The Pokemon Adventure: Johto Region

[Zeph.]

Right, I know I'm late but here's my SU :D

Name: Ulrik Kane :)
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Appearance: Ulrik wears a smart shirt and a black waistcoat. His trousers are also quite smart and he ha a red bag. Ulrik stands at around 6 feet and is of a slim build. His hair is a fine brown colour and is very soft. He likes to keep his hair in a particular style, so he carries around a tub of gel and a comb. His eyes are a ginger - hazle and his face is very fine.

Ulrik did get a scar on his side when he was young (I'll explain this in histroy)
Personality: Ulrik is a thoughtful, friendly chap. He is considerate and is always kind to people and pokemon. In a sense, he is rather naive as he dosen't know much about the harsh realities of the pokemon world - however, he likes to see the bright side of things. He likes to make friends and when he battles, it's never for personal gain - simply a pleasure. Ulrik also likes dodgeball, basketball and creative arts - like drama.
History: Ulrik comes from a standard family, however, when he was 7, his father lost his job at Silph. co and the family were struggling to make ends meet. His father found a new job at the Goldenrod Radio Tower, resulting in the family's move to Violet City nearby. His mother is now a part time kindergarden/nursery teacher, his older brother has recently become a plumber and even his younger sister has a paper round. Ulrik decided to become a part time pokemon breeder, developing his relationship with the magnificent beings. It is now Ulrik's 17th birthday, and his parents have been saving up for years for him to do what he wants to be - a pokemon trainer.
Starter Pokemon: Totodile - nickname "Lars"

I also have a trainer card:

Lemmie know if I need to change anything :)

 

[Gulpin]

Chapter 6.1: Route 31

Grey looked at the people who were waiting by the cave. Soon, his eyes brought him to see Ashton, who was cradling a terrified Togepi.

Grey ran up to Ashton, saying, "Hurry! We need to get this Pokemon to Violet city! Come on, Ashton," Grey said frantically, motioning to the injured and scared Teddiursa.

With no reply, Grey started rushing through the next route, Route 30. Grey could tell that this Route wasn't too big. There were three or four small patches of grass, all leading to one big patch. Hopefully, Grey could make his way through without having to battle any other trainers - or Pokemon, that is. After the largest patch of grass, Grey could clearly see the building witch is the passage to the next city, Violet City. Grey ran through the route full-force. Though, even with his hopes of not running into Pokemon, he was stopped by a trio of Pokemon: a Pidgey, Spinarak, and Poliwag.

"Pidg!" The Pidgey sneered, apparently the leader of the three.

"Okay," Grey said, "Hurry Snow, De, let's quickly battle!"

Greys Pokemon, Snow, a Mareep, and De, a Hoppip, advanced to face the Pokemon trio.

"Mar!" Snow said, rather menacingly.

"Okay," Grey said, not willing to let the Teddiursa in his hands, "Snow, use thundershock
on the Pidgey!"

The Mareep gathered energy from presumably the clouds overhead and shot the helpless Pidgey with a bolt of thunder.

"Yes!" Grey yelped, "Snow one more of those!"

The Pokemon once again gathered energy, but was interrupted by the Pidgey tackling it. Not only did the Pidgey attack but also its' friends: The Spinarak poisoning Hoppip, and the Poliwag using water sport. Grey knew that poison was super effective on De, so he ordered the Hoppip to use synthesis on itself. Then, Snow was finally able to shoot a thunderbolt at the Pidgey, fainting the leader of the trio.

"One down, two to go," Grey muttered to himself. Then, to Snow and De, "De! Use tail whip, and Snow use thundershock, but this time on the Poliwag,"

The Pokemon did as so, but the Spinarak once again poisoned De, and the Poliwag uselessly used water sport.

"De, heal yourself!" Grey said, then to Snow, "One more thundershock should do it!"

Both Pokemon then gathered energy, Snow from the rain clouds and De from the surrounding nature. Then, in unison Snow let off one final bolt towards the Poliwag and De absorbed the energy witch it had gathered.

"Okay De, time to heal Snow!"

But before De was able to, the Spinarak poisoned De again. Before Grey could change orders, De went on healing Snow.

"Snow, just tackle the Spinarak!"

Then Snow did just as told, and charged at the helpless bug Pokemon.

"Good!" Grey said, "De! Use tail whip so the Spinarak will be defenseless! And Snow, one more tackle!"

The two did as told, first with De using tail whip, lowering the defense of the Spinarak.

