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The Land Of The Umbreon (revived)

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"We're in it" he admitted
"My most fondest place would be anywhere with you" he said tiredly, letting out a yawn, and slowly falling asleep on Silver
but before he falls asleep
"hey silver, thanks for helping revive me, you didn't have to you know, so thanks.......soft purring.......I love you" he manages out before his eyes close over and he falls asleep his head lighlty leaning on silver
((aww that's a good scene:embarrass likkle silverbane hehe :P))
 
occ: *tear drops*:'( awww! Don't you just love the gushy parts? NOT! :laugh:

ic: Juni was still ahead of Kirin as they neared the waterfall. "He's just letting me win!" she thought to herself speeding up. But just as she headed down the hill to the shore she stopped dead. There was a large group of Umbreon growling at the pokemon in the middle of the circle.

Kirin went ahead of juni as they scrambled through the crowd. When they finally got to the middle there stood eight all black pokemon with strange collars: a Zangoose, Seviper, Duskull, Lairon, Tyranitar, Espeon, Meowth, and Quilava.

Kirin roared furiously, but Juni held him back. "What if their good now Kirin?" she tried pleading with him. "No... Juni you know what they did... You can't expect me to forgive them for that?!" he growled at her a little for getting in the way. "Well I don't want you to fight them Kirin... you couldn't fight them all." she said quietly.
occ: Juni and kirin are going to handle this fight themselves, so don't come running in to help or anything. There's a reason their gonna fight these pokemon.
"Sure I could! If you moved out of the way!" "Kirin... you know their just being controlled. If you really want to stop all this then you'll help me get those collars off, without attacking them, okay?"
 
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(Okay. That was some mushy stuff. :) Sorry to crash this party but I am so and I mean so behind. I came to let you guys know that I will be pulling out of this. There is so much to do and I don't wanna ruin everything for you guys. *glares at both Kiki and Haunted Angel mischievishly* Good luck with everything. Hm... Now that I have noticed... it seems only the three of you are on so often other than the rest. Well... see you guys. I also think my post is akward too. Sorry.)
 
((Aww Uzumaki Naruto it wont be the same witout luna :( well it was cool while it lasted :) thanks for being a great help to this RP take care :) ))
 
occ: :\ *sniff* sniff* Now I feel bad Luna! Bye Uzimaki! (But he is right, we're like the only peoople that come on 24/7!)

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Juni let Kirin go, on the condition that they'd help the pokemon not hurt them. Juni and Kirin were about to fight, but Cray jumped in Juni's way. "I'm helping you guys." He wasn't the nicest brother at times, but he knew when he was needed. A Zigzagoon that had been with their pack since Juni could remember, Zaph, was standing beside Kirin as well.

They were both to stubborn too leave, so Juni and Kirin let them come too. As they walked towards the pokemon, Kirin could feel the Seviper's cold black eyes glaring at him. This Seviper had no tail to shake in warning. Kirin had made sure of that the last time he attacked.

"I'll get the Seviper and the Zangoose. Juni you get the Meowth and Espeon, Cray get the collars off the Quilava and Duskull, and Zaph since your the strongest; take care of the Tyranitar and the Lairon. Okay everyone got it?" The three nodded. "Alright, let's go!" they ran off in different directions, Juni headed straight for her targets.
 
Rahul looked around. Everyone had gone. What about him?
As Rahul turned to jump out of the tree the Myuu appeared.
"you stay here. You have work to finish."
Rahul looked puzzled as the Myuu entered his mind and told him those things.
He closed his eyes and saw Myuu in his mind.
"What is the work Myuu?"
Myuu nodded his head and a picture came to him. Silver and Silverbane? Together? Then it showed Kirin and Juni fighting.
"Travel deep into the forest and a Pokemon shall guard. Enter swiftly. You are to stay behind. To fix the mess. Though there is still one of your friends here...He won't cause a problem..."
Myuu faded and Rahul opened his eyes.
"Restern is here."
Rahul jumped of the tree and ran swiftly towards the heart of the forest a trail of mist like a plane trailing behind him.
What's happening? Why do I have to fix the mess? I just need Silverbane!
Rahul knew that silverbane was with Silver. And Rahul dare not imagine what they would be talking about. He had no right to.
 
Silverbane began to come to, only thing he was thinking about was the dream he had just had
It wasn't right, myuu was there again, and she was saying somethign to someone what he didn't know and to who he didn't knwo either, he felt as though as he was needed
"hey anyone?" he asked as he was still waking up, and he was blinded for the moment, it always happened after the harvest moon festival

He remembered what he had said the silver the night before and he knew he meant it, but he was still embaressed
 
Rahul ran of till he blanked out. It normally happened when Rahul was tired but this time a pic. Of Silverbane calling out.
Rahul turned around. His fate was meeting. He was to sort it out. But he needed Restern no matter what Myuu had said. He was the only one who could help him. But he could have gone to...
Rahul carried on the thought still in his head.
Maybe I and Silverbane are connected to each other somehow. Through our minds...No. How could th....Wait. Myuu could have done it. Maybe I and silverbane should help each other. But maybe now I have to help him.
Thoughts that confused Rahul plunged into his mind. But he wouldn't give up. The picture of the poachers and his family still fresh in his mind. He had to help them. And the others. he could be the only on here. Maybe he was meant to free his friends and they all save everyone...But How?
 
