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The Land Of The Umbreon (revived)

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Rahul jumped onto the desk and growled at the Human. But the picture changed on the screen and Rahul saw Silverbane. Well Rahul thought it was silverbane cause he was black with red rings.
The man laughed and spoke,
"Haha your friend might as well die if anything. Well I guess you can see my Shadow Pokemon."
The word shadow rang through Rahuls mind. He swung around and cam face to face with a black Typhlosion, Ho-Ho, Lugia and Mew-Two.
Rahul looked twice over at the Pokemon and saw a black band. Rahul turned to face the screen and saw Silverbane to with a black band on him. Rahul turned back and faced the Typhlosion. The man seemed to know what Rahul was doing and kept the ledgenrys back.
Rahul used a thunder wave large his eyes beginning to glow more brightly. The Typhlosion was knocked back but kept on going.
The ring on Rahuls tail started spinning and Rahul let it go as it thundered its way towards the Typhlosion.
Rahul used a thunderbolt on the ring and it became an electric death trap. The Typhlosion was hit and staggered to the ground.
That was too easy...
Rahul used a thunderbolt and unlocked the ring around the Typhlosion. It nodded its head and ran to the side of Rahul.
"Sorry about that. But, I am on your side."
Rahul nodded his head and powered forwards at the Ho-ho. A Takedown was an easy option. Too easy and the Ho-ho dodged it. The Ho-ho spun down and used drill peck on Rahul. But Typhlosion blocked it using a swirl of fire. Rahul smiled and nodded his head. Typhlosion bent down and used a fire blast, as he did this Rahul jumped on his back and was powered up by the Typhlosions jump. Rahul used a swirling Vortex, a Shadow ball straight for the Ho-ho. Again it seemed too easy. The Ho-ho dropped down. This time Typhlosion used a flamethrower on the Ho-ho's ring and it clicked open. Rahul used a healing attack and the Ho-ho was up next to Rahul.
"Lets do this."
Rahul nodded his head and used a thunder wave towards the Lugia. Ho-ho used a drill peck and Typhlosion used a flamethrower. Lugia was hit but shook it of. The Rahul realised something.
"You guys. Try and get the black ring of the Lugia neck. Then we won't have to use up all our power trying to KO it."
The Pokemon nodded their heads and used a flight of attacks on the Lugia.
The man back away. He hadn't expected this and slowly drew a pokeball from his pocket. But as he saw Lugia ring click open he smiled.
"You can not defeat Mew-Two. He has no ring and I have trained him since I was young. He is the ultimate Pokemon and no one can defeat him."
Rahul was surprised to even understand the man. But then strange things were happening. Rahul shook his head. He had some Legendary on his side but he doubted that them all put together would beat the Mew-Two. Tears streamed down his face. Something tugged at his heart. This might just be the last time he would fight along side a Pokemon. It maybe the last time he would even walks the face of the planet. But for his friends he would do it. Anything for his friends...

(Nooooooo! don't let silverbane die:'( ...But then its really the same fate with Rahul:'( )
 
((Silver is going to prevent that, just watch! ^^ ))

Silver jumped a little when she heard Juni's voice. Turning around she blushed a little but thanked her dark fur for covering it up. "Well... um...ofcourse hehe. Like I'd leave him behind." Silver smiled cheesily. Turning back to the battle she noticed that SIlverbane had defeated Charizard. "Yes!" She exclaimed but quickly threw herself on the ground covering her mouth. "Oh my I hope he didn't hear that." She muttered a little.
Poking her head over the bush she saw Mewtwo and Lugia approaching Silverbane. Silverbane looked different though. His fur was a black colour. "Whoa what's going on?! Did he turn evil?!" She whispered in a panicky voice. A dark coloured field surrounded the three pokemon, which caused Silver to panic. "Hey! What's going on now?!" She exclaimed jumping out of the bushes. "Silverbane! I'm coming!" She yelled running towards the lake. She was thankful for her ability to manipulate the wind, since she used them to run across the water. Running up to the field she smashed into it, trying to break it. "Silverbane!" She yelled over and over throwing herself of the force field trying to break it.
 
OOC: *cough* I is dizzily sick today, I puked in the girls washroom at school XD I cant make a huge post cuz of my head but I`ll try.
IC: Restren sighed and looked at his resources once again. he began to bita at a rotten apple and soon became desqusted.(sp?) He grabbed a grape by the claw and threw it into his mouth.

Restren`s chewing noises filled the cell. It was quite loud because he was accidentally breathing out fire as he ate. This happened when he was frustrated while eating.