"Good," Grey muttered to himself watching the Spinarak taking one last tackle before finally fainting.

Then in the midst of the battle, Grey noticed that he forgot about Teddiursa.

"Hurry!" Grey said, running through the grass shooing away wild Pokemon. "We need to get to Violet City!"

By then Grey had cleared all of Route 30, and had presumably left Ashton behind. Grey slowed as he entered the building connecting Violet City with Route 30 and vice-versa. Then, after saying, "Hi," to the people behind the desks in the small building, Grey ran full speed into Violet City, searching for the PokeCenter.

 

[Eucliffe]

I see Totodile might be taken, but just in case...

Character Name: Mizu Seishin Hinan
Gender: Girl
Age: 14
Apperance: Mizu has very pale skin, much like that of a vampires (for those who have read the Twilight series or saw the movie or even the trillion posters around). She is roughly 5'4" in height, somewhat shorter than one of her friends, a girl named Gale (I'll introduce her later), and is of average weight. She has a "D-cup", though her chest just barely qualifies as one. Mizu's hair goes down to about her rear, and is a silky straight very light blue. Her eyes, as she had been teased about, are both a different color. Her left eye is a stunning sapphire blue while her right eye a bright turquoise blue. Mizu usually wears a blue schoolboy outfit, because she never liked wearing skirts. Her outfit is a blue shirt followed by blue capris, and then navy blue slip-on shoes, the only part not included with her uniform. Mizu also may sometimes wear a blue schoolgirl hat (the only schoolgirl item the teachers could get her into), which is shaped like a sailor's hat, and has a yellow ribbon around it.

And finally, Mizu wears a talisman charm necklace around her neck. She has many, so I'll only list a couple:
希望 (Hope)
信頼 (Faith)
運 (Luck)
運命 (Destiny)
保護 (Protect)
健康 (Power)
強さ (Strength)
静穏 (Serenity)
Personality: Mizu is very fragile in terms of resistance to name calling and bullying, and often goes off crying. Very shy and quiet, Mizu keeps to herself and never lets the world in. However, she has studied tactics over a period of time, and has become a great tactician herself, winning most strategy games she played with the fews friends she ever had. Mizu is mostly calm in hectic situations, and often is just found sitting around in a daze. Mizu may also space out, usually thinking about strategies, but is always able to catch any important parts if someone is speaking to her.
History: Mizu's life was harsh. Let's begin at her birth. She was born in the Johto region but her parents were foreigners from another country across the world. They taught her their native language, but at the same time, she took up her native language so she could interact with everyone around her. Eventually, Mizu's mother, whom she had felt some sort of kinship with, died from an explosion in a fire when she was 7.

The distraught Mizu soon started being teased at school, because of her "unique looks". They called her "freak", "alien", you name it. At last, Mizu couldn't take it anymore and ran away. She quickly ran into her house while her father was at work and took everything she needed. She then proceeded to leave her father a note telling him that she will be gone. Afterwards, she took off, never to be heard from again.

Eventually, Mizu received a phone call from her father; she had had a cell phone since she was 8; she was 12 now. Her father told her how much he wanted to see her, and because he sounded sad, Mizu decided to return home. When she did, however, she found her dad making out with another woman, one more vile than her mother. In shock, Mizu slammed the door behind her and ran away yet again, wishing to escape this morbid nightmare.

We're now at the present. Mizu is 13, and has been working "odd jobs" to get enough money to keep her alive. Eventually, she thought it'd be best if she could start off with a Pokemon in the region she was born in, and travel the land as much as she desired.
Pokemon Starter: Totodile, nicknamed Nori

I'll see if I can catch up if accepted. Oh, and a recap would be nice if that becomes so ^^
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[Zimvee]

To Zeta Marx...: Sorry to rain on your parade but....the shadow can't.....well maybe it can...The Shiny Pokemon that attack people are part of Team Enel but since you made them up maybe you can work something out...Oh and Lick woudn't work against Pidgey. Pidgey is a normal type and ghost attacks dont work against it XP Good post though!
Pidgey grew to Level 12!
Togepi grew to Level 9!
To ZephyrII: Well Serene does kinda of beat you at the sign up....It was good but hers was better. Sorry dude :(
To ~|symphony♪: Good post though you're on Route 31 >.< oh well.
Snow grew to Level 13!
De grew to Level 11!
De learned Tackle! (Finally!)
To Serene: Good sign up! You are accepted! You can start from Violet City and if you want any pokemon from previous routes let me know please!

