[Other Original] The Osterix Chronicles

[Cephandrius]

Hey everyone! So I'm working on a Fantasy project, and I'd really like to see what you all think. It is my first attempt at writing something, so it isn't very good, but I would appreciate some feedback. In the rules it said that I should warn you if there are any touchy subjects. There is minor language, minor violence, and a bit of sexual content, but it's nothing to bad. I'll leave a link to the google doc it is on. I didn't see anything about this in the rules, but I might have missed it. Please let me know if it isn't allowed, and I apologize if it is. It is rather lengthy, coming in at around 50 pages, so I completely understand if you don't want to read all of it. Hope you all enjoy :)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T0Urf9YQ8YyVCLgqpe0u3RCnwBT729gZwtHL6IbmkDE/edit

 

[Bay]

Hey everyone! So I'm working on a Fantasy project, and I'd really like to see what you all think. It is my first attempt at writing something, so it isn't very good, but I would appreciate some feedback. In the rules it said that I should warn you if there are any touchy subjects. There is minor language, minor violence, and a bit of sexual content, but it's nothing to bad. I'll leave a link to the google doc it is on. I didn't see anything about this in the rules, but I might have missed it. Please let me know if it isn't allowed, and I apologize if it is. It is rather lengthy, coming in at around 50 pages, so I completely understand if you don't want to read all of it. Hope you all enjoy :)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T0Urf9YQ8YyVCLgqpe0u3RCnwBT729gZwtHL6IbmkDE/edit

Hey, want to let you know that linking your fic is not allowed and you should post your story instead so that people can provide feedback easier here. I'm going to close this link, but I'm fine with you doing another thread and copy/paste your story (also another suggestion, have each chapter be its own post to make things easier for your readers). If there's something you don't understand, do let me know.