEATHER
Liam, if you hire me, I will cater to your every need. I will do whatever you ask of me. If you tell me to jump, I will jump. I will not ask "How high?" That just needlessly complicates things.​
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Does what Heather said relates to Jump by Flo Rida and Nelly Furtado? :P

Anyways, awesome last chapter, there! I knew that Brock would be staying at the gym and never want to leave. Poor tower pizza. D: I do like the scene were Brock talks to Liam over some of the shenanigans they had done.

Ouch over Liam yelling at Brock, but glad their last scene together ended nicely and I agree it wrapped up everything nicely! Speaking of which, oh dear over Brock and Elizabeth getting married. That shall be fun. XD Don't worry Brock, you'll find a better woman...eventually. :x

Hm, in the end you decide how you want to do the sequel, but it would be interesting to see Brock fall to rock bottom. Either way though, looking forward to the sequel whenever you get the chance to do so!

Congrats on finishing this story! I really enjoyed it lots. :) A job well done. *brofist* (but not the San Antonio and Houston kind, LOL)
 
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