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The path to hell

The Dark Jedi

The Dark one
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    This is story a telling you about a young devil prince whos traing was finnaly finished and was ready to take over the world but all does not go so easy people are being paid to have this young prince kill and caught.You will be caught and get taken to a big castle were you have to break out and kill everyone in the castle :bandit:.then when you do get out you must burn villages down and and kill anyone who gets in your way! hope you like the screen shot and this map is when you are going to your fathers room
     
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    The map's pretty empty; fill it in a bit. You never told us what that map is about, tho... so, I can't really judge it.

    Story's a bit bare, deepen it up a bit ;)

    altho, I wish you all the luck in this ^^
     
    The story is a bit bare, like Peekimon said.Also, the map is still plain a little.
     
    So the story is... You get locked in a castle and you gotta get out? That's it?
     
    It's a good practice game for a beginner.
     
    Hm... a bit too restrictive (I dunno if that's a word XD) Pond doesn't look that natural, add some froggie and etc. Plus, shouldn't a Dark forest be filled with trees and the like? O,h and I think tinting the screen darker should give it that dark forest feeling, otherwise, nice map.
     
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