Restren thought while chewing some more of his rotten apple.
"So, Silverbane can use telepathy eh? Well maybe I should try. I can get help from my friends or maybe even Myuu or Celebi! If not then I`m doomed unless m burn blast is fully functioning(sp)again. I can melt the door with it if I try but I want to see if I can be granted telepathy too. If not, burn blast is my only hope." He said to himself.

Restren began to think hard about one of his friends. It came out as Silver. He thought harder to see if he could find out what she was doing. Using most of his brain knowledge to find out. It was hard as he wasnt supposed to have the move of telepathy or any psychic move.

The invisioned Silver dissapeared as Restren realised he didnt have telepathy.
"Oh well, maybe I can get it from Celebi... OH MY GOSH, CELEBI!" He remembered her frantic flying around the sheild. Restren had to save her.

He ran to the cell door and began to feel pressure. But this was not his normal firey one, it was much more. He growled out a cry in pain as his whole body became ingulfed with fire. He ran at the door and slammed it over. Restren looked around at the other cells but Celebi wasnt anywhere in them.

Restren`s body was still fire((as he didnt know how to get rid of it)) when he ran up the stairs. When he reached the top he heard some fluttering sounds and cries for help. There was a man yelling and another laughing. Then Restren heard something that made his heart stop. he heard a loud thud and a loud drilling noise.

Restren rammed open the door with his firey body. he saw Celebi being forced into a machine. The machine had a collar with a screw loosened on it. Restren growled loudly. Fire flew out of his mouth as he did so.

The men who were there looked at him. They both had red and black suits on with a weird symbol on the top but Restren wasnt worrying about the way they looked. He was worried about what they were doing to his poor friend Celebi.

One of the men grunted and threw something like a ciggar on the floor. He watched Restrens every move carefully, Studying Restrens firey body. He looked deep into Restrens deep orange eyes that seemed to be burning with anger. Then the man opened his mouth.

"I told ya this guy wasnt worthless. Look at him, he mad himself out of fire! Very clever this one is. I wonder how he did that to himself. Maybe we should make him one of us for Maxie."

Restren gulped and looked around the men. Part of them? Not what Restren was thinking at all. He wanted to get Celebi and hit the road before he got killed.

The other man nodded."He would make a good present for the boss. Look at how anctious(sp?) he looks. This guy looks really mad at us;" the man advanced forward and Restren slid backwards lifting his paw trying to alarm the man. The man grabbed a pokeball which he threw carelessly at Restren. Restren dodged and hit the man with his firey body.

The first man smirked and grabbed some kind of gloves putting them on. Then went over to Restren picking him up. Restren growled using a power boost on his body but it didn`t work. The fire licked the machine as Restren was set on it. It carried him over to the collar and the machine slowly began to move the collar closer to him.

OOC: Okay, so it is a little loonger than I thought it would be. Anyways, who is going to help Restren? Find out yourself!

Oh and also, anyone who hasnt posted for more than 2 pages is off the list for people in the rp. Sorry, I know its hard to keep track but if your over two pages behind and not just on a trip of something, SHEESH!
 
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OCC: Sorry for delaying for so long guys, i was in the hospital for well reasons, and i can't think too straight at the moment, so i can't post at the moment, just letting you know sorry guys
 
"Silver wait! what if it's a trap? The humans might want us all to come out!" Juni hesitated for a moment, then poked her head out of the shielding trees. She quickly ran to the lake, with the boys right behind her. Juni didn't worry about the water, she could run over it like it were normal ground. Kirin froze the water in front of him and slid beside her. Zaph shot through the air like a lightning bolt, and Cray called rocks out of the water so he could jump across. "Hold on Silver we're coming to help!" Juni called to her.
 
Silverbane saw all his friends run at the forcefield
"You shouldn't have came out" He yelled biting deep into mewtwo's flesh, but the cat pokemon refused to give in to Silverbane, it was legendary after all.

"Just give up i may not be a legendary pokemon like you but i am stronger thanks to my friends" He said pushing Mewtwo towards Lugia. The two of them would probably beat Silverbane but he wouldn't let them win that easily

The humans began to come across to the island on weird machines that could float on water.
"You guys run" Silverbane yelled at his friends.
 
"There's no way we're going to leave you here!" Juni yelled still pushing against the shield. "What kind of friends do you think we are?!"
Zaph and Cray turned to the humans. "You guys keep trying, we'll hold them off." Cray called out rocks all over the lake and flung them at the approaching humans. Several of them dodged it and threw out pokeballs.

A Blaziken and Flygon popped out of the air to fight them. Cray charged at the Blaziken, only to have it move aside and let him fall into the water. The bird went on to attack the others when a huge rock flew out of the water and hit the Blaziken. It fell into the water and began to sink to the bottom.
"Cray!" Zaph hesitated for a second, trying to see him in the dark water; then jumped in. "Ah man, Cray can't swim!" but it was a good thing he could.