"This is bad..." Juni thought. All of these pokemon were trained to fight together, and now the dark Meowth and Espeon were combining their attacks to keep her away. The meowth was using a strong slash attack because she could actually see it cutting through the air. She dodged again and again, but eventually the Espeon used it's phychic power to aim the wind slash at her. It sent her flying back, but she got back up an ran at the Espeon with a watergun ready, but failed when she struck it's force field instead.

Kirin wasn't doing so well either, the Seviper was hitting him with what was left of it's tail, and when he skidded towards the Zangoose it threw him back over to the Seviper; it looked like they were playing ping pong with poor Kirin.

Cray was trying his best to catch the Quilava, but it was faster than him. His eyes glowed and another solid dirt wall rose from the ground in front of the Quilava. It hit the wall hard, and after flinching for a moment, ran off again. The Duskull was gliding behind Cray, aiming a continous psychic beam at his heels, so if he stopped he would get hit. He was chasing one pokemon to get away from another. and when he tried to summon rocks to hit the crazed Duskull, it would phase right through them. (pretend it can't phase out of it's control collar)

(I have more to add to this, I just didn't want to pst it all at once. read next post!)
 
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(( Ack! Sorry Haunted_Angel! How you manage to be on all the time is beyond me, sorry for holding you guys back! >.< ))

Silver smiled softly as she heard Silverbane say those three simple words, though she knew Silverbane was younger than her how can she deny her feelings. "I love you too." She whispered softly, leaning her head on his.

Waking up the next morning she shifted a little, opening her eyes she saw Silverbane waking up. "Morning." She whispered, letting out a small yawn. "What's up?" She asked blinking a little.
 
"Silver we have to go" Silverbane said as he awoke fully, but instead of running off he waited for silver to answer

He felt there were people in trouble, he felt his help was needed, but what to do, he would wait and decide by silvers decision, after all he owed her alot now.
Silverbane what are ytou waiting for? Berserk asked
Silver, i'm not going to do anything without having her with me, i need to protect her as well He retaliated

"Well Silver shall we?" asked looking out for anything that might give me a clue as where to go if Silver decided to let us
 
If anyone was really fighting, it was Zaph. His sharp claws sliced through the Tyranitar's tail, and it screeched in pain. The Lairon charged toward him, it's head ducked low to headbutt him. Zaph waited until the huge steel monster was close enough to electricute the Tyranitar's eyes and jump clear over the Lairon. The momentarily blinded Tyranitar was roaring and stumbling toward the Lairon; who kept running without bothering to look up. There was a loud crash, and they both fainted and hit the dirt.

Juni grinned. At least he was making progress. He carefully chewed through the two collars and watched as the Lairon faded to it's regular shiny silver, and the Tyranitar back to it's strange green color. Then Juni thought of something. "Surf!" she rode a watery wave to the unexepecting Quilava. It growled and passed out as it's flame died.

Cray nodded to Kirin and summoned another rock. He jumped up to it and Kirin steadied it. Cray was far away from the Duskull now, and when he jumped off, he sent the huge rock for the Duskull. Naturally it just dodged it, but that was the idea. Cray used the diversion to summon rocks around the ghost in a ball. He put enough pressure on the sphere to crush the Duskull a little, and it was enough to make it faint.

(still going!) -_-
 
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Silver gave Silverbane an odd look. Shaking her head a little she smiled at him and nodded. "Ok, but where?" She asked.
 
(Fine! Grrr... now I have to change my post.)

Cray cracked the small camera on the collar and ripped it off. When he turned around the Seviper, Espeon, Zangoose, and Meowth were already surrounding his sister and friends. "What do we do now?" he whispered to Kirin. Kirin just shrugged. "Whatever we have to!" and he slammed the Seviper to the ground and slashed at it's collar, but he was too late. It turned into mist and lifted Kirin from the ground. He threw Kirin into a tree and floated off to him.

Juni didn't waste any time either, she looked over at Cray and took in a breath. "Super Deep Dive" A typhoon formed around her and headed straight for the Zangoose and Meowth. Juni held her breath as she spun around in circles in the cyclone of water. "Wait... What am I doing?" she opened her mouth and watched the air bubbles float up. She couldn;t believe it. She was right. She could breathe underwater!