 

[Sublime]

Mala's Misadventures!/ Grey's Gone?

(The following chapter is from Mala's point of view. This takes place right before Kalli's battle. Mala will think in English, to make things less confusing.)

Mala watched as Ashton called in Kalli for battle. She couldn't help but feel a bit jealous by the fact that she didn't get to battle. She stormed around in a circle for a few moments, swinging her stubby arms in the air.

I need training just as much as Kalli does! Mala thought to herself. She trudged over to a rock and watched the battle. Kalli was fighting a Teddiursa. The pitiful little bear could hardly even fight back. Mala felt sorry for the Teddiursa, but didn't want to interject on a battle.

Well..I have nothing better to do. I suppose I could explore the cave for a few moments, right? Mala thought as she waddled away from where Ashton was battling.

The cave somehow seemed to get darker and darker as Mala walked along. It wasn't to much later that Mala realized she was lost. She scrambled around in search of her trainer and Grey. She tried her hardest to locate the sounds of the battle, but their was no noise.

The battle must be over! Where is Ashton? What is he left me here?! ASHTON!!! The thoughts sped through Mala's mind a mile a minute. She couldn't shake the terrible thoughts of where her trainer was, and why she wasn't with him.

After many minutes of scrambling about, Mala came across some living beings. She still couldn't see, so she tried her hardest to figure out who, or what, it was.

"Gep..Gepi?" Mala said as she fumbled around in the darkness. A rough translation would be "Ashton? Grey?"

She soon came across a rocky surface. It didn't feel like the other rocks in the cave. This was much...warmer for some odd reason. It felt like it had a heartbeat too. Then it hit Mala like a ton of bricks.

GEODUDE! There has to be at least three of them here. Maybe I can try to reason with them.. Mala hadn't found exactly who she was looking for, but this might do.

"To, Togepi. Gepi Togepi!" Mala frantically said to the Geodude. "Have you guys seen a couple of boys come through here with a couple of Pokemon?" Would be the translation.

"Dude..Ge Geodude." One of the rock Pokemon said in a gruff reply. "No, no we havn't."

"Ge, Geodude?" Another one said with a mocking tone. "Aww, missing your poor wittle twainer?"

"Dude. Dude Geo!" The third one said with aggression in his voice. "It appears so. Let's rough her up a bit boys!"

The three rock Pokemon encircled the terrified Mala, who tried to protest with cries out to her master. She realized she had no choice but to fight. She waggled her fingers back and forth, releasing Metronome. In an instant, the cave was engulfed in a bright light.

Flash? What luck! Maybe I'll have a chance now! Mala thought to herself. Little did she know, she was dead wrong. The flash of light angered the Geodude gang; who, in retaliation, simultaneously used Rock Throw. The rocks pelted Mala, who cried out in pain. She had no choice but to unleash another Metronome as the Geodude encircled her again.

The aura from the Metronome flashed, and Mala felt a burning sensation in her chest. The sensation grew larger and larger, until she felt like she was going to explode.

Oh no! An expression of terror flashed onto the Togepi's face as she realized what attack had been chosen. EXPLOSION! And not a second after that thought entered her mind, the burning force inside her was let loose in a firey explosion. The three Geodude were sent skyward, and into another part of the cave. Mala was left there, lying defenseless and severely injured.

As...Ashton.. She thought as she slipped out of consciousness.

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(The following is from Ashton's point of view. This takes place roughly when the Geodude battle started)

Ashton had realized that Grey was no longer following him. But he really didn't care at the moment. He was in search of his missing Pokemon. He stumbled into walls and tripped over rocks as he fumbled through the pitch black cave, all the while calling out Mala's name in a desperate attempt for her to answer.

Suddenly, out of nowhere, the cave was lit by a bright light. Ashton payed little attention to the strange occurrence, but he used it to his advantage. He soared through the cave with ease now, sprinting through every twist and turn that the cave through at him.

"Dammit! Another dead end!" He cursed as he ran into another stone wall staring him down. He stopped for a moment to catch some much needed breath. In the time that he was catching his breath, a thundering explosion echoed throughout the cave followed by the tortured cry of a Togepi. Ashton jumped from the sudden noise, then realized what caused the explosion.

"MALA!!!" He screamed at the top of his lungs as he all-out sprinted to the source of the explosion. It didn't take him long to reach the site of the explosion. There, much to his dismay, lied an unconscious Togepi; covered in scratches and cuts.