The Flygon took the oppurtunity to fly toward the three distracted umbreon. Sand swarmed around Juni and picked her up. "Kir--" he looked up to see Juni getting banged against the shield. "Leave her alone!" his rings began to glow and ice shards headed toward the Flygon. Several holes were made in it's wings as the ice ripped through them. It tryed to fly away but after an ice beam it was called back to it's ball.

Zaph had nearly reached the bottom before he found the big red umbreon. "Cray?!" Zaph held him by his collar and pictured land. *poof* Zaph lay coughing beside the unconcious Cray. Zaph got to his feet and went to the umbreon. "Cray are you okay?" he whispered poking him with his furry yellow paw. Zaph sighed. Cray wasn't moving at all. He charged up his electricty and zapped Cray with a thundershock.

The umbreon immediantly jumped to his feet, his hair spiked in every direction. Zaph laughed to himself. "What was that for?!" Cray growled. "Well I had to wake you up didn't I?" Zaph walked back to the others. Kirin's rings were still glowing while he helped Juni up. "Juni! What happened?" Cray ran to her side. "Don't worry, I'm fine... they just caught me off guard." She turned back to the shield. "Come on we've got to find a way in."
 
Rahul felt the strane of sadness rush down on him. Then he turned to the screen. They were trying to break through. And a Mew-two to. Rahul had had enough. He pictured the force field the Mew-two everything. Then made his strongest flash of lightning come down. The strngest ever. It broke through the force field and hit the Lugia.
Then rahul made a picture of the humans with the floating things. he then pictured Mist no fog surrounding them and the pokemon. As rahul opened his eyes he saw the picture come on the screen. it had worked. lets hoped it just helped.
rahul turned to face the mew-two in his face. rahul was pushed back, but The Typhlosion used a fire Blast and the mew-Two was taken a back a bit. Then Rahul used a shadow ball. His eyes turning Yellow, but then Red. Red eyes? Rahul had blue. But it had already taken affect. Rahul had no control. Lightning burst all over the place. Thunderwaves burst out. A mini Tornado was formed.
"No One Hurts My Friends!!!"
Rahul burst through but not aiming for the Mew-Two. No aiming for the man. It was to much for him and he was shot into a cage where the pokemon had been kept. The lid threw itself down and he was trapped. It was just rahul and mew-Two.
"You insolent fool. You do realise that you will die here. Whether you have ultimate power or not. You shall not win"
But as the mew-two echoed those words the Typhlosion came with, Lugia and Ho-ho. Their eyes were red too. Rahul smiled and they all charged forwards using there ultimate attacks. rahul just hoped it would work.
 
OOC: overdramatic much? and plus lugia wont be beaten so easily that's the point lol :P.

IC: A great strike of lightening damaged Silverbanes shield, but he maintained it's strength, and lugia wasn't hurt. Mewtwo had done a runner, teleported out of the black shield that held Lugia and Silverbane, while masses of battle's raged around them but silverbane and Lugia were locked in a battle of wills, both trying to stare the other down.

Silverbane made the first move, causing an earthquake with metranome, but it didn't effect lugia, though it did get a scare and took flight, smashing against the top of the forcefield, and fell to the ground in pain, it got back up and pummeled a hydro-pump at silverbane, who took the hit and smashed against the forcefield but rebounded with the black shadow orb.

The battles raged around them but the moonlight shone down strongly on the battles.
 
Juni gasped. Something had struck the shield, but it still didn't break. But Mewtwo had gotten through the shield. Kirin shot an ice beam at it, then Cray made the twigs, vines, and rocks around them come to life and form a earth barriscade in front of them. "I don't know if it'll hold, so we've got to move!" he said running to the other side of force field. "Come on, if a thunder attack can damage it a little, then maybe all our attacks can do something..."
he turned to the nearest trees and forced them to uproot themselves and flung them at the shield. Huge rocks followed the mant trees. Juni made three typhoons, Kirin shot ice beams and his ice shards, and Zaph supershocked the field.
 
Name: Tempest
Age: 2 Years
Colours: Light Teal and Silver
Specail ability: Dragon and Flying Attacks Can fly
Specail items: an impressive halter-like headchain that is made up of teal beads.
Specail markings: Wings on hindquarters and yellow gem on tail tip.
Gender: F

[PokeCommunity.com] The Land Of The Umbreon (revived)


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A young Umbreon reveiled itself to the group. Her taws trembled as she trudged with her head high with pride. She approached the eldest Umbreon and announced.
"I am Tempest."
 