She looked over to Cray who was charging up a Solar Beam. The second he fired, her typhoon lunged toward the two pokemon bewildered below. Juni glided slowly down to the ground and came up to the last two pokemon. They had been double teaming Kirin and Zaph had been holding them off with a few thunder bolts. Cray barked to warn the two, and Kirin and Zaph ran to their sides.

With one last grin, the four charged up an ice beam, hydro cannon, solar beam, and an electric bolt. They attacked at the same time to combine all their attacks into one huge black beam.

"Well with all of them defeated, there's nothing left to do but heal the enemies and wait unitl they wake up; right?" Juni looked at the boys, who nodded in return. (here's where i change it) "Wrong little umbreon!" Juni looked up. A group of people in red and black uniforms appeared suddenly out of the woods. "Just because a few of our pokemon are down, doesn't mean Team Magma is defeated!" one man that stood out in the crowd was talking to her. really talking to her! "H-how can you understand us?" Juni asked a little curious. "These translators are quite usefull aren't they?" he pointed to a weird device attached to his ear. All of them had one. "What do you want with our pack?" Kirin growled. "Not your pack mutt, just you and your friends. The rest of the umbreon have no meaning to us." Suddenly Kirin looked shocked. "Juni... Do they seem familiar to you?" he was still staring at them, and Juni knew exactly why. But she couldn't remind him, not now. "Uh... no, not really Ki."

(There! I don't think that changes the plot to much cause Danyelle said something about Team Aqua & Magma before didn't she?, and if not then I'll change it.)
 
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((arhg had to delete my last post **** it :( spoil sport :P and now i don't know hat to write :embarrass))

Silverbane didn't feel the danger anymore, as if nothing had happened, he felt strange now, a bit let down, and as if he let someone down, he was sad and happy at the same time

"Hmm that was strange,"he aid looking out on the field where he and Silver left Juni and kirin last, but still something didn't feel quite right, or maybe he was just hoping for a bit of action to be the hero again. He has become accustomed to saving his friends, to being the hero,

"If someone was in trouble they arn't now" he said apologetically to silver,
"I'm sorry for getting you up, I really thought someone was in trouble, sorry" he said sadly, and apologetically, he thought Silver would be angry with him.
He just didn't know what she was going to say at thie moment.
 
Dude!!! You were supposed to come help us fight the humans silly! :laugh: Well... I don't know what to tell you now!

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Kirin still looked a little unsure about who these people were, but he did know something bad was going to happen. "Now if you'll please just come quietly, we'll make sure you and the other special pokemon are brought back to headquarters." the man gestured toward a man with cages, and a woman holding dark control collars.

"No thanks human." Kirin replied firmly as he lead the others back to the waterfall. "I don't think you'll be getting away that easy." Kirin's left ear twitched as he heard several pokeballs explode in the air. "Don't you ever get sick of using pokemon as slaves? Why don't you fight for yourself human?" Kirin said turning around. "Well what's the fun in that? You animals were meant to listen to us."

(now would be when you come Haunty. and I don't know anymore good dark pokemon, so i'll just let you make em up when you get here.)
 
"It's ok Silverbane. As long as no one's in danger I'm fine." She said with a happy smile. "No need for apologies." she assured him.
 
"Oh no, look, humans, and their in weird clothes, whats that on their chest a volcano? no a picture," Silverbane howled his angriest and fiercest howl, but it also held a mesage for Juni and kirin,

Silverbane coaxed silver onto his back((sorry Kiki)), and began to run, through the forest to another clearing, there were lots of umbreon here,and mightyena, as well as a few houndoom, murckrow, as well as few slugma's and finally a large Black Charizard ((team magma have fire pokemon too, i'm just gigving Silverbane a tough time :P))

He knew not to attack yet, he would wait till the humans made their move of the umbreon
Then he would strike...
((and now i have to go to bed :o i'll check up later and i think you can guess who silverbane wants to take on :P and i wont be replying even if i am onlone i.e. i'll be online on the pokecommunity forums but unable to reply tothis thread till later on tomorrow))
 
(Well we've got Celebi & Myuu, so wouldn't the evil people have the evil legendairies?)

Myuutwo, Lugia, and Entei appeared in front of the four friends. Not even Kirin had the guts to deny them. "Fine... but i'm warning you, we'll find a way out of this!" he hissed underneath his breath, taking a step foward so they could put on the collar.
For a moment his eyes struggled to stay the icy blue Juni always knew, but they turned into an intimidating black, and his fur changed along with them. Juni wasn't about to run off and leave her best friend in the whole world right there, so she let them slip on her collar too.

"The pack's not going to like this..." Cray muttered slowly coming to his little sister's side. He stood still for them to take him as well, then looked back to Zaph. He hesitated and then ran off into the forest. "Zaph... find Silverbane and Silver..." Juni had managed to relay a message to his mind. A few Magma members moved to go after the zigzagoon, but the leader stopped them. "He has no one to go to, the others are already surrounded."

Zaph didn't go very far before he ran into two umbreon. "Who are you?"
 
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