"Mala! Oh God, no!" He cried as he picked up the injured Pokemon. "I..I have to get you to a Pokemon Center!" He said between sobs.

Ashton ran back out of the cave as tears flew down his cheeks.

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(Route 31 Post)

The sudden light made Ashton draw back and cover his eyes. He shook it off as he sprinted through the route. Pokemon and trainers alike stared in awe as the trainer sped past them. One trainer grabbed Ashton by the collar and began to speak.

"Hey, slow you roll there buddy! We're having a Pokemon battle!" The trainer said as he called out his Pokemon; a Poliwag, to be exact. Ashton slowly turned to face the trainer. Anger was filling his eyes as he glared at the trainer

"Pokemon battle?" Ashton tried his best to hold back his sudden anger. "No..Thank you."

"Oh come on, what are you; a wuss?" The trainer replied with an annoyed tone. "Poliwag, get ready for battle!"

This was the breaking point. Ashton couldn't waste anymore time. He punted the Poliwag into a nearby lake and grabbed the trainer by his shoulders. "I SAID I DIDN'T WANT TO BATTLE." Ashton then threw the trainer down onto the ground as he continued his sprint through the Route.

"Not too much more, Mala...Just a little longer. Hang in there!" Ashton said as tears started to flow again. He entered the building that connected Route 31 and Violet City and sped through, ignoring the greeting from the woman behind the counter.

Violet City was a beautiful place, but Ashton had no time for sight-seeing. He continued his sprint to the nearest Pokemon Center.

"Please hang on Mala..." Ashton said one last time.

 

[Wolfwhispers]

"Thank you, and please, come again," Nurse Joy said cheerfully.

Jade gave a nervous grin. While the go happy nurse was, well, nice, she was just a bit too eccentric in her work. "Thanks," Jade murmered, grabbing her pokeballs. Waving goodbye, she exited the pokemon center. While it had been a good battle at the Tower, she was still in the mood for a good fight, and the perfect place was the gym.

As Jade wandered over, she was relieved to see that the mass of people from earlier were gone. Feeling just a little nervous, as it would be her first gym battle, Jade pushed open the door. "Hello?" she called out, hating the slight tremor in her voice.

"Hello to you too," a voice greeted her. It was a young man, just a few years older than her by the look of it, but Jade had the feeling he was older than he appeared. "Here for a gym battle?" he asked.

"Of course," Jade replied, giving him a 'duh' look.

He grinned at her. "Then you've come to the right place! I am Falkner, the gym leader, and I am a flying type based master. It will be a two on two battle, no time limit. Do you understand?"

"I think I got it," Jade said, grinning easily. Her tension had washed away, apparently.

"Very well. I shall begin," Falkner said. "Go, Pidgey!"

Jade looked at the small bird fluttering patiently in the air, waiting for Jade to send out its opponent. "Go, Gastly!"

With a burst of white light, the ball of ghost appeared. "Gaaas!" it said hauntingly.

"A shiny, eh?" Falkner said, clearly impressed. "Now that's certainly a treat, but don't expect it to be easy! Pidgey, Aerial Ace!"

"Pidg!" Pidgey cawed loudly, flying at Gastly.

"Gastly, dodge and use Spite!" Jade ordered.

"Gass!" Gastly hissed, doing a few flips over the darting Pidgey, laughing as the small bird missed each time. Flying a bit back, Gastly's body glowed gray, followed by Pidgey's body growing a gray color as well.

Pidgey fluttered back a bit, confused as to why it felt a bit weaker. "Gey," it cooed, looking at its trainer questionably.

Falkner didn't appear to look bothered by it. "Pidgey, Aerial Ace," he ordered smoothly.

"Dodge it!" Jade ordered.

Laughing, Gastly darted backwards, but this time the Pidgey was smarter, and managed a successful hit. "Gaaaa!" Gastly cried out as Pidgey's beak struck its body. Floating back a bit, Gastly eyed Pidgey shrewdly.

"Gastly, use Lick!" Jade said quickly.

"Gaaaa!" Gastly cried out, charging at Pidgey quickly, large tongue open.

The gym leader, Falkner, eyed the display with a smirk and folded his arms. Jade looked at him in confusion before turning back to the charging battle. Pidgey was obviously waiting for an order, but upon recieving none, it stayed in one place, too fearful to move without the sound of his trainer's voice.

