the legend of darkrai: part 1

[mew darkrai shaymin.]

Part 1

I was born in darkness. I never knew who I was until my family told me who I was. I was Darkrai. My family told me that when I was 13 I would speak with the legendary Arceus and recevie my powers.

The sad part about my childhood is my family was killed by a gang of luxray and a pokemon named loppuny took me in. Now I was the last of my kind.

The time came when Arceus would speak to me. Loppuny wished me the best of luck. I jorneyed a long way to moon stone, alone. When I closed my eyes I felt myself drifting away. When I oped them again I was floting in space. I looked around and then a figure apeared to me and I knew who it was, Arceus.

"Hello Darkrai, You have had a tough life so far but many more challeges await you and a great battle between space and time will rage in a town called alamos." Arceus said. I dared not to speak as Arcues steped closer to me.

"This power of darkness is yours." Arceus said to me. I closed my eyes and then I felt a sharp pain in my body. I opened my eyes. Then I tried something. "Ion beam!" I shouted, and a purple beam shot out of my hand. I had power.

I returned home with an unplesent welcome. Everything was recked and I needed to run to another home Loppony was dead. It was the luxray that had killed my family. There was only one place I wanted to go. Alamos town.

Part 2 coming soon!!

 

[Eruption]

It all goes way too quick, you could have built up to knowing he was Darkrai or the meeting with Arceus.

The chapter is also very short and there is very little description.

 

[NatureKeeper]

Wel, Good but how the heck Luxray beat Darkrai?

 

[mew darkrai shaymin.]

the legend of darkrai: part 2

Part 2

The day I arrived in Alamos town I was taken in by a girl named Berry. It never lasted long. Two days later a gang of pokemon attacked the town. One was a Jolteon, the others were Luxios and the leader was a Swampert. All the trainers and their pokemon were trying to get rid of them. The gang was to strong, so I did the only thing to protect the pokemon. I used Dark void, then while the pokemon trainers were distracted I used Ion beam on the gang of pokemon. They fled.

All the pokemon trainers were staring at me. "Why would you do this?" someone shouted. "Let's destroy it!" Someone else said. "Stop!" It was Berry. "Why do you want to attack Darkrai?" She asked them. "He put our pokemon to sleep and made them have nightmares. It's very clear that Darkrai was in mixed up deal with the gang of pokemon that attacked the town. You make sure you punish him severely." Someone answered her. "Oh I will! Come Darkrai" she said. I Followed her.

Couldn't she see! It wasn't a mixed up deal, and I only used Dark void to protect every pokemon that belonged to a trainer! Night came. "Darkrai", Berry said to me, "I can't let you stay here. I want you gone. Forever. I hate you darkrai, and so does every one else." Felt sad as deep pain rose inside me. With tears in my eyes I fled the house.

Seven years had passed and I saw that two towers were being built along with what they called a contest hall. I hated every one here! I wandered into the garden. Shortly after a Roseraid and two krilia found me. In less than a second they launched an attack at me It hurt really bad. I gave them a taste of Dark void. They fell asleep. Then something jumped out of the bushes. A Luxray!! "Go away!" I shouted and launched a ion beam attack but it dogged. Then without a split second to think I was hit with hyper beam. Then I put it to sleep with dark void. I felt really week. I felt dizzy, I laid against a tree. That's when I met Alicia.

"What's your name?" She asked me. "Darkrai. My Pairents were two darkrai's named Dark and ruby. They gave me my named because of my species" I asnswered. "Do you have friends?" She asked me.
"No. The only friend I had is Loppuny. She Took me in when my fainly were killed by a gang of Luxrays." I answered. "How sad! How did that happen?" She asked me. "When I was little, the Luxray attacked us. My pairents tried to get rid of them using ion beam. But the Luxray just kept comeing. They kept using Hyper beam and Volt takle until my parients were dead. They both never knew dark void. Electicidy and Nomal attacks were my pairents weekness." I answered. "That's so sad!" she said. "Yes. When I turned 13 I went to see the legendary Arceus who gave me my powers, but when I returned the luxray had attacked again and they killed loppuny. After I fled to this place evryone hated me!" I told her. "I don't hate you" She said and she palyed me a song.

Many events took place in this town. I fought the battle between space and time. I gave my life for the town. After the battle I was Alomos's town's new protector.
This is my life.
I AM DARKRAI!

 

[Double 7]

Well, this isn't a full book, cuz I saw the part 2. You have to write FULL stories. Plus, make chapters, not a different thread for each one!

 

[Buoysel]

Hey, mew, darkrai, shaymin, parts are called chapters, and they go in the same thread. So don't make a new thread for each chapter, you post a reply to the first.