OOC: O_o, Ive never had a member start 14 pages into my rp before. Oh well, some members havent been here since page 3 so you can join.Ill add you to the list at the front. Oh and by the way, Im going to take a try at drawing all the umbreon together. can everyone PM me some sort of pic of theyre umbreon or something? I might even make some sprites. Anyways, here I go:

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Restren looked at the collar. Gulping he sat up straight. Maybe he could burn the collar before he turned evil...
"And dont even think about trying to burn the collar before you turn evil because it can with stand fire that isnt in the right weakness point." Said a grunt.

Restren groaned and rolled his eyes. He raised a paw in silence as the collar attached to his firey neck. His eyes turned redder than ever but then they turned as blue as the night sky. His red and roange body changed blue and black and his fire went out like a candle light. Restren looked up at his new owners grinning.

"Go find the other umbreon and bring them here, if you do so, I`ll give you a cookie!" Said a grunt. Restren ran out of the room panting like a dog. He began to sniff the air and ran in the direction of the lake.

Maybe if he tried, he would become a head of the pack. Leader of the group. The bronze and the brains both at the same time. This is what Restrens new dream was. Not finding his sister but defeating all good and making bad rule.

Restren`s dream was of course pointlessly bad but also pointless at all. He would never become head of anything. Jarlen was propably dead too. He was propably stuck in another trap. He had been captured long ago so Restren though he was either already evil, caught in a trap, or dead.

Restren continued to run not knowing what risk he was taking. He thought his task was to bring his friends but the task inside him told him to kill his friends.
Unsure what to do but still determined, Restren ran faster.


After a few more minutes, Restren came to the lake. His blue eyes scanned the lake and found land in the middle. He pretended to be normally himslf as it was dark nd on one would have told the difference in his colour. He hoped that the others would think it was just himself not the monster inhabiting him.

He leapt into the water pretending he was in pain while swimming.
He made it halfway to the island. He saw something on it. It must be the others. He thought climbing onto land pretending he was sickly injured.
 
Silverbane saw REstren coming, but said nothign instead he jumped onto Lugia's wind up behind it where itcouldn't hurt him,and again ripped the Collar from it's neck, like he did with charizard, and absorbing the energy in the collar, now the black aurora was flowing off him, and the Lugia turned white again, and fainted on the ground.

"Restren go no further" Silverbane yelled letting down the forcefield, he knew he was stronger than most of the umbreon around, maybe even them all but that was thanks to the collar's energy, and he wasn't evil, and he knew Restren was, thanks to the collar's, and now it was their time to fight.
 
There was an umbreon snooping in the bushes. She paused and sat on her haunches behind Silverbane's right flank. She glare at those in front of her and gritted her teeth at the collars. They seemed to make her coat prickle with unease. Reluctantly, she stepped foreward, spitting a quick curse and pushing herself to the ground when she trod upin a stick, which snapped and may have alerted the other's of her presence.

(OOC: I have my own sprites, backsprites, custom eggs, and custom pokeballs.)
 
Silver looked at Restren he looked injured. "Silverbane! Restren is hurt, what are you talking about?" She asked walking up to Restren. She noticed a collar around Restren's neck. "Since when did Restren have a collar?" She whispered to herself. As the moonlight hit Restren's fur she noticed it was a darker colour. Backing away a little she understood why Silverbane had said those words. "H..he has a collar on he....he's evil. We have to save him!" She whispered to Silverbane.
 
(OOC: She's snooping. Doesn't matter who, just looking for a spot to pounce in)
 
"Silver I know, I have to get that collar off him, I never thought i'd have to fight my friends" Silverbane yelled jumping into the water, he was much more powerful and he could swin alot faster, and easiar.

"C'mon Restren me and you, here and now" He yelled diving under the water, and gaining speed on Restren, and then went to swim up out of the water near Restren, trying to frighten him to the far side of the lake away from the other Umbreon.
 
Silver was frightened for both Restren's and Silverbane's sake. "Silverbane, please don't hurt Restren too much !" She yelled standing at the edge of the island. She knew that Silverbane would have to use force to take the collar off, she just hoped it wouldn't cause either umbreon to be inflicted with serious damage.
 
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Silverbane knew more of that dark energy could hurt him, but Restren was in trouble, and all silverbane had to do more of that energy and break the collar around restrens neck, either that or become his sworn enemy for life, and Silverbane definetly did not wan't that.

Silverbane heard Silver's words and yelled back "I promise" and took another dive underwater, and jumped back up through the waters surface a few feet away from Restren, and kept doing that to confuse restren, so he could get onto his back and get rid of the collar.

For a protector of the chosen ones Silverbane wasn't doing to well, well that's what he thought at least.
"I'll make up for all my stupid mistakes, I promise." Silverbane whispered into the wind, as he dove back underwater.
 
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