"Stly!" Gastly snarled, finally descending upon Pidgey. "Gaa... stly?" Gastly questioned, blinking in confusion as its tongue went right through Pidgey. "Gass," Gastly hissed, tilting its body in confusion. Bringing out its large tongue in front of its face, Gastly narrowed one eye suspiciously.

Falkner laughed at Gastly's and Jade's confusion. "You forget that while normal type attacks don't works against ghost types, ghost type attacks also don't work against normal types."

Jade scowled, not believing she forgot that. "Well, that may not work," she said, smirking a bit, "but this will! Hypnosis!"

"Gassstly!" Gastly snarled, frustrated that its attack hadn't worked. As it was close up, Pidgey had no possiblity of dodging. The circular ring engulfed its body, sending it into dreamland.

Falkner grit his teeth and reluctantly recalled his pokemon. "Let's try this one," he said, smirking. "Go, Pidgeotto!"

Jade just stared. Oh no, a slightly bigger bird! "Gastly, return," Jade called, returning the ghost type. "Go, Larvitar!"

With a burst of white light, the green pokemon appeared. "Larv!" Larvitar called out, lowering its horn in preparation.

"You do realize that ground are weak against flying types, don't you?" Falkner asked, a small smile tugging at his lips.

"Rockslide!" Jade barked out, ignoring Falkner's words.

"Lar!" Larvitar called out, stomping the ground and levitating the rocks, having them fall from the ceiling.

"Pidgeotto, dodge," Falkner commanded. "And follow up with Aerial Ace."

With an agile swiftness, Pidgeotto flew and ducked between the rocks, coming at Larvitar with glowing wings. "Pidgeo!"

"Meet it with Bite!" Jade ordered quickly.

Grunting, Larvitar bared his teeth, watiting for the perfect opportunity. Just as Pidgeotto descended upon him, Larvitar jumped, sharp fangs sinking into Pidgeotto's wing.

"Peooo!" Pidgeotto cred out in pain, shaking Larvitar off.

"Aerial Ace!" Falkner called out, not giving Larvitar to get his groundings after the attack.

With a guttural cry, Pidgeotto slammed into Larvitar's chest, sending it bouncing back a bit. "Tar," Larvitar grunted, shaking his head and taking in his surroundings as Pidgeotto soared in the air, awaiting another command.

"Rock Slide!" Jade ordered.

Nodding, Larvitar sent the rocks soaring, aimed right at Pidgeotto.

"Dodge!" Falkner barked.

"Peo!" Pidgeotto cawed loudly, swerving through the rocks. It was almost out of them, but one, small rocks managed to strike it right under the wing, making it falter just enough for the rest of rocks to pound against its body. "Geeettooo!" Pidgeotto cried out in pain, falling to the ground, the rocks slamming against it roughly.

"Pidgeotto!" Falkner cried out worriedly, eyes travelling all around the rock cluster in hopes of finding his pokemon.

"Geoo," Pidgeotto got out weakly, limping out of the rock pile on its talons. It tried to fly, but only managed to crash back to earth.

"Finish it with Bite!" Jade ordered, grinning widely.

"Larvit!" Larvitar barked loudly, running at the wobbling bird. "Tar!" Larvitar got out, clamping down on Pidgeotto.

"Pidg," Pidgeotto grunted weakly, sinking to the ground completely, Larvitar still on top and Biting hard.

"I think that's enough," Falkner said coldly.

At the sound of his voice, Larvitar released the pokemon grinning wildy up at Jade. "Larvitar!" he said happily/

"You were awsome!" Jade commented, giving her pokemon a hug.

"Tar," Larvitar said softly, pleased at the attention it was getting.

Falkner cleared his throat, and Jade and Larvitar moved away from each other. "As you have defeated me, Falkner the gym leader, you will recieve the Zephyr badge, as well as the TM Aerial Ace. Aside from badges, each gym leader gives out a Tm. Congragulations," he said, smiling a little. "You deserve it."

Jade took the items carefully, eyes wide with awe. Her first gym badge! And this was only the first step in her journey of badge collecting.

 

[Pikalover10]

Zubat hovered over the battlefield, waiting for his trainer's orders, while Falkner's Pidgey just stood there, moving its feet every now and then. Falkner and Max stared at eachother, waiting for the first move to be made. Finally, Max was getting really bored of just standing around and told Zubat to do something.

"Zubat use Supersonic!" Max said.

