The Mystics and the Gems

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Richard was going to hit AJ but instead took a seat next to Terra and siad, "How about you just drive this thing and make sure not to drown us." He then place his arm around Terra.

Zip then said, {Watch out. I do tend to get sick out on sea. HOpefully I won't braf. I would HATE to do that on you.} He smile and laugh. He really wanted to kiss Star.

Jo then said, "Come on AJ!!!! Sea air and breeze!! Let me feel that air!!"
 
" okay" I said as I back away from the docks.
" lets get going" I smirked speeding out to sea.
" 20mph 30 mph 40 mph, 50 mph, 60 mph!" I read as I steered through the sea. "everyone fine?" I yelled back to them.
" nobody sick yet?"
 
{I have a better idea for who you can sit by.}
Star said with s mirk.
She pushed Zip into Jo's lap.
{Stay there and let's hope you get sick.}
She said with a wink.
Terra shrugged and looked at AJ.
"He drives fine. We already took this out on a test run anyway.
 
" look's like a mean group of about 10 sharpedo coming up..." I warned the other's. " there attcking the boat!" I exclaimed.
" terra take the wheel!" I yelled to her jumping to the side of the boat.
" I'll give them a shock! electro blast!" I yelled shocking the water making the sharpedo faint.
 
Terra took hold of the wheel and continued to drive it at about the same speed.
"As long as I'm driving. There are a few rules. Number one is that Jo can't talk or she will be thrown into the water with the Sharpedo. Number two is...I'll tell you when I think of it."
She said to the group.
Star snickered.
 
Okay, sorry to intervene, but there's something I need to go over with you guys. ^^;

Your posts aren't meeting the 'one paragraph per post' rule, ash jr. From my point of view, all it looks like is that you're trying to do is an attempt to avoid the rule. What you're writing does not qualify as a paragraph, not in the least.
 
OCC: I will try to enforce the paragraph/four line rule more in this RP. Sorry if I kind of let them get away with it. I thought that was ok but I must have been wrong.

Ok you guys. Try to keep it more of a paragraph and less then just lines. I wouldn't want to see this thing closed.

IC: Zip was pushed into Jo and had a look of disgust on his face. He then said, {I don't want to be with Miss Loud-month freakgirl.} He then walked his way towards Star and said, {Still I perfer the feel of barf on fur.} He smiled.

Jo then said, "I try not to upset you Terra. I sure don't want you to crash and kill us all." SHe then shugged and lean against her chair."

Richard saw the sharpedo and smile. He then looked at Terra and said, "Try to keep the boat from moving to much." He then looked at Zip and said, "Let battle this seasickness away."

Zip looked at him and said, {Yeah. That sounds cool.} He got next to RIchard.

"Fire a Thunderbolt at the sharpedo!"

Zip shot an electric attack at the water and thus shocking them.
 
Name: Anthony(tony)
Title: Poke'mon Trainer
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Birthday: July 24th ( Is this relevant)
Birthplace: Sevi island six
Height: 5' 5"
Weight: 140
Role model: Falkner
Group: None
Poke'mon: Haunter, Hitmonlee, Kabutops
Appearance:Anthony is a dark-skinned Italian with dark hair, not much of a gut and bit of muscle. He wears a red t-shirt, blue denem jacket, and black jeans.
Personality: He is very monotone. He wises to come off as tactful. He never appears confidant, despite much self-esteem. He tries also not to make enemies.
History: Anthony worked at his father's grocery store until he was 13. Then he received a kabuto from a friend at school. When Anthony finished his pokemon school he set out to travel to kanto where he would collect the badges and become a master.
Rival: none
Extra: none

RP Sample
It was very cloudy that friday night. Drizzling rain could constantly be heard pattering against the stained glass windows of my small-town church. But that did not seem to dampen the spirits of my family and friends as they sat in those rows. Then when I came strutting down the aisle in my mother's white wedding gown they started to clap and smile. I stumpled on the steps walking over to my groom-to-be. From what he told me afterwards my wreath even fell off my head. He was wearing a rented tux. Bowtie, pocketsquare, cufflinks, the works. It was a real departure from his usual muscle-tees. There I was on the most important day of my life smiling and holding my husbands hand as the priest read from a book. Then I felt water on my head. It was a leak... in the roof. So I Pushed my fiance over to the left and stepped where he was satnding to get away from the leak. It was the most the important day of life. And it should of been for the fortune I paid.
 
OOC: I would like to accept you but I believe it is too far into the RP and I believe I am full. I do like your sample and would like to accept you but if I do then I may have to give you a side role and I would hate to do that. If I have an opening due to some thing then I will make sure to ask you to join.
 
Corbin glanced at the Sharpedo. "This looks like a job for Bolt." He said. Bolt came out of his pokeball. "ThunderWave them!"

Bolt sent out A paralzying thunder wave to meet the sharpedos. "I hope they don't wreck the boat" Corbin said.

