RazoREdge: Declined. Reserved. Make a new character and look to make sure it is like the one that I edited.
Name:Ray Hikari
Age:14
Gender: Male
Legendary Pokèmon & Mineral: Jirachi/Chrystal
Appearence:Has Spikey White Hair and has eye color of sapphire blue,wore a green hoodie and blue pants, has a sleeveless green undershirt
Personality:loves dragon pokemon,quite and calm,intimidating and timid if angered,a bit of a bookworm,Admires the pokemon Kingdra
Pokèmon:Blaziken-Slash,Fire Punch, Blaze Kick, Mirror Move
Kingdra-Twister,Ice Beam, Surf, Body Slam
Altaria-Dragonbreathe,Dragon Claw, Fly, Sky Attack
Magneton-Zap Cannon,Thunder,Facade,Hyper Beam
Slaking-Skill Swap,Covet,Faint Attack,Strenght
Gardevoir-Psychic,Magical Leaf,Hypnosis,Dream Eater
History:When he was only 6, his family went to Lilycove for a vacation,he wandered around and has trip over a staryu and by coincidence,a Wailord have hust used WaterSpout and send Ray flying off in the Middle of Lilycove and Mossdeep.then a Kingdra appeared and save him,brought him to the land and Norman happens to passed by saw Ray unconcious and brought him back to his parents, he realized that a kingdra save him before Norman did.by paying Kingdra back to his Kindness,he swore to be a best friend to Pokemons.
Others:His powers is a defence mechanism,an aura will surround him and give him power to freely control metal and a cocoon will cover him to prevent him from harm,though he will not remember anything at all
Where You're Character is at Start:Littleroot Town
Okay... This is how I would like it (at the least):
Name:Ray Hikari
Age:14
Gender: Male
Legendary Pokèmon & Mineral: Jirachi/Chrystal
Appearence:Ray has spikey, white hair. His eyes are a, sparkling, sapphire blue. He wears a green hoodie and blue pants. He has a sleeveless green undershirt.
Personality:Ray loves dragon Pokemon. He is quite and calm. If he is angry, he can get intimidating and timid. Ray is a bit of a bookworm. He admires the Pokemon Kingdra.
Pokèmon:
Blaziken-Slash,Fire Punch, Blaze Kick, Mirror Move
Kingdra-Twister,Ice Beam, Surf, Body Slam
Altaria-Dragonbreathe,Dragon Claw, Fly, Sky Attack
Magneton-Zap Cannon,Thunder,Facade,Hyper Beam
Slaking-Skill Swap,Covet,Faint Attack,Strenght
Gardevoir-Psychic,Magical Leaf,Hypnosis,Dream Eater
History:When he was 6, his family went to Lilycove for a vacation. He wondered around, and tripped over a Staryu, and he made a loud sound. A startled Wailord must have had used water spout, which sent Ray flying into the middle of the ocean, between Lillycove and Mossdeep. Then a Kingdra appeared to save him. The Kingdra brought him to land. Gym Leader Norman happened to pass by and see Ray unconcious. Norman brought Ray back to his parents. Ray realized that a Kingdra had saved him before Norman noticed. By paying Kingdra back he swore to be best friends to all Pokemon.
Others:N/A (tell me what you want you're power to be before posting it)
Where You're Character is at Start:Littleroot Town