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The Land Of The Umbreon (revived)

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((I have no problem with that! ^^ ))

Silver looked over at Silverbane with a look of horror. "No Silverbane! Reserve your strength! PLEASE!" She exclaimed. "I don't want you to die!" She yelled out in hope of chaging his mind. She was about to run to him but something stopped her, something that told her to let him be. "PLEASE...no!" She pleaded her voice becoming hoarse.
 
((i'm going to do the move now i guess))

"I'm sorry silver, hopefully this will help you on your way, you are a chosen one after all, all of you are, i'm not i was never meant to live this long, i was just lucky" Silverbane admitted, he half hoped these wern't his last words, but he just knew he shouldn't have lived this long
"Flash Fire" ((sorry if that's wrong i forget words easily :P))
Silverbane falled as a fury of large red flaming attacks hit all the mightyena in the clearing, and instead of falling straight to the ground, Silverbane was let down gently, his eyes wern't open and he was breathing, but only just
"i did my best guys.....cough.....cough.....i only hope it was enough" he laughed
 
"Silverbane no!" Silver yelled in horror with tear filled eyes. Running over to him tears ran down her cheeks. "Silverbane! How could you! How could you do that to us! We could of taken them down together! You didn't have to sacrifice yourself that way!" She exclaimed in an angry voice. "We could of taken care of ourselves! You needed to rest and you knew it, but why did you keep on pressing on like that?!" She asked softly. "Why do you have to be so stubborn?"
 
"Silver, you got to know, i really like you, but that had to be done, you see there are reinforcements coming, and they well they would have kicked our butts anyday, but not now i hope i gave you chance now" he said softly
"and you never know i might not die" even he knew that was a lie, it was over he was gone
"at least i died the way my family never saw, i died for my frineds" he smiled
 
Juni came over to silver and poked her gently with her nose. "I-It's okay Silver... He did it cause were friends..." she said sniffling and holding back her own tears. She knew she was a little mad at him too, but she didn't want Silver to feel any worse. She tried to smiled at Silverbane, but failed. "How could he do that...
 
"Oh guys....cough....c'mon did i really mean that much to you?" He asked, the tears begining to stream down his face
"I never wanted to die, it's just the way things had to be, that stupid pink pokemon told me so, it said i would die for you all, and i am i helped i hope" the tears formin a puddle in the ground which began to glow,
Silverbane didn't notice
 
Juni couldn't hold it in anymore. "Of course you meant that much to us! You've been risking your life for us the whole time and now we've gotten attached to you! You can't give up on us now, forget about what myuu said!" she was crying too now, and even Kirin looked a little sad.
 
"I wont give up, not now" He said moving to get up, but he just couldn't((oh **** i ahve to cry don't it :P:())
Silverbane knew this was end, but what could he do, hi heart was breaking, he didn't wnt to die not now, he see's now that his friends care, but he cn't do anything now, it's over for him, not even myuu ((gonna use that name now :P)) could save him, but what could he do, there must be something
Silverbane cried even harder the glowing puddle getting wider, and deeper,
Whats with the tear puddle? he asked himself
 
Juni stared down at the strange glowing puddle near Silverbane. Her eyes were clouded up, but she knew she wasn't seeing things. "That's weird, since when do tears glow..." She shook the thought away and returned to Silverbane. "Come on buddy... you can get up..." she whispered.
 
Silver blinked a couple of times when she saw the glowing puddle of tears. Thinking it was only her imagination playing tricks, she ignored it. "I'll carry you Silverbane, ok? I don't want you to stress youself anymore. You're gonna get through this, cause I say so!" She tried her best to force a smile, though sadness was all you could see in her eyes.
 
"Ok.....cough....cough let's try this" he tried again, but slipped in the puddle
"NO REALLY WHAT'S WITH THE GLOWING PUDDLE" he yelled at the puddle
then got embaressed "Uh yeah stupid puddle" he said scornfully and gave a hectic cough, and tried to get up again, and slipped, again and again, some of the times he meant it, he wanted to see his frineds laugh again
if it was the last thing he saw it would be them laughing
 
Silver laughed a little. "Silverbane if you keep it up you're gonna k- uh never mind, c'mon lets go before more of those pokemon come." Forcing a smile she looked at Silverbane expectantly. "C'mon get on my back, I'll carry you."
 