Falkner stood there, still calm as if nothing had ever happened, while Zubat shot four yellow rings toward Pidgey. Pidgey was hit by all four of them, and became very confused. He wobbled as he walked and when he tried to fly instantly, he would hit the ground.

Falkner still stood there as he watched his Pidgey look like an idiot in front of a trainer. He didn't even look like he cared. Max wondered why Falkner didn't care and sent Zubat out to fight.

"Use Astonish!" Max said.

Zubat dove in at Pidgey and hit it then turned around again and continued to do that for a few seconds. Then, Max noticed that the Pidgey's eyes changed. He knew exactly what happened. The Pidgey was free of its confusion.

"Finally. Pidgey use ariel ace!" Falkner said.

Pidgey flew up high in to the air and twirled, as if it were doing a back flip, and dove at Zubat. Zubat was wondering what had just happened, and then was hit by the Pidgey's hard attack.

Zubat fell towards the ground. He wasn't expecting a hard hit like that. Then, at the last second he pulled up back in to a hover before hitting the ground. HE shook his head and flew towards the Pidgey again.

"Now use Leech Life!" Max called out.

"Gust." Falkner purred.

Zubat sinked his teeth in to the Pidgey's neck and started sucking out its remaining HP. Pidgey tried to shake Zubat off, but to no avail. Finally, he just used the gust attack and sent Zubat flying.

Zubat twirled and caught himself in midair. He dove in at Pidgey and hit him with his head and then slapping him with his wing. ZUbat retreated back to his trainer, to wait for the next call.

"Zubat use Astonish and then Leech Life!" Max said, hoping what he wanted would happen.

Zubat flew towards the Pidgey, and hit him with his head. Pidgey's wing was hit and he didn't move, he just looked to stunned. He cringed. Max smiled happily, because that's what he wanted to happen.

Zubat turned around and sinked his teeth in to the Pidgey's neck. Gradually, the Pidgey slowly started falling towards the ground. They softly hit the ground and Zubat flew away, as it revealed that Pidgey was knocked out.

Max smiled victoriously as Falkner returned his Pidgey and grabbed his other Pokeball.

"Go, Pidgeotto." Falkner softly said.

A huge bird, with what seemed like short pink hair, and had yellow and pink tail feathers flew out of the white flash. Max knew what it was. It was a PIdgeotto. Well, better that then his Pidgeot, Max figured.

"OK...Zubat, you take a long rest." Max said.

Zubat turned around and flew to his trainer's shoulder. Max grabbed his other okeball and threw it in to the air.

"Go, Scout!" Max said.

In a blinding white flash, out appeared Max's newly evolved Furret, who's name is Scout. Max and her have been partnered together since Max found out he would be doing field work for Professor Elm.

"Scout use Quick Attack!" Max said.

"Pidgeotto use Ariel Ace, let's avenge Pidgey!" Falkner angrily said.

Pidgeotto flew at Scout as fast as Scout was running towards him. The two Pokemon collided and they both flew back. Max squinted his eyes trying to think of what to do, because he knew he would have to use combinations.

"Scout use Quick Attack and then Fury Swipes!" MAx ordered.

"Use Gust, then Ariel Ace!" Falkner replied.

Scout quickly dashed at the Pidgeotto, who was flapping a bunch of air at her, She withstood it and leapt at Pidgeotto, and clung on to his back. Pidgeotto quickly flew about, trying to shake Scout off of him.

He then began to normally fly, and Scout let go and sarted scratching him furiously. Pidgeotto flipped out and lew down, sending Scout flying off of him. Scout did a front flip in midair and then landed on her feet.

"Now jump up with Quick Attack!" Max quickly said before Flakner could counter it.

Scout jumped in to the air, doing side twirls and slammed herself in to Pidgeotto. Pidgeotto flew up in to the air and then back down to the floor in a heep. Dust flew everywhere.

"Quickly get in there and use Fury Swipes!" MAx said not taking a chance.

Scout dashe din there and started scratching the Pidgeotto everywhere. Finally, the dust settled and Scout was panting in front of a knocked out Pidgeotto. Max had won!

"Yes! We won our first Gym Battle in the Johto Region!" Max said.

Falkner returend his Pidgeotto and tossed Max a coin looking thing. Max looked down at it.

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"That's the Zephyr Badge. IT's proof of you beating me, and oh! Take thhis as well." Falkner tossed Max a TM.

Max looked at the back and saw that it read 'Ariel ace'. Max looked up to thank Falkner, but he was nowhere to be seen.

END
Sorry it's not my best work with a gym...