"Their pokedex entry says they can split a boat in half." He said as he looked at the intimidating Sharpedos lurching closer. "We just have to stop them!" Corbin said as Bolt sent out more ThunderWave attacks. "Sharpedos don't appear in numbers. How strange. Their usually called the lone wolf pokemon cause they travel alone."
 
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RIchard laugh and said, "Well. That is easy. Just make sure that they don't get close to the boat. IF we do that then we won't need to worry about what the dex says." He didn't give a care. He bary even touch the thing.

Zip then smile and said, {What a pokedex?} He then shot a Thunderbolt at the Sharpedos. It scared a few away but still they were coming.

"I may need to bring out Daisy in order to help get rid of them." said Jo. She was looking in her bag for something.

{Loud month is helping?} said Zip. He shot another Thunderbolt at the Sharpedos.

"We may need to use Thunder if they don't get away." said RIchard. "Still let not unless we want to risk sinking the boat." He knew that Zip hadn't master that move yet.
 
" I have an idea!" I said to richard, Jo and corbin while I got to the left side of the boat.

" if we each take a side of the boat we can keep the sharpedo away." I said pointing to the sharpedo on all sides.

" Go muddy! go pika! " I yelled sending the two pokemon out.
"I'll take the left side of the boat!" I said centering myself and my pokemon left.
 
OOC: Good job AJ on the post. Keep it up but use caps on names. I notice that you only caped Jo's name. haha.

IC: Jo found a pokeball and looked at the water around them. SHe then shook her head in disapproval and said, "Nah. I think I just keep Daisy in her pokeball. I afraid she may be left behind with how Terra is driving."

She then felt a feeling of great pain. It felt as if her eyes were being pulled out of her head. She felt as if her eyes were floating in a certain direction.

Richard then said, "I can take the rear and if need the front of the boat. Zip can keep eye in the front for the sharpedos and I the front." He then looked at Corbin and AJ. "You guys just take a side and make sure that they don't get close."
 
" okay Richard, I'll take left." I said getting into postion with my pokemon.
" Pika use thunderbolt!" I told the electric mouse as it charged up the attack.

" Muddy use electro blast!" I told the mudkip. I then placed my hands in a cuplike position and focusing my energy into my palms.

" there we go" I said as I sent the condensed electro energy into the sea.
" left is pretty clear of sharpedo"
 
Richard then looked to the behind of Zip then to his front. He saw a group of sharpedos making run from the back. ZIp saw then said, {There is no way we are going to get it from the back." He then shot a Thunderbolt at the group.

Richard then saw some from the front. He then said, "Hey. Shoot one from behind."

{I do it without looking.} said Zip. He then shoot an electic attack and almost missed the sharpedo but the water was able to carry it to the pokemon.

"Lucky" said Richard.

{Skill.} said Zip.

Jo then wonder what she was looking at. She saw lots of yellow dots on a metal area. She wonder if this was the place they were suppost to head for. SHe then saw a gold and a yellow-gold arua. Near the yellow-gold arua was a blue and red glow.
 
I looked at out to the water on the left side of the boat and sighed.
It was actully kinda beautiful out here, I was so deep in thought I didnt see the sharpedo coming up and jumping towards the boat.

when it hit my arm I snapped out of it. Good thing it's got my automail arm. I then shocked it and through it to sea.
 
Jo then saw the red and blue glows and knew that it was the Gem of Water. She could tell because she had seen it many times on Terra's person. She had to guess that the red glow was the Gem of Fire.

Richard then said, "Hey AJ. Make sure to keep them away. I just saw some on your side." He then saw some coming again from the back. Zip just shugged and shot another Thunderbolt attack. at the sharpedos.

Zip then said, {I got it here. Just hang with you girlfriend} He then said, {This is going to be fun.}

Jo then felt a pop. He then relize that her vision was back in her eyes.
 
" Yeah..." I said not really paying attention as I kept zapping the water.
I looked hard at the water thinking of how deep it was, and how quick I would die if I went in.

I then kept my mind off the water and saw the sharpedo had mostly cleared out. " Richard! I think they're starting to clear out!" I called to him.
 
"Good." said Jo. SHe was seeing things as if a black veil had be place over her eyes. SHe couldn't even see the other's aruas but that didn't matter now. She then said "I think I know where the metal island is."

Zip shot one more Thunderbolt and said, {Yeah. I think we done for now}

Richard then asked Jo, "How?"

"I don't know but let me talk to Terra to give her the directions. I think we may have passed it." She then got up but felt as if she couldn't see anything. She stumble around trying to walk but the 'veil' over her eyes made it hard see where she was going. "Let me talk to her"
 
Terra glanced back at them, but then quickly got back to focussing on the water a head of her. "I'll have you know my driving is fine Jo!" She said angerly as she drove. The wind whipped through her hair seding it flying every which way. "You say you know where the metal island is huh?" Terra then said pulling Jo over and sitting her down in the seat next to her. "Well then, give me directions."

Star watched them silently. {I wonder how this will turn out.} She muttered softly, her eyes looking around at everyone.
 
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