"i'll only weigh you down, please ....cough...cough....go" he said sadly, giving up and lay in the middle of the pond of tears and his breathing slowed to a stop this time
is this it? it feels .....strange, oh it's you myuu. what do you want?
(myuu) I want to say you done well for those pokemon, you're right you never should have lasted this long, btu you did, you beat me, and i concede to you, you have done well young one
(silverbane) What the hell are you talkign about, i'm fraking dead and lying in a pond of glowing tear, oh by the way, whats with the glowing tears, i know you have something to do with it
(myuu) maybe i do, but that's not for me to be telling now it is?
the litle pink pokemon faded fast and so did the scene, silverban'es breathing hadn't came back but it had only been a couple of seconds
maybe maybe they still have time to ressurect me
they where silverbanes last thoughts
 
"Oh c'mon Silverbane are you insulting me! I'm pretty strong you know!" She said with a "hurt" tone. Lowering her head toward's Silverbane's, Silver had a look of horror on her face. He's not breathing! "Silverbane! Silverbane, please wake up!" She started to shake him with one paw, "Please Silverbane, wake up!" Tears starting to cloud her vision, Silver just couldn't face the fact that Silverbane was dead. "C'mon there must be something we can do right?! Please Silverbane wake up!" She kept on yelling, until her voice went hoarse.
 
See silver really does care, you where a fool to give it up silverbane, but you had to protect them, let your spirit walk on young one, you're a more valiant hero than most past but you have to come now
said a mysterious voice
NO i will not go, my friends still ne me, please give me another chance, please just one he said his spirit and physical body crying, ((oh **** now it's got me crying :())
I can't Silverbane if i did, then it wouldn't be fair to the others who have asked me that countless of time, now come with me so you can rest
it said more tauntingly
NO! if i can't go back to my friend's i'm going to stay right here, i'm not going to move from this spot,
he said, and the voice grew silent, and it was finally gone
why are the tears glowing? WAIT i can be revived, but none of them no the proper move, i knew it, **** why did i have to be foolish, i oculd have lived, i knew the move and everything, I'll just hope they'll figure it out and try it
he said to himself still crying
 
Silver kept on shaking Silverbane, but he never woke up. "Oh c'mon Silverbane. If this is a joke it's not funny." She whispered drooping her head crying silent tears. Noticing the glowing puddle she glared at it. "Because of this stupid puddle Silverbane lost most of his strength!" She splashed the puddle with her paw. "Oh c'mon now I've gone as far as to blame a stupid puddle." Scolding herself angrily she looked at Silverbane's lifeless body. "There must be something I can do...oh please Silverbane, if there's something I can do to revive please tell me. Somehow, just tell me!" She whispered endless tears flowing down her already wet cheeks.
 
Then wind blew and the puddle of tears rustled, and the clounds moved to reveal it was night, and the moon shone out
Huh, what just happened? He asked himself, looking up from his spot onto his body and silver, as if,
Wait a minute, if i was meant to die they would have left he said running to his lifeless body, and stood in the same exact spot silver was
Maybe this might just work you can never tell i guess he said hopeful

((i'm gonna let you guys decide wether silverbane survives or not :P))
 
((Well I think he should survive, nothing would be the same without him! :'( ))
 
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Rahul ran over to the lifeless body of silverbane.
"I think I could save him...It might hurt a bit..."
Rahul took the chance. He would try and save Silverbane. As he mustered up some strenght tears streamed his face. Remembering what his dad had said.
use a thunderwave. But it may need more then one pokemon.
Rahul knew it was no use doing it all on his own. He looked around to silver and the others.
"umm I am going to need your help for this. I mean it has to be quite powerfull so it needs more pokemon. grab hold of my tail."
Rahul swayed his tail a bit making sure that silver caught hold.
(Me saw this on TV :) )
 
Had no clue what Rahul was going to do, it certainly wasn't what he had thought of
looks like your friends have iniuitive
Yes i agree
said the two voices he had recognised from before, myuu and the mysterious voice
I thought you didn't want me alive? wre you not going to stop them?
He asked looking at myuu angrily, he wanted to hurt that pokemon, it had been the soul reason his frineds had suffered so much, but he knew even with his strength and beserks strength he had no chance
Look leave me alone, i don't need you here while I watch my friends try to make me live again got it? i asjed angrily
they dissappeared
but he did hear one last thing coming from the mysterious voice he worked out to be his dad, who had died many years ago
You were wrong about him
 
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