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My first Pokemon fancfic. Comment!!
Chapter 1- Why?
"Mom! I'm going out, now!" Josh ran out of the house at full speed.
"Ok, but be careful!" she shouted out of the laboratory, where she was working. Josh was excited. Today was the day his mother had finally allowed him to catch a wild Pokémon of his own. She had also given him one of the new prototype 'elemental' Pokéballs. They would allow him to catch a Pokémon of a certain type, for instance this one with a thunderbolt would allow him to catch an electric Pokémon much more easily (but it was not necessarily limited to electric Pokémon). His mother only got these to test out with because she was a professor and in an inspiration to try them out, she had allowed Josh to catch his first Pokémon with one. Josh smiled to himself and paused. His black hair, which was slightly spiked up, shone in the sunlight. Thanks to his taller than average height, he scanned the area for any Pokémon he might want. He saw all the usual Pokémon. The mankey and sentret hanging in the trees. The pidgey and spearow's flying up ahead. There were the horsea's and goldeen's and magikarp's splashing about in the river. He stared at it intently, lost in its deep, mesmerising blue and he remembered.
***
It was going to storm that day, yet despite his mother's warnings he had gone out to play there. The rain had been splattering all over him, making his clothes stick to him uncomfortably. The rocks had been made wet and dangerously slippery due to the heavy rains. He had been messing on the rocks by the side, jumping from stone to stone, when he slipped and fell in, gashing his leg on the side. Pain flared up and he cried out in pain, but that was soon cut out as he entered the water and it rushed into his mouth, choking him. Normally the river is shallow, but due to the heavy rain and winds, it had become deep and wild. He struggled, thrashing and kicking, but he still sank under. The cold was seeping into him, into his very bones. Never had he experienced such cold. It froze him and his struggles stopped. He felt calm now, almost peaceful and very tired. His eyelids drooped lower and lower until his eyes closed. And he died. Suddenly there was a blue light. It seeped into him, warming up his chilled bones. Revived somewhat he frantically surged towards its source. As he broke the surface, he opened his eyes and found himself staring into Suicune, its eyes aglow and staring at him intensely. It had brought him back.
***
That was the reason why. Why he had to capture Suicune.
Chapter 1- Why?
"Mom! I'm going out, now!" Josh ran out of the house at full speed.
"Ok, but be careful!" she shouted out of the laboratory, where she was working. Josh was excited. Today was the day his mother had finally allowed him to catch a wild Pokémon of his own. She had also given him one of the new prototype 'elemental' Pokéballs. They would allow him to catch a Pokémon of a certain type, for instance this one with a thunderbolt would allow him to catch an electric Pokémon much more easily (but it was not necessarily limited to electric Pokémon). His mother only got these to test out with because she was a professor and in an inspiration to try them out, she had allowed Josh to catch his first Pokémon with one. Josh smiled to himself and paused. His black hair, which was slightly spiked up, shone in the sunlight. Thanks to his taller than average height, he scanned the area for any Pokémon he might want. He saw all the usual Pokémon. The mankey and sentret hanging in the trees. The pidgey and spearow's flying up ahead. There were the horsea's and goldeen's and magikarp's splashing about in the river. He stared at it intently, lost in its deep, mesmerising blue and he remembered.
***
It was going to storm that day, yet despite his mother's warnings he had gone out to play there. The rain had been splattering all over him, making his clothes stick to him uncomfortably. The rocks had been made wet and dangerously slippery due to the heavy rains. He had been messing on the rocks by the side, jumping from stone to stone, when he slipped and fell in, gashing his leg on the side. Pain flared up and he cried out in pain, but that was soon cut out as he entered the water and it rushed into his mouth, choking him. Normally the river is shallow, but due to the heavy rain and winds, it had become deep and wild. He struggled, thrashing and kicking, but he still sank under. The cold was seeping into him, into his very bones. Never had he experienced such cold. It froze him and his struggles stopped. He felt calm now, almost peaceful and very tired. His eyelids drooped lower and lower until his eyes closed. And he died. Suddenly there was a blue light. It seeped into him, warming up his chilled bones. Revived somewhat he frantically surged towards its source. As he broke the surface, he opened his eyes and found himself staring into Suicune, its eyes aglow and staring at him intensely. It had brought him back.
***
That was the reason why. Why he had to capture Suicune.
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